King Caesar wrote:Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:Enjoy the new post.
The post better come with sprinkles. The rainbow ones. *checks post, glares at Saw* No sprinkles. *cocks shotgun*
But, all kidding aside, i was impressed. Like how it's more than just punch-punch-jab-jab. There are calmer parts and good introductions to monsters (ie Sanda, Gaira). Good work
As always, your comments never cease to help me out.
Still, I felt that parts of my story seem a little rushed.
Which areas do you feel could use some work?