The Big One Discussion.

[gigandude]

O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway

Thank you very much.

Orga's definitely turning a real beast.

What was Nu mean?

[Venom 2009]

I enjoy both Chapters 10 and 11!

I was surprise to see Orga was back, and it looks like he is becoming a super monster!

Keep up the great work!

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

I enjoy both Chapters 10 and 11!

I was surprise to see Orga was back, and it looks like he is becoming a super monster!

Keep up the great work!

Thank you very much.

I decided to bring Orga back since I love the big guy.

I've got big plans for him too.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Hope you guys like the new addition.

[Kiryu2012]

Next up, battle of the Ghidorahs! I've always wanted to see this happen...

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Next up, battle of the Ghidorahs! I've always wanted to see this happen...

Hope I make it outstanding.

[gigandude]

O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway

Thank you very much.

Orga's definitely turning a real beast.

What was Nu mean?

i think its a short version of Nooooooooo.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway

Thank you very much.

Orga's definitely turning a real beast.

What was Nu mean?

i think its a short version of Nooooooooo.

The second time that someone said that.

[Venom 2009]

Hope you guys like the new addition.

I was hoping to see Grand King Ghidorah in this battle, and here he is!

Can’t wait to see the fight between the two King Ghidorahs!

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Here it is.

The Duel of the Ghidorahs.

Enjoy.

[King Caesar]

And King Ghidorah has left the building. Pretty good battle, I must say. I liked how KG actually held his own pretty well, all thugs considered.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

And King Ghidorah has left the building. Pretty good battle, I must say. I liked how KG actually held his own pretty well, all thugs considered.

I really wanted the battle to be interesting.

I really hate one-sided fights.

Glad you liked it.

What else did you like?

Just wondering.

[King Caesar]

What I liked: Both King Ghidorah & Grand King Ghdorah used their abilities to their fullest potential. I always hate when a power is left out or disregarded...well, not always, but in most cases.

What needs improvement: Figurative language. Check up on that stuff. It's important as you advance in writing (I'm still trying to work on it...)

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

What I liked: Both King Ghidorah & Grand King Ghdorah used their abilities to their fullest potential. I always hate when a power is left out or disregarded...well, not always, but in most cases.

What needs improvement: Figurative language. Check up on that stuff. It's important as you advance in writing (I'm still trying to work on it...)

I know, right?

Every power a monster has should be used.

Just added a little more to the post.

I still feel like I need help with my writing.

Thank you for bringing that up.

[King Caesar]

You're welcome. And like I've said a thousand times before, there's no treasure at the end of the rainbow that is writing. But that's not to say that it isn't fulfilling. Heck, writing has been my favorite past time for the last two years. It's only getting better too. And my goal is to help out others who are writers as well. Schools don't put enough focus on writing IMO. It makes me so made I want to kick them in the face!!


/rant

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

You're welcome. And like I've said a thousand times before, there's no treasure at the end of the rainbow that is writing. But that's not to say that it isn't fulfilling. Heck, writing has been my favorite past time for the last two years. It's only getting better too. And my goal is to help out others who are writers as well. Schools don't put enough focus on writing IMO. It makes me so made I want to kick them in the face!!


/rant

How did you do that with the video clip?

Also, agreed.

I actually took a few good writing classes in college.

Lucky me, I guess.

That's a great goal you made there, my friend.

I agree with you too.

Writing shouldn't be about ego. It should be about fun.

[Kiryu2012]

Loved this chapter. I'm actually suprised how well King Ghidorah lasted against Grand King Ghidorah.

[MothraRocks]

Dude, AWESOME addition! Loved Orga's part, and the battle of the Ghidorahs. And yes, I second that schools don't focus enough on creative writing.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Loved this chapter. I'm actually suprised how well King Ghidorah lasted against Grand King Ghidorah.

Thank you very much.

Glad you loved it.

Although, I might add a few more parts to it.

I had some ideas to it I forgot about.