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Postby GodzillavsZilla » Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:11 pm

This is a discussion board for my Mortal Kombat fanfic. Enjoy and feal free to ask any questions. Enjoy. :)
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Postby King Caesar » Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:12 pm

A little confusing and brief, but not horrible. I'll keep a eye on this.
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Re: Mortal Kombat: Rebirth discusssion thread

Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:20 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:This is a discussion thread for my Mortal Kombat fanfic. Enjoy and feel free to ask any questions. Enjoy. :)


Will there be any lesbians in this?

But any way onto my review. It was good, a little short nice to see Shao Kahn kick some ass. Also I'm confused on this part

"He must win." Raiden said to the jewel.


Was he a typo because I'm sure Raidan doesn't want Shao Kahn to win but correct me if I'm wrong.

But good story so far and hopefully see more long chapters to this story.
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Re: Mortal Kombat: Rebirth discusssion thread

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:25 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:
GodzillavsZilla wrote:This is a discussion thread for my Mortal Kombat fanfic. Enjoy and feel free to ask any questions. Enjoy. :)


Will there be any lesbians in this?

But any way onto my review. It was good, a little short nice to see Shao Kahn kick some ass. Also I'm confused on this part

"He must win." Raiden said to the jewel.


Was he a typo because I'm sure Raidan doesn't want Shao Kahn to win but correct me if I'm wrong.

But good story so far and hopefully see more long chapters to this story.


GvJ :shock:! Maybe.

You'll have to wait to see what I have in store for this fanfic. ;)
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:28 pm

Alright looking forward to this and hoping to see some Reptile.
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Postby pta917 » Tue Aug 07, 2012 12:07 am

This reminds me of the mortal kombat game.
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Re: Mortal Kombat: Rebirth discusssion board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Thu Aug 09, 2012 8:05 pm

New chapter's up. Get ready for done more action next chapter. :mrgreen:
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Postby pta917 » Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:24 pm

It's good. whens Scorpion going to appear???
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Postby GodzillavsZilla » Fri Aug 10, 2012 9:01 am

pta917 wrote:It's good. whens Scorpion going to appear???

Patience. Scorpion will appear and kick some ass soon.
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Postby pta917 » Fri Aug 10, 2012 9:06 am

GodzillavsZilla wrote:
pta917 wrote:It's good. whens Scorpion going to appear???

Patience. Scorpion will appear and kick some ass soon.




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Re: Mortal Kombat: Rebirth discusssion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Aug 10, 2012 1:18 pm

Still hoping for Reptile to appear soon and still looking forward to the Lesbians you promised us :P

But anyways good chapter dude and hope to see more soon. :D
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Postby pta917 » Fri Aug 10, 2012 1:20 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:and still looking forward to the Lesbians you promised us :P



Lesbians??? :shock: 8-)
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Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sat Sep 22, 2012 5:01 pm

New chapter's up. Possibly more of Reptile and some of the characters' backstories next chapter. :mrgreen:
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Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 22, 2012 6:53 pm

This could've been expanded on...all the scenes probably (except Shang Tsung's youthification) could've had their own chapters. But, it's all good. Nice job, GvZ.
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Postby pta917 » Sat Sep 22, 2012 10:06 pm

Its good and I liked the ending with Reptile.
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