Ultraman & Gamera: POTL&U discussion

[gigandude]

Well it seems i kinda lied about Ultraman and Gamera being on hiatus I've been thinking about this story all day and when i got to get my laptop out i started typing like a madman so far i enjoy how its coming out ^^. funny thing is i didnt even plan to have a series with ultraman and gamera but here we are.
Please discuss if you like it or if it needs inprovement I'll take advise.

Charecters
Orga sejin: unknown only thing we know is that he hates ultraman
Kondou Junichiro: the host of ultraman, 17 years old, he's bisexual, stands at 6'1 he has a nice set body carefree but when the earth is in trouble he starts caring.
more to come ^^
Elixer: He is the smartarse of the group but works on garuda 2 and makes the weapons most of the time
Amber: she is the is smart one and computer expert.
Hikari: he is the leader of the space patrol and wise he sometimes think kondou is ultraman.

Daikaiju
Ultraman(duh)
Gamera(duh)
King Kong
Bemular
Aboras
Banila
gezora
Ebirah
And many more ^^

A cookie to the person who finds out whos in the other rocket and whos the beings monsters are.
Also the prelude was suposed to be kinda quick so i didnt rush into the story like my others T.T

Edit!!!
OMG I completely forgot my timeline
the year is 2014
there will be a prequel to this
-all the gamera films and so has the first gamera have tooken place besides the rest of showa series-
-every godzilla film has happened besides films like gmk and gfw and godzilla vs king ghidorah(H) and DAM-
-ultraman hasnt happened besides ultraQ-
-g-force has disbanned and split into different branchs(NERV(O.O),space patrol,Heat,ect)-

[SpanishBulldog63]

Gyaos?

[gigandude]

nope sorry.

[gigandude]

Chapter 1 is up ^^ your guys thoughts?
and there will be an absense of gamera and ultraman for a few chapters so just enjoy the "random" kaiju rumbles

[King Caesar]

Lots of run-ons that were chronologically incorrect, and not too much in the way of description through figurative language and the five senses...but it was ok

[gigandude]

Lots of run-ons that were chronologically incorrect, and not too much in the way of description through figurative language and the five senses...but it was ok

I know and theres a figur..-remebers bashing my head in-D: I knew i forgot something to get better at damn you caesar!!! XD its better then 90% of my old storys atleast right?

[King Caesar]

Yeah, yeah, I would say you're right there.

[gigandude]

Yea but i still think i was kinda putting more into Zetton vs Ghidorah then this story atm.

[gigandude]

Chapter 2 is up tell me whatcha think

[King Caesar]

Haha that was pretty funny with the whole head rip-off and fountain of blood. Pretty good. Not amazing, but good.

[gigandude]

Thanks next chapter will introduce our heros and something noone thought of to use in a fan fic also should I chose as an aircraft?

Gaurda II
or
Super-X 4?
You pick in the poll!!

[Godzilla1703]

Godzilla Heisei, Jiger, and Zigra

[King Caesar]

I chose Garuda II. I've never really been a fan of the Super X

[gigandude]

sweet im thinking of cutting the days of the poll to seven

[gigandude]

Godzilla Heisei, Jiger, and Zigra

No sorry there not in it please try again ^^

[Godzilla1703]

dammit

[gigandude]

dammit

xD nice try wanna try again?

[Godzilla1703]

lol ok Eleking, Tyrant

[gigandude]

lol ok Eleking, Tyrant

>_> you got one right <_< ^_^x but whitch one ^_^x

The next chapter is gonna be up possibly by tonight or towmarow either way im keeping this train a rolling baby ^^

[Godzilla1703]

Eleking