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Advent of Chaos is sort of a masive crossover between various sci-fi and anime universes. Various beings from various universes have to team up against a mysterious, deadly enemy, who himself is armed to the teeth with beings from various continuities.
If you have read my fanfic, please comment and discuss! 
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Any comments, suggestions or criticisms?
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Chapter 1: Crash Landing is up!
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…lawl. Terror of Mechagodzilla meets Star Wars meets Transformers. Nice. Got a good kick or two out of Vader’s and Sidious’s antics, as well as the good General’s arms falling off. Bad idea to mix Katsura and chicks in general with anything Transformers related after the secksfest that was Bayformers, if you ask me…so where’s my thong scene? Where’s Yoda?
And most importantly, if we have purple-and-white lasers from an index finger, do we get THE BURNING FINGAAAAH next?
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| Posted: Mon Oct 26 2009 9:04 PM Post subject: |
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Thanks for the comment. Well, the felt that my other crossover didn't have a straight plot, so I decided to make a crossover which i had already decided most of the charcters and much of the plot.
| Quote: | | And most importantly, if we have purple-and-white lasers from an index finger, do we get THE BURNING FINGAAAAH next? |
Actually, the Purple laser from a finger was from a real character. (I didn't watch the Anime, so I'm not sure what colour the laser was) 
Also, have you guessed what the skin of the Xenos and FPs are? 
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Chapter 3: Meeting is out!
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Jesus christ, the way you're going on about Sidious, the next thing you know he'll be asking Anakin for a manicure. The ever-present and useful parasite mind-controlling villain is essential for any crossover, of course, just to bring the combat together...
...we have Grand King Ghidorah? ...give us FW Xilians, naow. The Xilian Leader and Vader teaming up in black suits with force telekinesis spam, to the former's and Sidious's temper tantrums is imagery to die for.
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Wellllllll.....I am going to have a little problem including Xilliens. The main character cast (most of them ) has already appeared, after all. I will try to pop him in, though.
| Quote: | | The ever-present and useful parasite mind-controlling villain is essential for any crossover, of course, just to bring the combat together... |
Were you referring to the Symbiote or the Slime? Both are important to storyline in their own way, though.
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Chapter 4: Analysis is out!!!!
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Chapter 5:Face-off is out!
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I smirked when Gozer appeared, and I continued to stifle a grin throughout the rest of chapter 5. The sheer imagery of Vader, Grievous, Black Hole Aliens and s**tload of Transformers fighting against her is just simply quite epic. I'm particularly enjoying the inaccuracy and absurdity of your characters' bickering throughout the most absurd combat and serious sequences...while it does break the flow in some cases, it reminds me of my own writing, and a light-hearted, slapstick tone has always been to my liking. I do recommend that your characters, in their banter, maintain their original speech patterns for greater effect; for example, I would really picture Darth Vader or Grievous giving much more...refined or less elaborate and profane cracks. >.>
Was an excellent, chaotic crossover battle in the last chapter, though. Funny as hell end, though I do wish they had come up with something much more absurd instead of a giant, destroying orb...how about a fifty-foot Jar Jar Binks or something? 
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| Quote: | | Funny as hell end, though I do wish they had come up with something much more absurd instead of a giant, destroying orb...how about a fifty-foot Jar Jar Binks or something? |
Hey, why didn't I think of that!?
Anyway, thanks!
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Chapter 6: Bad Guy is out!
Speaking of Bad Guys, you might notice that besides the Autobots, all the 'protagonists' are really iconic villains.
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Chapter 7: Guh! is out!
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