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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Godzilla1703 » Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:04 am

Sweet I can't wait till we get back to Space-Godzilla
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Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:21 pm

Godzilla1703 wrote:Sweet I can't wait till we get back to Space-Godzilla


Hope you enjoy this next part, my friend.

Made it special for you. :twisted:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Godzilla1703 » Mon Mar 12, 2012 5:01 pm

DAAAAAAAMN, Space-Gojira's a boss
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Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:30 am

Godzilla1703 wrote:DAAAAAAAMN, Space-Gojira's a boss


Yes, he is. :twisted:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Tue Mar 13, 2012 2:33 pm

Well, here's the next post.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby King Caesar » Wed Mar 14, 2012 6:35 am

Hedorah turned to face Monster X and Megalon. It gurgled towards the other orbital terrors with his arms waved in the air. Gigan stepped to stand next to his allies. The trio knew taking on this beast will be deadly after they witnessed it make short work of the powerhouse that was Biollante.

That bolded sentences has two things wrong with it. 1) Improper use of "wave". It should be "waving" and 2) orbital? I didn't know that Monster X and Megalon orbited the earth...hmm

/nitpick

But nice work. I like how this is going. I just wish this had human plot (don't go and change it; it's just a personal gripe, not a critical one)
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Godzilla1703 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 8:19 am

Nice way to take out Kumonga
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby King Caesar » Wed Mar 14, 2012 9:12 am

Godzilla1703 wrote:Nice way to take out Kumonga

Agreed. In all honesty, I didn't see it coming. But it was a pretty memorable death, and a good one for my favorite arachnid.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:37 am

King Caesar wrote:
Godzilla1703 wrote:Nice way to take out Kumonga

Agreed. In all honesty, I didn't see it coming. But it was a pretty memorable death, and a good one for my favorite arachnid.


Thanks guys.

I had plans to do a Jet Jaguar VS Kumonga match where this is how Kumonga meets his end.

However, I decided to take all of my ideas and put them in one story.

Also KC, thanks for the heads up on my grammar errors.

Will fix them.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:59 am

King Caesar wrote:
Hedorah turned to face Monster X and Megalon. It gurgled towards the other orbital terrors with his arms waved in the air. Gigan stepped to stand next to his allies. The trio knew taking on this beast will be deadly after they witnessed it make short work of the powerhouse that was Biollante.

That bolded sentences has two things wrong with it. 1) Improper use of "wave". It should be "waving" and 2) orbital? I didn't know that Monster X and Megalon orbited the earth...hmm

/nitpick

But nice work. I like how this is going. I just wish this had human plot (don't go and change it; it's just a personal gripe, not a critical one)


I have big plans for the next part.

I want it to be a surprise, but I hope you will find it interesting.

I'm also glad you liked how Kumonga dies.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 12:09 pm

Well, here's the new post. Enjoy.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Godzilla1703 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 12:22 pm

Cool but kinda weird, why is Ghidorah on monster island
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 12:52 pm

Godzilla1703 wrote:Cool but kinda weird, why is Ghidorah on monster island


I probably forgot to mention this, but when the Tachyons killed the evil Futurians, they ceased control of their monster, King Ghidorah. The one that was created from the Dorats.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Godzilla1703 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 1:12 pm

Oh, but when i read it it sounded like Ghidorah lived on monster island because it said he lead the monsters
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 5:23 pm

Godzilla1703 wrote:Oh, but when i read it it sounded like Ghidorah lived on monster island because it said he lead the monsters


Oh, sorry about the confusion. :oops:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 5:38 pm

Well, I fixed up a little loose end.

Hope you'll enjoy it.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Godzilla1703 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 5:40 pm

nice fixen
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 5:41 pm

Godzilla1703 wrote:nice fixen


Thank you. :D
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Venom 2009 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 6:17 pm

Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:Well, here's the new post. Enjoy.


Wow! A lot of monsters are going to join the battle! :shock:

Great Chapter! :D

Can’t wait to see what happens next with the monsters’ battle. :huge:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 7:33 pm

Venom 2009 wrote:
Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:Well, here's the new post. Enjoy.


Wow! A lot of monsters are going to join the battle! :shock:

Great Chapter! :D

Can’t wait to see what happens next with the monsters’ battle. :huge:


Oh, it's gonna be big. And great.

I'll work on it tomorrow afternoon. After I finish a few things.
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