The Big One Discussion.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Enjoy the new post.

The post better come with sprinkles. The rainbow ones. *checks post, glares at Saw* No sprinkles. *cocks shotgun*

But, all kidding aside, i was impressed. Like how it's more than just punch-punch-jab-jab. There are calmer parts and good introductions to monsters (ie Sanda, Gaira). Good work

As always, your comments never cease to help me out.

Still, I felt that parts of my story seem a little rushed.

Which areas do you feel could use some work?

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Awesome, Gamera and Gyaos have joined the fray

Pretty soon, two more monsters will enter the fray.

[King Caesar]

Truthfully, Saw, I don't know how else to help. Maybe consider the use of effective figurative language more often, or at least when trying to describe something. That's honestly all I can think of

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Truthfully, Saw, I don't know how else to help. Maybe consider the use of effective figurative language more often, or at least when trying to describe something. That's honestly all I can think of

Thank you for the help, KC.

Now if you'll excuse me, I have some things to fix.

[Venom 2009]

Wow! This fight is going to get bigger as the Tachyon race are going to enter the battle!

Keep up the good work!

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

You guys wouldn't mind if I gave each chapter its own title, would you?

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Wow! This fight is going to get bigger as the Tachyon race are going to enter the battle!

Keep up the good work!

I'll do my best.

Thank you very much and enjoy the rest of the show.

[King Caesar]

You guys wouldn't mind if I gave each chapter its own title, would you?

No, not at all. Go ahead and do what you wanna do.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Okay, I'll start labeling my chapters.

Also, enjoy the next part.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

This newest twist is special for you, Mothrarocks.

Hope you like it.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Hope you guys like the new post.

[Venom 2009]

Hope you guys like the new post.

Awesome Chapter!

Now we got the Tacyhon race and the Gyaos species in the battle!

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Hope you guys like the new post.

Awesome Chapter!

Now we got the Tacyhon race and the Gyaos species in the battle!

Thank you.

It's going to be grand.

Grand indeed.

[Godzilla1703]

Nice part but Gomora, NOOOOOO

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Hey, guys.

Just wanted to tell you that you're a great audience and love the fact you like my writing.

Really makes writing much more fun.

I'm taking a small break from this story for awhile.

Got to get some school stuff done.

Will be back soon.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Here's a new post.

Will be the last one for awhile.

I'll continue it soon.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Well here's some more and another post.

Me personally, the final part of the post is one of my favorite sections of the story.

Hope you guys like it so far.

[SpanishBulldog63]

Damn,Orga's turning into quite the badass.i can't wait to see how that progresses.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Damn,Orga's turning into quite the badass.i can't wait to see how that progresses.

Oh it will be a big surprise.

I personally can't wait to get to it.

Hope it will be great.

I decided to bring him back since I like him.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Enjoy the next part.

Be warned: it's not for the faint of heart.