K.W.C.E. - Writer Assistance Thread

[godzillafan1954]

Ever need some helpful information but can't find it? Is a mere description not adequate enough to compliment your writing style and you do not have the time to watch every movie you need to? Well have no fear as this thread will solve your problems. Basically if you have a question that needs to be solved for the KWC ask it here. Personally this thread is exactly what I wished for when researching Zone Fighter so I hope it helps tremendously. Anyway, to the rules!

Guidelines:
1. Answer the question asked, do not judge, mock or infuriate the recipient.
2. If you have a question about the actual KWC, go to the KWC FAQ. This is more for like monster's motives, traits, characteristics or actual human characters.
MY EXAMPLE - What is the character of Goro Ibuki (Jet Jaguar's Inventor) like?
3. Try to keep your questions to the point.

Bet you didn't think of this, KaijuX!

[Coobzilla03]

This will be especially useful considering all the non-Godzilla guys.

[KaijuX]

Well, there needs to be a reason for the General Discussion thread to exist. But whatevs, lol

[MoarCrossovers]

I'm having some issues determining the correct grammar for some sentences. Look at these examples and tell me which one is correct:

"A beam of thin purple energy ripped through the air."/"A beam of thin, purple energy ripped through the air."

"A powerful golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."/"A powerful, golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."

[godzillafan1954]

I'm having some issues determining the correct grammar for some sentences. Look at these examples and tell me which one is correct:

"A beam of thin purple energy ripped through the air."/"A beam of thin, purple energy ripped through the air."

"A powerful golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."/"A powerful, golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."

I'm not sure, but I think it's the second (for both).

[DinoMaster]

In terms of grammar? It's the second one, technically.

[MoarCrossovers]

In terms of grammar? It's the second one, technically.

Technically? Elaborate.

[RamshackleRanger]

In terms of grammar? It's the second one, technically.

Technically? Elaborate.

I think he means that the first one sounded better, but it isn't grammatically correct.

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I'm having some issues determining the correct grammar for some sentences. Look at these examples and tell me which one is correct:

"A beam of thin purple energy ripped through the air."/"A beam of thin, purple energy ripped through the air."

"A powerful golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."/"A powerful, golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."

The second for each. When placing two adjectives together, there should always be a comma in between. For example, "The glimmering, hypnotic shaft of light exemplified the essence of angelic beauty, tranquility trapping the monster's thoughts. That quickly changed to hellacious agony when the katana-like appendage came down lightning quick, gashing his chest wide open and splattering his cold blood over himself and his attacker."

The second sentence was unnecessary but I thought it sounded cool

[DinoMaster]

Technically? Elaborate.

It's a grammar thing, and to be perfectly frank grammar issues like this aren't necessarily the biggest thing we look at in depth normally. At least, not from my end. Might be a higher up thing.

Anywho, I'm in need of a little help. I'm trying to write a match between the Brontosaurus and the '33 King Kong, and I don't have an arena. I was planning on doing it after the events of '33, and the places I had thought of were too young (Area 51 wasn't build till the 50's, Alcatraz was an active prision til the 60's, etc.). So, if anyone has a reccomendation that'd be a little more interesting than the usual city, I'm all ears.

[GodzillavsRayquaza]

Anywho, I'm in need of a little help. I'm trying to write a match between the Brontosaurus and the '33 King Kong, and I don't have an arena. I was planning on doing it after the events of '33, and the places I had thought of were too young (Area 51 wasn't build till the 50's, Alcatraz was an active prision til the 60's, etc.). So, if anyone has a reccomendation that'd be a little more interesting than the usual city, I'm all ears.

Skull Island maybe?
Or, since it takes place after 33, and Kong is dead at that point, you could set the match in hell or some other afterlife setting?
Or maybe just a random forest...

[RamshackleRanger]

How about the Brazilian plateau from the lost world? You could even have an interaction between Kong and the ape men. Then again, I'm not sure how Kong would get there...

[GodzillavsRayquaza]

What is the catalyst for Zetton going EX? Or just the catalyst(s) for monsters going EX in general?

[MoarCrossovers]

What is the catalyst for Zetton going EX? Or just the catalyst(s) for monsters going EX in general?

They have to be controlled by a Reionic or be exposed to Dark Thunder Energy.

[MoarCrossovers]

Can Spideros actually fire an energy beam? Because it never demonstrates such an ability in the footage that I can find.

[DinoMaster]

So, it's been awhile since I've brushed up on my Showa lore, but Showa Godzilla is a prehistoric creature awoken by the atomic bomb tests, correct? I was thinking of writing a match with the fella, but I wanted to check on it.

[MoarCrossovers]

So, it's been awhile since I've brushed up on my Showa lore, but Showa Godzilla is a prehistoric creature awoken by the atomic bomb tests, correct? I was thinking of writing a match with the fella, but I wanted to check on it.

That was the origin for 1954 Godzilla. Showa… I don't think it's really explained where he came from. He and Anguirus just show up. Since he is the same species as '54, I would not say it would be inaccurate to give him the same origins as his predecessor.

Edit: Yep, Godzilla Showa and Anguirus were awoken by hydrogen bomb testing.

[MoarCrossovers]

How does Burtannus' electric current power work? Is it a beam-like attack or does it require physical contact?

[GodzillavsRayquaza]

How does Burtannus' electric current power work? Is it a beam-like attack or does it require physical contact?

It is a beam.

[shippersdreamer]

Would it be alright if I explained that Jirass had some Godzilla DNA in him? Considering that he looks almost identical to Godzilla and I think he was created instead of naturally born, I think it'd make sense.