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Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:51 pm

Alright here is the second mini series of my Godzilla series, um not much detail will go into it because i don't want to spoil it but i can give you all this. Miki has Godzilla and Akane investigate Australia because theres some Cult activity on over there and on the way Godzilla finds something that will lead to the Inevitable. So here are the characters and some of them will be kept secret.

Main Characters
Godzilla
Akane
(Secret Character)
Cult Leader

Secondary Characters
Asmodeus
Miki
Moll
Lora
Mothra
Angurius and Mothra Leo might have a very small part in this

Locations
Australia
Infant Island

and thats all the characters and locations so disscuss! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby Flygon King » Tue Feb 07, 2012 3:23 pm

... Let's see what you have up your sleve this time, GvJ...
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby King Caesar » Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:15 pm

...why secret characters? Just why?
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:17 pm

King Caesar wrote:...why secret characters? Just why?


Because they just are King Cesar GAW! :P But really you'll be suprise on who it is. ;)
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Feb 07, 2012 8:58 pm

Okay i've deciceded to make one of the secret characters not secret so go look and find out who's not secret.
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby King Caesar » Wed Feb 08, 2012 3:39 am

Asmodeus, eh? This'll be interesting for sure.
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Postby kikomia » Wed Feb 08, 2012 3:47 am

Lets see how will this turn out.
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Postby MothraRocks » Wed Feb 08, 2012 3:49 pm

This seems interesting, looking forward to it :huge:
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Feb 08, 2012 4:41 pm

Thanks guys i'm glad you're looking forward to it and i'll start working on it when i get the next episode up for Life in TK city.
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:35 pm

First chapter is up! I hope you all like it and the other secret character has been revealed in this chapter. :mrgreen:
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Postby Flygon King » Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:48 pm

... And the devastation begins!

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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:51 pm

Flygon King wrote:... And the devastation begins!

The August Star of Heaven is gonna have alot of fun this fanfict...


Thanks dude I'm glad you liked it and well see if she will have some fun
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Postby MothraRocks » Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:40 pm

Really nice start so far, looking forward to more :)
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:38 pm

MothraRocks wrote:Really nice start so far, looking forward to more :)


Thanks dude i'm glad you liked it. :mrgreen:
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Postby kikomia » Sat Feb 18, 2012 3:16 am

So...Zetton eh?
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Feb 18, 2012 9:45 am

Question: To seperate the scenes. Why not use :


*******

Instead of:

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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:20 am

MothraRocks wrote:Question: To seperate the scenes. Why not use :


*******

Instead of:

////////


That is a good point, i'll use those.
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:30 pm

*facepalm*

Not too bad...but try to limit your use of 'multiple' and 'then'. It's rather an eyesore.
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:31 pm

King Caesar wrote:*facepalm*

Not too bad...but try to limit your use of 'multiple' and 'then'. It's rather an eyesore.


so i see but you know you like it :P

but anyway what did you think of the ending of the chapter?
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Postby King Caesar » Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:39 pm

You said "Do not underestimate twice" ...it was unnecessary. But for the most part, it was good!
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