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http://www.tohokingdom.com/forum/viewto ... =18&t=9923

Yeap you now what to do lol and actually the prolouge is a two parter...

UPDATE: The second part is up and now you know some back story to what happend at Hollows Point (from Exitium) or maybe i brought up only more questions? WHo was the four men? WHo was the commender talking too??

Well you just have to wait and find out 8-)
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An interesting prologue... Though one wonders when familiar faces will show up again...
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Oh yes, they will again shortly lol and forgot to mention...ah actually nevermind might give something away..
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Ok the first chp is up. It will be a two parter as a lot happens lol so enjoy
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How DARE they take away both Kanna and Wens! THeir flesh shall rot from their bodies!
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haha dont worry flygon, Kanna is about to have a shinning moment shortly 8-)
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*deep inhale* DAMMIT GOJIRA STOP POSTING PARTS SO DAMN FAST! I CAN'T EVEN READ ONE WITHOUT YOU POSTING ANOTHER!! RAAAAAAAAWWWR!!!

*exhale*

...slow the skreeonk down. >_< lol
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Poor KC... as a fat blue hedgehog once so infamously said, "Your too slow!"

lol J/K!
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Lol my bad man!! its all this free time i have! i cant keep my mind of the story 8-)
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Wish I could say the same for TKFA Goes on Vacation, ever since I started sign-ups for TKFA 4Ever, I haven't been able to focus on 3. So many good ideas for the next one, but I can't do anything until I finish Vacation!
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Lol i understand KC, thankfully many of my volunteer stuff do not start till mid june and july so i have plenty of time to organize my ideas 8-)
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Ah ha! I have read all three parts. Interesting story you got going there. :) I like it, but you do have a lot of sentences that require semicolons.
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yea that seems to be my biggest weakness lol the elusive semicolon haha thanks though ill pay more attention to that
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Chapter 2 is up! I decided to make the second part of chp1 chp2 because it wound up being so long! o_O...i honestly not execpt it to be that long and promise there wont be anymore that long lol

Now what i had orginally wanted to happen did not come out as well as i had hoped...i kept rewritting it to try and make fit but it proved difficult as it would have been confusing (although it still might be) But ohwell enjoy! 8-)
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Kanna kicking ass and taking names = good chapter.
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Yes indeed Flygon i was hoping to get more kick assery with her but it only would have dragged out the chapter more than needed lol but Kanna will get plenty of time to shine in this story 8-)
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Next Chapter is up, as a new character is brought into the plot and kudos to Grehshot954 for the idea. Enjoy! 8-)
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