Short Stories Discussion.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Here's the discussion post where you can tell me what you think about my short stories.

[Kaiju-King42]

A very nice and creative view on the pegend of Atlantis. I like it.
You know, I was almost half expecting Krystalak to appear.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

A very nice and creative view on the pegend of Atlantis. I like it.
You know, I was almost half expecting Krystalak to appear.

Good observation, my friend.

Thank you for liking it. This is like a back-story to what I have planned for these two guys.

[GodzillavsJason]

Awesome stories dude and its great to see your comeback dude! Hopefully you'll continue the story about the two Atlantis heroes.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Awesome stories dude and its great to see your comeback dude! Hopefully you'll continue the story about the two Atlantis heroes.

I have some great ideas for it.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

This next story was something a good friend of mine requested. Enjoy.

[King Caesar]

Dafuq?! That chainsaw is one messes up piece of work. Really, that aw gruesome. Good job, but daaaamn.

“Delivery!” said a mail-person; transporting a large box on a cart.

Semicolon...no. It does not fulfill its purpose. It connect two sentences that are relevant. While the latter is done properly, the former isn't. I know Microsoft Word and stuff is a bitch with semicolons and stuff...

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Dafuq?! That chainsaw is one messes up piece of work. Really, that aw gruesome. Good job, but daaaamn.

“Delivery!” said a mail-person; transporting a large box on a cart.

Semicolon...no. It does not fulfill its purpose. It connect two sentences that are relevant. While the latter is done properly, the former isn't. I know Microsoft Word and stuff is a bitch with semicolons and stuff...

Thank you. Good to hear from you again.

I had this idea for possessed chainsaw for a long time.

[King Caesar]

Yeah, possessed chainsaws are the perfect gore hounds. lol Nice job though.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Yeah, possessed chainsaws are the perfect gore hounds. lol Nice job though.

Funny thing is I couldn't think of the right story to put it in.

Then GodzillaVSJason asked me to do this story for him and I thought why not put it in here?

How's it been going for you?

[King Caesar]

Ok, I just got my iPod back, so I have resumed writing. Other than that, life has been the same old drag it always is...I love it!

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Ok, I just got my iPod back, so I have resumed writing. Other than that, life has been the same old drag it always is...I love it!

That's good news, dude.

My classes start in two weeks. Going to see Underworld: Awakening this weekend.

Things are going pretty good for me.

What are your plans?

[King Caesar]

Nothing of any special sense. Probably gonna hang out with my girlfriend, watch the Twilight Zone, and write. We should probably take this conversation to PM, since it's rather...irrelevant.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Nothing of any special sense. Probably gonna hang out with my girlfriend, watch the Twilight Zone, and write. We should probably take this conversation to PM, since it's rather...irrelevant.

Agreed.

[GodzillavsJason]

That was awesome dude! I liked how you had the chainsaw kill the stupid female actress for Ash, thank you very much dude.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

That was awesome dude! I liked how you had the chainsaw kill the stupid female actress for Ash, thank you very much dude.

Not a problem. Glad you loved it.

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Hope you guys enjoy this one.

[kikomia]

Freddy Krueger reference?

[Saw-U-In-1/2]

Freddy Krueger reference?

I actually didn't watch any Freddy Krueger films when I typed it.

[King Caesar]

Suddenly, the box burst wide open as a pair of giant hands grabbed Natasha! The spoiled bitch screamed as she was pulled inside the box. Everyone gasped and screamed as Natasha’s horrific wails grew louder. All of the party quests then backed away as an eruption of blood belched from inside from box.

Tellin it like it is. That takes balls. Nice work