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eabaker wrote:
Zarm wrote:
eabaker wrote:
So, like, you bailed back in '79?

Ah! But the ships were still recognizable.
Ah, okay. Wouldn't know, because basically all vehicles look alike to me.
Are you car blind like I am? Some people seem to be able to pick out car brands and models just by looking at them, and my expertise extends to “that’s a truck, that’s a van, etc.”
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KaijuCanuck wrote:
eabaker wrote:
Zarm wrote:

Ah! But the ships were still recognizable.
Ah, okay. Wouldn't know, because basically all vehicles look alike to me.
Are you car blind like I am? Some people seem to be able to pick out car brands and models just by looking at them, and my expertise extends to “that’s a truck, that’s a van, etc.”
Yup, I'm pretty much right there. I still don't really understand the word "sedan."
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eabaker wrote:
KaijuCanuck wrote:
eabaker wrote:
Ah, okay. Wouldn't know, because basically all vehicles look alike to me.
Are you car blind like I am? Some people seem to be able to pick out car brands and models just by looking at them, and my expertise extends to “that’s a truck, that’s a van, etc.”
Yup, I'm pretty much right there. I still don't really understand the word "sedan."
Me too! Tis a vague, amorphous concept.

OT: currently watching ‘Parallels’ from TNG. Worf’s delivery of that one line. “-and then we mated”. Priceless. :lol:
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KaijuCanuck wrote:
eabaker wrote:
Zarm wrote:

Ah! But the ships were still recognizable.
Ah, okay. Wouldn't know, because basically all vehicles look alike to me.
Are you car blind like I am? Some people seem to be able to pick out car brands and models just by looking at them, and my expertise extends to “that’s a truck, that’s a van, etc.”
That's how it is for me, too.
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MandaSaurus wrote:The new Klingon Bird-Of-Prey looks like some sort of dilapidated tent, not a space ship! :mad:
Which can cloak, despite cloaking being an unknown, theoretical possibility when first encountered in Balance of Terror. :mad:
Actually, the invisibility cloak is now reality. It was demonstrated by a scientist a few years ago. The principle involved is the same as a mirage - there's no "light-bending" involved, just reflection.

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MandaSaurus wrote:
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MandaSaurus wrote:The new Klingon Bird-Of-Prey looks like some sort of dilapidated tent, not a space ship! :mad:
Which can cloak, despite cloaking being an unknown, theoretical possibility when first encountered in Balance of Terror. :mad:
Actually, the invisibility cloak is now reality. It was demonstrated by a scientist a few years ago. The principle involved is the same as a mirage - there's no "light-bending" involved, just reflection.
Well, sure- but can it hide you from Federation sensors? :)

(Even the Romulan cloak in TOS couldn't do that, so the Klingons had an even better one. Mind you... Discovery isn't the only trangressor there; Enterprise also gave the Romulans functional cloaking devices 100 years early, before the Earth-Romulan War, which would probably have resulted in the Archer-era Earth being utterly annihilated, because they were so not ready to fight on that level.)

Basically, issues like that- and the tension between real-world developments and TOS' established technology (and creators' unwillingness to ever respect the latter in favor of the former) is simply why Star Trek prequels are a bad idea in general. :)
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Just finished Generations, and I definitely want to make a much longer post of observations in the next few days... but one thing in particular struck me this time around.

This was a bad choice of movie to kill off Kirk, considering the way that its structured. Because he's absent from so much of the film, and so many emotional things happened to Picard in the interim, by the time Kirk returns, the audience is no longer attached to him. It's not his movie anymore. He feels like a guest star, an interloper- almost an intruder, in an emotional sense, vying for the spotlight from Picard's emotional journey. It has become very much Picard story, and Kirk doesn't really have a place there anymore.

So what should be Kirk's grand, final adventure on Veridian III, and the culmination of the emotional connection we made with him at the beginning of the film, instead feels more like a third wheel, artificially and arbitrarily grafted onto what was a fairly complete and closed story, emotionally and structurally- one with no room for him in resolving the established conflict between the protagonist and antagonist that have shared screen time, conversation, and even moments of emotional connection. Kirk, who's never even met the man, feels inorganic and inappropriate to resolving this conflict... as if in the end of The Wrath of Khan, as the ships are flying around through the Mutara Nebula, Yeoman Rand just showed up on a Federation battlecruiser to blow away the Reliant and resolve the conflict between Kirk and Khan. After everything we've invested in seeing the two of them repeatedly match wits, seeing the situation resolved by a third party that hasn't been a part of this story for quite some time just doesn't feel right.
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Zarm wrote:Just finished Generations, and I definitely want to make a much longer post of observations in the next few days... but one thing in particular struck me this time around.

This was a bad choice of movie to kill off Kirk, considering the way that its structured. Because he's absent from so much of the film, and so many emotional things happened to Picard in the interim, by the time Kirk returns, the audience is no longer attached to him. It's not his movie anymore. He feels like a guest star, an interloper- almost an intruder, in an emotional sense, vying for the spotlight from Picard's emotional journey. It has become very much Picard story, and Kirk doesn't really have a place there anymore.

So what should be Kirk's grand, final adventure on Veridian III, and the culmination of the emotional connection we made with him at the beginning of the film, instead feels more like a third wheel, artificially and arbitrarily grafted onto what was a fairly complete and closed story, emotionally and structurally- one with no room for him in resolving the established conflict between the protagonist and antagonist that have shared screen time, conversation, and even moments of emotional connection. Kirk, who's never even met the man, feels inorganic and inappropriate to resolving this conflict... as if in the end of The Wrath of Khan, as the ships are flying around through the Mutara Nebula, Yeoman Rand just showed up on a Federation battlecruiser to blow away the Reliant and resolve the conflict between Kirk and Khan. After everything we've invested in seeing the two of them repeatedly match wits, seeing the situation resolved by a third party that hasn't been a part of this story for quite some time just doesn't feel right.
Interesting point. I haven't seen this in a long time, and I'm trying to remember why I liked it so much and why it resonated with me - I watched all of the Star Trek movies together in a row, over the course of a few weeks. When I watched Generations, I was already six movies deep, and had become really accustomed to the TOS crew generally, and Kirk more particularly. So I was seeing it more through that lens of this very long, albeit loose, ongoing story. So to me it didn't seem strange when Kirk just showed back up. It almost felt like a return to normal after having been introduced to an entirely new cast (at this point in time, I hadn't seen any Star Trek TV at all).

But you definitely make great points, and obviously the Trek movies, unlike say Star Wars, are each meant to be much more contained than viewed as part of an ongoing saga. Perhaps if I watched it again now, divorced from a marathon of all the Trek films, I'd feel similar to you.
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Ironically, I am watching this is part of a marathon of Star Trek films. It's been about 3 days since we watch Star Trek 6, but we have been following that story.

For me, it's not that Kirk doesn't feel like he belongs in the story, generally... it's just that by the time the card reaches him in the Nexus, it doesn't feel like his story anymore. He's not the central protagonist, because Picard's highly emotional story has so successfully been communicated to us and taken center stage, and we've followed him through so many emotional twists and turns, and seen every connection and debate and personal stake with the villain center solely around Picard, that it's not Kirk's show anymore.

I mean, Sarek didn't feel like he didn't belong in the story reentering it at the end of Search for Spock, after he'd been there in the beginning. But if, after Kirk has stolen the Enterprise and then been forced to destroy it and then they're on the Genesis planet, as he was standing over the body of his dead son, suddenly Sarek just showed up, beamed down, fought the Klingon commander in hand-to-hand combat and defeated him, and then beamed everybody up and flew them away to Vulcan, it probably wouldn't have felt very organic. Because even though Sarek was a part of the story, having been featured in it earlier, and had a connection to the story because of Spock and because of his previous appearance in the ongoing series of Star Trek lore, it wasn't really his story at that point. The conflict was very personal between Kirk and Krudge. We've been following Kirk's sacrifices, Kirk's loss, Kirk's emotional moments and quest. If Sarek had just reappeared and been integral to the resolution of the plot, it would have felt as if it took something away from the resolution of the conflict between Kirk and his very personal nemesis that had taken things away from him, and detracted from the resolution of Kirk's story in which he had already suffered so much and been so vulnerable and raw in front of the audience.

I feel like that is what happens here with Picard. Even though Kirk is a part of the story because of his place in the ongoing mythos, and even a part of this story at the beginning of it, by the time he returns later in the movie, we are so involved in Picard's story that Kirk doesn't really have a place in it any longer, in an emotional sense. And trying to switch gears to making this his story and his emotional farewell, after he's been disconnected for so long, just doesn't feel like it belongs, to me.
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So, generations. Generations is… frustrating to me. I don’t hate it, as I do Nemesis, and I would put it above both that film, Into Darkness, and depending on my mood, Insurrection… but it is hard to watch, because almost every scene is a missed opportunity.

With Star Trek V, I can see the good movie in it, marred by some excesses and poor choices. I think you could trim/effects-upgrade Star Trek V into a good movie (with a few flaws, like Shatner’s manic performance, still present).

With Generations, by contrast, I can see where a good movie ought to be, but isn’t. I can see the spaces it could have been, or was, before it was changed. And that’s just painful to watch.

First off, the opening in the Enterprise-B. Not bad; there’s something strange about the feel of these scenes, to me (maybe it’s just the mid-90s filming), but I like the characters and the humor. The effects are mixed- the Nexus ribbon looks cool, but it fails to establish he geography. I have no idea where the transport ships and Enterprise are, when we see them against a sea of orange fire, in comparison to the ribbon-and-trail as we see it from a distance (and we can’t see the transport ships during the approach either), so there’s a bit of a disconnect. But overall, I have few complaints here.

My main distraction is that this was so clearly written for Spock and McCoy, with a find-replace sed to change this to Scotty and Checkov when the actors refused, and only a token effort to replace lines. Consider the following, and tell me these exchanges weren’t written specifically for them:
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MCCOY: Captain. ... Excuse me. ...I'd like you to meet the helmsman of the Enterprise-B. Demora. ...Ensign Demora Sulu.
DEMORA: It's a pleasure to meet you, sir. My father's told me some ...interesting stories about you.
KIRK: Your father is Hikaru Sulu?
DEMORA: Yes sir.
MCCOY: Oh, you've met her before, when she was...
KIRK: It wasn't so long ago. ...It couldn't have been more than....
MCCOY: Twelve years, Jim.
KIRK: Twelve years?
MCCOY: Absolutely.
KIRK: Incredible. Congratulations, Ensign. It wouldn't be the Enterprise without a Sulu at the helm.
DEMORA: Thank you, sir.
MCCOY: I'm sure Hikaru must be very proud of you.
DEMORA (OC): I hope so.
(Swapped a Sir for a Jim, but otherwise…)

Then…
KIRK: Sulu. When did he find the time to have family?
MCCOY: Well like you always say, if something's important, you'll make the time.
(Kirk takes a second glance at the Captain's chair)
MCCOY: Ah, so that's why you seem so restless. Finding retirement a little lonely, are we?

And…
KIRK: Take us out.
(the crew breaks out into general applause)
SPOCK: Very good, sir.
MCCOY: Brought a tear to my eye.
KIRK: Oh, be quiet.

HARRIMAN: ...Well, then, ...I guess it's up to us. Helm, lay in an intercept course and engage at maximum warp.
DEMORA (OC): Aye sir.
SPOCK: (to Kirk) Captain, is there something wrong with your chair?
DEMORA: We're within visual range of the energy distortion, Captain.
HARRIMAN: On screen.
MCCOY (OC): What the hell is that?

DEMORA: Sir! The starboard vessel's hull is collapsing...
MCCOY (OC): How many people were aboard that ship?
DEMORA (OC): Two hundred sixty-five.

HARRIMAN: Beam them directly to Sickbay.
LIEUTENANT (OC): Aye sir.
MCCOY: How big is your medical staff?
HARRIMAN: The medical staff ...doesn't arrive 'til Tuesday.
MCCOY: (mutters in Russian) (to journalists) You and you and you. You've just become nurses. Let's go.
(Sure, they added in the muttering in Russian; that’s it, though. Otherwise, clearly written for McCoy).

SPOCK: Their life signs are ...are phasing in and out of our space-time continuum.

MCCOY: You're going to be all right. We are going to help you. We are going to help you.
JOURNALIST #2: It's okay. Everything is fine.

MCCOY: Can I help you?
GUINAN: It's going to be okay.
MCCOY: You'll be all right. You just need to rest. Come over here.

SPOCK: There's just no way to disrupt a gravimetric field of this magnitude!
LIEUTENANT: Hull integrity at eighty-two percent.
SPOCK: But I do have a theory.
KIRK: I thought you might.
SPOCK: An anti-matter discharge directly ahead might disrupt the field long enough for us to break away.
KIRK: Photon torpedo?
SPOCK: Aye sir.
SCIENCE OFFICER: We're losing main power.
KIRK (OC): Load torpedo bays, prepare to fire on my command.
DEMORA: Captain, ...we don't have any torpedoes.
KIRK: Don't tell me. ...Tuesday.
LIEUTENANT: Hull integrity at forty percent.
SPOCK: Captain, it may be possible to simulate a torpedo blast using a resonance burst from the main deflector dish.
(Probably change ‘there’s just no way’ to ‘there is no way’, but other than that- clearly Spock, especially ‘I have a theory’/’I thought you might’.)

HARRIMAN: Activate main deflector.
SPOCK: We're breaking free.
(Probably ‘we are’ for Spock)


DEMORA: Sections twenty through twenty-eight on decks thirteen, fourteen ...and fifteen.
SPOCK: Bridge to Captain Kirk. ...Captain Kirk, please respond. ...Have Doctor McCoy meet me on deck fifteen.
[Enterprise-B corridor]
MCCOY: My God... Was anyone in there?

Each of them either specific to McCoy and Spock, or generic enough to be either. By contrast, the only lines that I can see that were written custom to the characters actually in the movie are:
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CHEKOV: I was never that young.
KIRK: No, ...you were younger!
SCOTT: Damn fine ship if you ask me.
KIRK: Scotty, ...it absolutely amazes me.
SCOTT: What would that be, sir?


LIEUTENANT: Sir, I'm having trouble locking onto them. They appear to be ...in some sort of temporal flux.
KIRK (OC): Scotty?
SCOTT (OC): What the hell.
SCOTT: Their life signs are ...are phasing in and out of our space-time continuum.
KIRK: Phasing? To where?
NAVIGATOR: Sir! Their hull's collapsing!
KIRK (OC): Beam them out of there, Scotty!
SCOTT: Transport complete. ...I got forty-seven ...out of one hundred fifty.


KIRK: Scotty! Keep things together until I get back.
SCOTT: I always do.
LIEUTENANT Forty-five seconds to structural collapse!
SCOTT: Bridge to Captain Kirk.
KIRK: Kirk here.
SCOTT (on intercom): I don't know how much longer I can hold her together!

Plus Scotty’s ending ‘Aye’.
…And even then, a few of those I could still see fitting with only a minor change of phrasing, I’m just giving the benefit of the doubt.

Now, would this movie have been better with Spock and McCoy? I don’t know. Scotty works well for this role (despite the continuity issues with Relics), at the very least, and Walter Koenig gives a fine performance. A more emotional moment with Kirk’s closest friends? Quite possibly. Either way, I’m fine with Scotty and Checkov… if they rewrite all the lines so they sound like Scotty and Checkov. As it is, some of these (Kirk expecting ‘Scotty’ to have a theory, ‘Checkov’ recruiting nurses, and some of the banter around Kirk’s order to take the ship out and inability to stay in his chair) are just so obviously written for the originally-scripted characters that I find it distracting.



So, then we move onto TNG, and the promotion scene. And… it’s not bad. There’s some nice interaction, it’s good to establish the ‘family’ feel of the TNG crew. But realistically… it is a bit slow. Kills the pacing a bit. (Plus, I don’t know what’s wrong with Geordie; that absolutely was funny. :) )

The biggest problem here isn’t what’s there- although it could’ve used a little bit more energy for its placement in the story, or to go on just a bit shorter. But the real problem is what it replaced. The original script, before one of the producers asked for something lighter, had a scene set aboard the Amergosa Observatory, with a couple of bored officers, a sudden attack by Romulan Warbird- and then, as the station begins to come apart under the bombardment, the Eneterprise-D swooping in to the rescue and driving off the Romulans; seen primarily from the outside. And you know what? The film needs this. Badly. Because, as one reviewer put it, it would show the TNG crew as ‘heroic counterparts to Kirk’; worthy successors. Like Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade, or a few of the MCU films; when the end is a pyrrhic victory or incomplete quest, give the heroes an early win so that you still get to see them have one.

Because here’s the thing- the TNG crew are a bunch of incompetents and failures here. They spend the whole movie getting deceived, outmaneuvered, defeated, and failing. They are taken in by Soran. Data is compromised. They don’t rescue Geordie or apprehend Soran. They don’t detect the Duras sisters’ subterfuge. They are badly beaten by an inferior starship and deploy no good tactics to counter (more on this later). They don’t save the Enterprise- either half. Picard fails to stop Soran or save 213 million people or the Enterprise crew; he fails, and everyone dies. It’s only with Kirk’s help that the TNG crew are able to accomplish anything; and really, that’s only Picard pushing a few buttons after Kirk has done the hard work of beating up Soran AND risking himself to get the control pad. (And I guess Riker got his ionic pulse victory; but again, there are problems with this, to get to later).

I get that it’s not that kind of story… but we never see the TNG crew as heroes in this. Most of the time, they’re chumps and pushovers. They lose, over and over. Kirk is an action hero; Picard and crew get defeated and let everyone die, and need a do-over to save the day.

The Amergosa rescue scene could’ve made a huge difference; and a jubilant, successful Enterprise crew could still have some sort of celebration introducing them afterward, if they still needed to include it, at which Picard gets bad news; Soran, aboard, could even have confronted himimmediately after, heightening the raw wound. However they did it… the TNG crew needed that win, and didn’t get it.

No complaints for the next stretch of movie; good stuff for Data and Picard’s arcs. The plot thickens; a good sequence on Amergosa, and in Stellar Cartography. Instead, a general complaint:
The Enterprise look.

Don’t get me wrong; I get it- for some reason, the makers love the gloomy, moody, you’d-want-to-kill-yourself-if-you-lived-here-but-it-looks-cool-on-screen look; heck, Ronald Moore wanted the Enterprise to always look this way when he saw it in Yesterday’s Enterprise. And lacking confidence in the TV-quality sets and their detail, they wanted to underlight to hide the lack of details.
But it doesn’t look right. We just spent 7 years seeing how the Enterprise-D looks. Its homeliness was a part of its appeal; it looked like a place you could live without going crazy. It was inviting. To try and foster that sense of community with eh promotion scene, then have the Enterprise so stark and cold and uninviting afterward, creates a tonal clash. It is confusing to fans of the series, because it looks wrong- and it makes no sense. This isn’t a new movie Enterprise, it’s the same one from the show… and it makes no sense for it to suddenly be an ugly, dark cave when we know how it’s supposed to look.

…Anyhow, back to the movie. Things get dicey again with the Duras’ attack. Because it’s just badly written. Firstly, the Enterprise has experience, from fighting the Borg years back, with rotating their shield frequency. It’s a reasonable tactic to try when your shields are getting bypassed; instead of trying nothing. Secondly, we’ve seen the Enterprise defeat Birds of Prey before; this one is supposed to be older and even less in shape. Even if it is blasting through the Enterprise’s shields, the Enterprise should be able to annihilate it in the time it takes them to come up with the ionic pulse plan. Instead, we see the try the phasers once, then give up, and never try photon torpedoes (though a full spread could probably have taken out the ship, shields and all). They have phaser strips and aft torpedoes, so it’s not like they had to make a choice between running and fighting- and there was no mention of either being offline. So it just makes them look incompetent that they just sit there and get pounded. And the ionic pulse bit also takes way too long; we’ve seen how long cloaking takes. The Bird of Prey could have decloaked and raised shields, or easily performed an evasive, by the time the torpedo got there.

In short, it was a badly-written battle; a few token lines about systems being disabled by the sneak attack, or showing them firing back and giving as good as they got, could have helped; ideally, a bigger ship (like a Vor’cha) would’ve been good, or a second prototype that can fire while cloaked. Anything to give the Klingons an edge. As it is, this feels like a Vietnam war PT boat taking down a battleship, who just sits there with the crew waving their arms in the air and screaming “Auuggh!” like Charlie Brown instead of shooting back with any of their big guns.

And then the warp core breach; not only does it feel arbitrary (five minutes, and there’s nothing I can do- it is both slow, and inevitable), but they didn’t even give us the cliched ‘warp core ejection is offline’ (which it never should be) bit, giving the impression that they didn’t even try. Because ejecting the core and flying away would’ve saved the whole ship. Once again, a single line could’ve established that they couldn’t; instead, Riker immediately choosing to evac the star drive once again makes him look incompetent, risking everyone and destroying the whole Enterprise needlessly.

Nemesis- and Data’s death- have the same problem; the TNG films are repeatedly harmed when they contrive a desperate situation by ignoring capabilities they have repeatedly demonstrated that could get them out of it. If you’re going to hang the destruction of a beloved starship or character or massive crisis on a situation, you need to make that situation a little more bulletproof by your own rules. It’s not like every situation has to have slavish continuity to every episode and idea in the show; but when you kill off something major by saying “it’s the only way!“, you need to make sure it’s actually the only way. As it is, these aren’t even Fridge Logic problems; they’re problems obvious while watching the movie itself, at least to the experienced Trekkie. And they’d be so easy to fix, too.

The arrival of the Nexus and destruction of the planet is good stuff. Although I would also have liked to see a few cutaway scenes of the culture on Veridian IV. Because right now, Picard fights and Kirk dies for an abstract concept- ‘213 million people’ is just a series of words. Seeing some brief glimpses of their civilization, a few people interacting, would put an emotional and physical face on an abstract concept- help us to understand what Kirk is dying for, what Picard is fighting for. Another missed opportunity.

The Nexus stuff isn’t bad. It also feels like it drags a teensy bit, but there’s a lot that’s good there. The primary issue, for me, is just the Kirk lack-of-connection that I mentioned earlier (and thus, won’t reiterate here), robbing a lot of this of the power it deserves. Seeing Kirk as a stubborn oaf who doesn’t care about Picard’s problems- which we, the audience, have just seen the impact of and have a connection to- doesn’t help the audience estrangement. Now, if Kirk was the one to show up and talk Picard out of wanting to stay in the fantasy, that could’ve gone a long way toward balancing the emotional scales.

Still, their conversation on the horses is a great scene.

And then, the biggest plot hole of them all; the entire final fight. All of time and space, why would you ever choose to insert yourself into the worst possible moment, giving yourself no time? Why not, as my wife said, just pop back into Ten Forward, in orbit around the Amergosa star, and call security to arrest Soran? Even the most convoluted ‘temporal prime directive’ explanations simply don’t make this make sense. Picard’s still changing history; why not change it with a little more certainty and a little less desperation?

And honestly… Kirk’s death is not that satisfying. I mean, he does have a good moment; but again, the stakes aren’t clear, the circumstances feel arbitrary… it’s not the blaze of glory the character deserved. As a moment of sacrifice, it wasn’t terrible, but… it wasn’t what the film or the character needed. And even the writers admit they were just trying to come up with something, using the existing sets they had as a budget limitation, that could replace their awful first try.

I do have a proposal on that, which I’ll stick in spoiler quotes for any interested.
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What I’d like to see is Picard and Kirk making a much more Star Trek-y choice; to try and avert all the pain and suffering the Nexus has caused, they are going to head events off at the pass. Picard and Kirk appear… on the bridge of the Enterprise-B. This time, Kirk takes command right away, diving the Enterprise-B into the ribbon; generating some technobabble field that will serve as a shield- and allow the two refugee transports to break free. It works, and the transports pull away- but the Enterprise has thrown itself into guaranteed destruction. As the ship starts to take damage, sparks flying and the hull buckling, Kirk calls everyone into shuttles and escape pods. Harriman, Checkov, and Scotty object, but Kirk and Picard beam them onto the departing transport ships.

With he Enterprise-B serving as a disintegrating shield, the pods and shuttles are likewise making their escape. The bridge is falling apart; girders falling, bundles of wires exposed, a fire broken out; like the end of Yesterday’s Enterprise, Picard and Kirk man a dying bridge, in full agreement- the Nexus is a wondrous place, but too dangerous to man. The Nexus Ribbon, the gateway to it, needs to be closed. This is beyond Federation science- but from within, in the power of the Nexus, it would be as simple as making a wish. But that’s a one way trip; there would never be a way to leave the Nexus again.

As they approach the event horizon in the dying ship, Kirk bids Picard to leave, but Picard refuses- they’re in this together, to the end. But Kirk has been in the Nexus much longer than Picard, and is more attuned to its power- here, on the periphery, he taps into it, makes his wish- and over Picard’s objections, Picard vanishes, back to the 24th century.

Leaving Kirk alone on the bridge of the Enterprise, in the captain’s chair. The ship is bucking and rocking, a shambles; if the budget allows, the front wall is gone (as with Nemesis); only a forcefield stands between Kirk and the raw energies of the Nexus. With controls re-routed to the chair-arm controls, Kirk rides the dying Enterprise into the Nexus in one final blaze of glory, even as the ship comes apart all around him; the camera pushes in on his face, at peace, where he belongs for the end, as everything goes white-

From the outside, as the Enterprise-B disintegrates, one nacelle strut breaking off, the Engineering hull imploding like a crushed beer can, the ship raked by lightning, it plunges into the ribbon- and in a blinding flash of light, the Ribbon collapses in on itself, and vanishes. Space is quiet, and empty.

On the El Aurian refugee ships, Harriman, Checkov, and Scotty stare in shock and sorrow. Once again, Kirk is a legend; saving lives and somehow destroying the menace to the spacelanes- going down with the ship. As they commiserate with one another and begin to mourn, the camera pans over to where one of the refugees, Tolian Soran, huddles, embracing his family (or, if the authors prefer them to have been killed in the Borg attack, his fellow refugees, including Guinan)- grateful and relieved to have survived the ordeal. He will never become a monster; even if the Nexus still haunts him, there is no way to pursue it; he’ll go on to a better future.

On the wrecked bridge of the Enterprise, Picard appears, much to everyone’s surprise; a few lines from Riker (“We stopped the Duras sister, at the cost of the Enterprise, Captain. We don’t know what the sisters had planned with stolen Romulan trilithium, but it looks like their research didn’t get very far…”) to indicate that the timeline has been changed, with none but Picard any wiser.
From then on, the epilogue is the same as in the finished film.
But the basic summation of Generations is… it could have been great. With a few relatively minor changes, even. But it’s a pastiche of missed opportunities and frustrating choices that make the heroes look like saps and feels very contrived overall.


Now, as a balance- things I love about this movie:

The score is great.

Kirk’s run to deflector control and frantic rewiring; great music, great sense of energy and action, great performance from Shatner that sells the urgency despite relatively limited, indecipherable actions occurring in the scene itself. He sells it, makes it feel pivotal and urgent.

The ‘I hate this’ scene, and the look of the sunlit Ten Forward. Also, Malcom McDowel’s performance in this scene.

The Enterprise-D model shots look great.

The arrival of the Duras sister’s- from Picard’s delivery of “…What?” to the wonderful shot of the ship decloaking and swinging around. In fact, this entire sequence, from the arrival on the bridge up through the Enterprise warping out as the station shatters, giving a wonderful sense of the shockwave’s power.

‘Human females are so repulsive.’

The saucer crash sequence itself is stupendous. Likewise, Soran entering the Nexus and the destruction of Veridian III were good.

Kirk’s actual final moment, that moment of preparation and jumping the gap for the control pad, is very well done.

The ending effects of the shuttle and the crashed Enterprise-D saucer, and the final shot of the film. (A terrible tragedy that a goodly portion of the Enterprise crash survivors probably died before they got home, as the Oberth-class starship being used to transport them was almost certainly destroyed en route. Because that’s just what Oberths do).
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Prelude to Axanar looks better than Discovery...

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MandaSaurus wrote:Prelude to Axanar looks better than Discovery...
Oh, heck yes- that thing is amazing. I really, really wish we'd gotten that as a series instead. Tony Todd's speech alone gives me chills...
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I finally saw The Wrath Of Khan last Saturday. I know now why this is considered so good.

Acting, sets, SFX, plot, the tense action scenes, musical score, character development, it's all top notch. Ricardo Montalban steals every scene he's in as Khan. You can tell that he's clearly enjoying the role. I really thought at times that he would succeed in destroying the Enterprise. And while he failed to kill Kirk, his actions resulted in Spock's death so he did get a fair amount of revenge even in death. Amazingly, in spite of that, the movie ends on a semi-upbeat note, since Spock's actions did save the crew and them remembering him ensures that his death was not in vain. And Kirk reuniting with his son was touching.

The only slightly downside is that I wish a bit more time had been made about if Project Genensis was worth Man playing God or not. However, the rest of the movie is so good, that it more then makes up for that.

It's truly one of the best sci-fi movies ever made and one of the best movies that I've ever seen.


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Rhedosaurus wrote:I finally saw The Wrath Of Khan last Saturday. I know now why this is considered so good.
Just curious, did you watch the theatrical cut or the director's cut?
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MikeSTZillak wrote:
Rhedosaurus wrote:I finally saw The Wrath Of Khan last Saturday. I know now why this is considered so good.
Just curious, did you watch the theatrical cut or the director's cut?
The theatrical cut. How is the director's cut different?

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Rhedosaurus wrote:
MikeSTZillak wrote:
Rhedosaurus wrote:I finally saw The Wrath Of Khan last Saturday. I know now why this is considered so good.
Just curious, did you watch the theatrical cut or the director's cut?
The theatrical cut. How is the director's cut different?
There are a few added scenes with Scotty's nephew (the trainee that dies in sickbay), primarily.
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Zarm wrote:
Rhedosaurus wrote:
MikeSTZillak wrote: Just curious, did you watch the theatrical cut or the director's cut?
The theatrical cut. How is the director's cut different?
There are a few added scenes with Scotty's nephew (the trainee that dies in sickbay), primarily.
Interesting. I got the theatrical one on Saturday. I'll consider getting the director's cut.

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Zarm wrote:
Rhedosaurus wrote:
The theatrical cut. How is the director's cut different?
There are a few added scenes with Scotty's nephew (the trainee that dies in sickbay), primarily.
Interesting. I got the theatrical one on Saturday. I'll consider getting the director's cut.
The major draw of the Director's Edition cut, which I can confirm, having just watched it last week, is that it is a much better, much sharper Blu-ray transfer than the one that came before. I wish they would go through and give that much attention to a better transfer of all the Star Trek movies on Blu-ray.
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Thought I'd let you guys know that CBS is bowing to fan pressure( and poor ratings, no doubt )by getting back to basics, design-wise, on the second season of Discovery. Some of the YT blog-runners say so, anyway. I hope it's true...

CBS is to blame for the problems with Discovery, basically giving the show-runners and writers carte blanche to do whatever they WANT to do. Stuff like totally re-imagining the Klingons - their appearance AND their tech! WHO wanted that? No one who's a fan, certainly. And I thought J.J. Abrams had gone a bit far. Ha! Nothing compared to what Discovery was going to unleash! :mad:

Supposedly, we'll actually be able to recognize a D-7 Cruiser AS a D-7 Cruiser in S2. That'd be nice. Instead of constantly having to say, 'What's that?'

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Attempts by CBS to wrangle out of the lawsuit have failed, it seems...

Judge Orders Discovery on Discovery.
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