Godzilla disscussion board

[GodzillavsJason]

^I'm not trying to be rude, but what's that word? The one with 'p'.

I'm assuming he's trying to say Producer.

[Kaiju-King42]

For the record:

This is yelling.

This is downright screaming!

This is a normal inside voice.

This is whispering.

And if you can read this, you don't need glasses.

[MothraRocks]

Oh, ok. And that means...?

[Kaiju-King42]

It helps determine if people are yelling at you or not.

I dunno... long, bad day for me... just bored. And when I get bored, I post random shit at times.

[GodzillavsJason]

It helps determine if people are yelling at you or not.

I dunno... long, bad day for me... just bored. And when I get bored, I post random shit at times.

We all do that sometimes dude.

[MothraRocks]

It helps determine if people are yelling at you or not.

I dunno... long, bad day for me... just bored. And when I get bored, I post random shit at times.

I was talking bout the post before yours

[Gawdziller]

Not you other people that my wirteing can go to hell well lets see them do better.

I agree with you and they shouldn't be giving you hate on your work because I don't see them writing anything so they shouldn't even be posting comments on your stories. thats all i have to say

One minor note here: Once something is made public, criticism is inevitable.

My fanfic days are long over. My writing projects are on my computer, so I can perfect them before I make them public. I criticize it as someone who has been writing for about 12 years and took his time to learn his writing style. While fan fiction is a great way to refine it (it helped me considerably), basic writing skills are also necessary to make it both readable and enjoyable. I'm not going to sugar coat that.

If you wish to continue writing, be my guest. If it brings you pleasure, then nobody should be able to take that away from you. But from what I've read, the only thing I can recommend is paying attention to your English class.

[Kaiju-King42]

(@Mothrarocks)
Oh.

Well in my defence, if you look back to it, it is easy to get confused on who is talking to who.

[MothraRocks]

Oh.

Well in my defence, if you look back to it, it is easy to get confused on who is talking to who.

I know, sorry bout that lol.

[Alienvspredatorules]

Oh, ok. And that means...?

when i took a break from wirteing fanfic i become a fanfic producer i produced my freind's godzilla fanfic seris toho unevisre i was wirteing the 4th when he fired me for tsking too long since that my gramer skills & all that other stuff have dorped

[Kaiju-King42]

I know, sorry bout that lol.

It's okay. Not like it did anything to me.

[Hedorah]

Not you other people that my wirteing can go to hell well lets see them do better.

I agree with you and they shouldn't be giving you hate on your work because I don't see them writing anything so they shouldn't even be posting comments on your stories. thats all i have to say

Lol I have stuff on TK. And what Gawdziller said, once it's out here, it's open for criticism. Now there is a difference between writing one shitty chapter for a fanfic, but after multiple people give you honest advice and you still continue to type up the same thing with the same problems, there is obviously a problem with your writing.

[Alienvspredatorules]

Come on call me what you what to call me

[Hedorah]

Come on call me what you what to call me

If you can't take criticism posting your work online isn't the best option

[Gawdziller]

Come on call me what you what to call me

...

Aaaaaand I've just been weirded out.

[Kaiju-King42]

I don't think he meant it that way.

[Alienvspredatorules]

hes right

[Alienvspredatorules]

You know what i give up i have great idea's after the bad cirtcims i try my best & you people still say very bad things about my wirteing well you know what i am never going wirte a fanfic & post it on this site help you' skreeonk happy

[King Caesar]

Well dude, you gotta take criticism like uh...dying in video games. It blows. I know. You have to understand that writing is an art. It isn't a natural skill that you're born with (usually). Therefore, practice is needed. Some need more than others, but in the end, anyone can be good.

[Berzerkgodzilla]

The story actually gave me a headache. If you used better grammar and most of the tips that many have been giving you, you could get better