Alienvspredatorules wrote: Hedorah wrote:
Gawdziller wrote:So incoherent...can't read...and when words get through I see this...
"Feel the pain of ice shards."
I don't drop by the FF section often, but sometimes I pop in when I'm bored. But this...as someone who takes his own writing seriously, this is killing my soul and making me wish I never look at my keyboard again.
Make it go away. Please.
Finally someone who agrees. Kid, please stop, come back and try again when you have some form of writing ability. It's not working out AT ALL! Everyone else is really being too nice to you.
Thats it i try my best & not i stil get yelled at by people on this stie i have great ideas but thanks to i am never going to wirte a fanfic agein NEVER.
Hey man its called "constructive criticsm"...no-one is saying you need to quite writting stories. If you enjoy writting them, dont quite man. The only was you be able to improve is from practice. I was just like you were when was younger, but over time i got better from a multitude of ways: reading others stories, taking advice, et.c. Criticsm is there for a reason to point out what is lacking and what do not need, it proves very useful. Trust me, im still not perfect at writting and really, no-one is.