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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:31 am

Thank you Caesar, and yes your character is introduced in the prt2 of chp 4 lol which ill be putting up in just a few minutes
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby MothraRocks » Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:40 am

You're back!


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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:43 am

Yes im back!!! lol for now!

and Part 2 of Chp4 of Exitium is now up for reading p leasure
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Tue Mar 27, 2012 3:12 pm

Ah yesssss... It's been quite a long time, since I sent in those character suggestions, and seeing them now in fruitation... brings a smile upon my face...
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Mar 27, 2012 3:52 pm

Nice chapter dude! Really like where this going and i would love to see more zombies in it.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:09 pm

Flygon King wrote:Ah yesssss... It's been quite a long time, since I sent in those character suggestions, and seeing them now in fruitation... brings a smile upon my face...


Yeap, and your two characters both play a pretty important role in this and i would have like to have more of it completed but other more pressing issues have called my attention away. But glad im bringing smiles!

@GvJ Dont worry man, there will be plenty of zombie action coming up soon
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:10 pm

And Part 1 of Chapter 5 is up also for viewing pleasure
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:18 pm

And the floodgates have burst forth!

Um, could you please resend me the info that I sent you way back? I'd like to make a few... clarifications about some things...
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:19 pm

Yea, no problem Flygon ill get those to you in a sec
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby kikomia » Thu Mar 29, 2012 2:25 am

Aww yeah. Welcome Back Gojira21. Nice job on the chapters. I'm gonna enjoy killing me some zombies.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Thu Mar 29, 2012 6:06 am

There's always that one idiot on every team that just has to get attacked. What a clichè. :lol: Great job, Gojira. And beautiful work on my character. I'm such a badass.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Mar 29, 2012 11:21 am

Lol yea, i have to have atleast one cliche! and your welcome and your character will only get better he becomes a pretty big character in the story...hence remember he said he has a "debt" lol

@Kikomia thanks man, its good to be back and your character will get his fair share of zombie killings lol
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Thu Mar 29, 2012 11:51 am

Lol yea, i have to have atleast one cliche! and your welcome and your character will only get better he becomes a pretty big character in the story...hence remember he said he has a "debt" lol


Ah, I love foreshadowing! And great description btw. I forgot to mention that in the first comment.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Mar 29, 2012 11:53 am

Yes, but the 'Debt' is not directly connected with the actually plot of the story or not in this one;)...but it winds up becoming pretty important later down the line and thanks, im trying to get better at that lol and think im doing decent job
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:01 pm

You are. :) This is probably one of the better Fan Fics that's in progress right now.

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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:04 pm

Why thank you KC lol and so have new fic coming soon huh? well ill just have to step my game up 8-)
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Mar 29, 2012 5:30 pm

And Chp5 part 2 is now up!
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Thu Mar 29, 2012 5:56 pm

Bad news: Briggs died

Good news: He didn't get eaten to death. He just bled out.

I don't think I could even begin to imagine a worse death than being eaten alive by the undead. It's truly one of the worst deaths that exists. :| Anyways, great work as usual!
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Thu Mar 29, 2012 6:09 pm

Believe me, there are worst ways to go... Like pissing off your girlfriend who happens to be the Goddess of Heaven... Just let that sink in for a moment...

Anyways, Chapter 5 was good... Briggs dying was an unfortunate event, but it's okay, he'll be back as one of the undead... Keep up the good work! I expect great things from Chapter 6...
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Mar 29, 2012 6:11 pm

Thats a good point, lol Briggs did get off easy...but...his dead corpse might make an appearence later in the story, who knows!!...and never said no-one wouldnt get eating alive...>_> but thank you for the review!

@Flygon That actually does sound pretty bad o_O but thank you also and well Chp6 is sort of dull but Chp 7 gets a lot better
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