Gwangi vs series discussion

[Kiryu2012]

What do you guys think so far?

[King Caesar]

Uh...wat? what is this I don't even...

[kikomia]

Nothing. Random.

[Kiryu2012]

I was bored so I made this.

[King Caesar]

It's not really funny...and it doesn't really have coherent...eh, whatever

[Kiryu2012]

Added new chapter.

[King Caesar]

Is this funny? ._. I mean, it might help if I was into MLP. Dunno...maybe Kiko will get a kick out of this.

[kikomia]

Is this funny? ._. I mean, it might help if I was into MLP. Dunno...maybe Kiko will get a kick out of this.

How is this in anyway pony related?

[Kiryu2012]

Added new chapter. New chapter is very good!

[kikomia]

Sorry, but I just don't buy it. It isn't funny. Look at other comedy fanfics and then think about your new chapter. This are just random things put together. You might just say:

Watermelon seven and the moon eat. I just don't buy it.

[King Caesar]

Four parts in one day--less than 7 hours? Please, put some time into this. It's ridiculous

[Kiryu2012]

Added new chapter. *whew*

[Grayshot954]

I read it and all I have to say is ?. Its okay but I don't find it funny. Its hard to make writing funny, I should know. I tried to write a comedic match about Jet Jaguar getting infected per se by Agent Texas' skill set and unleashing him on King Kong, Frankenstein as well as Sanda. It didn't turn out as well as I hoped but I would ask the top writers for tips. This would be like GodzillavsJason, King Ceasar and MothraRocks.

[King Caesar]

C'mon, man! It's Caesar, not Ceasar!

But Gray makes a good point. Humor is hard to convey in writing. The easiest medium to do this in is motion picture, then pictures, then words. There needs to be certain comedic aspects present (a la reoccurring jokes, sarcasm [which must be identified by the writer directly or indirectly], or something off the wall, but not over-the-top). Thus far, this has none of that...

[gigandude]

C'mon, man! It's Caesar, not Ceasar!

You might be a roman so thats why everyone gets you confuzzled XD

[Godzilla1703]

This aint funny its just tryin to add comedy to god-modding

[King Caesar]

^ was ist "god-modding"?

[What is "god-modding"?]

[EX Orochi]

^ was ist "god-modding"?

[What is "god-modding"?]

It means Gwangi can do anything without limits or boundaries.

[King Caesar]

Oooooh...that makes sense. Yeah, I agree with 1703's view then. If there was a plot, or some continuity through it all, maybe I'd give a damn about this, but it's like splattered brains on a wall. Doesn't make sense.

[gigandude]

Yea god modding i kinda liked gwangi but now eehhh