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Godzilla 1995
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| Showa Gyaos wrote: | | Quite a gory chapter. Now that action is a part of the story, I'm even hungrier. 10/10 |
I'm rather intense with my violence, as you might have noticed.
Now, does anyone have an idea as to who the kaiju is?
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| Godzilla 1995 wrote: | | Now, does anyone have an idea as to who the kaiju is? |
Um....here are my guesses.
- Legion
- Orga
- The Cloverfield Monster
- Destroyah
- SpaceGodzilla
- Barugaron
I don't think SpaceGodzilla is the gory type, but Idk.  |
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Godzilla 1995
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| Posted: Sun Jul 26 2009 6:26 PM Post subject: |
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| Showa Gyaos wrote: | | Godzilla 1995 wrote: | | Now, does anyone have an idea as to who the kaiju is? |
Um....here are my guesses.
- Legion
- Orga
- The Cloverfield Monster
- Destroyah
- SpaceGodzilla
- Barugaron
I don't think SpaceGodzilla is the gory type, but Idk. |
Wrong on all six guesses. Take a look at the description of the monster.
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Six eyes and necks. And it can fly.
*coughsixeyeswithtwoeyesperheadandtwotimesthreeequalssixendcough*
WHERE'S MAH MONEY?
And more importantly, why are there such massive - and apparently non-uniform - spaces between all your paragraphs? Stick to one space and bold every new date/time set, it makes it easier and cleaner. 
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Godzilla 1995
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| HyperGFreak wrote: | | And it can fly. |
Not yet.
| Quote: | | And more importantly, why are there such massive - and apparently non-uniform - spaces between all your paragraphs? Stick to one space and bold every new date/time set, it makes it easier and cleaner. |
If I want to show a change in area and an extreme difference in time, I give bigger gaps, but besides that, sure, I'll do what you said.
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Showa Gyaos
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| Godzilla 1995 wrote: | | HyperGFreak wrote: | | And it can fly. |
Not yet.
| Quote: | | And more importantly, why are there such massive - and apparently non-uniform - spaces between all your paragraphs? Stick to one space and bold every new date/time set, it makes it easier and cleaner. |
If I want to show a change in area and an extreme difference in time, I give bigger gaps, but besides that, sure, I'll do what you said. |
Okay, then. Is the monster from the Toho universe?  |
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Great story, you have a great plot going so far!  As for the mystery kaiju is it desghidorah??
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