Godzilla disscussion board

[Alienvspredatorules]

Helllo & welcome to my mini seris godzilla gurdians of earth's disscussion board

[Gawdziller]

So incoherent...can't read...and when words get through I see this...

"Feel the pain of ice shards."

I don't drop by the FF section often, but sometimes I pop in when I'm bored. But this...as someone who takes his own writing seriously, this is killing my soul and making me wish I never look at my keyboard again.

Make it go away. Please.

[Alienvspredatorules]

well you will not hear that line anymore becasue the snowman is dead & i am sorry

[Kaiju-King42]

A suspiciously similar number of Guardians?

A vaguely similar cast of Guardians?

Each representing their own element?

[MothraRocks]

Dude:

Detail- Use it, or the story is not enjoyable to read, not enough imagery.

Grammar- Please, use it.

Length- Way too short.

[Alienvspredatorules]

Dude:

Detail- Use it, or the story is not enjoyable to read, not enough imagery.

Grammar- Please, use it.

Length- Way too short.

Read the new chatper its longer as for the other stuff i try my best.

A suspiciously similar number of Guardians?

A vaguely similar cast of Guardians?

Each representing their own element?

The reason why the numbers of gurdians might been silmar is becasue i wanted gamera to be in it & i fogot about whats his name the guy with golden sword.
As for the slimar cast of gurdians before i make mnew monster i just look for other toho monsters that are or could gurdians.
As for each representing their own element its a simple idea & i like it.

[GodzillavsJason]

Dude you need the following

Spelling

Detail

Grammer

Length

Use all of those and you'll have a kick ass story.

If you need help; i'll help you just PM me a your next chapter and i'll help you with it.

[Kaiju-King42]

^^It's okay. I'm just kidding around.

[MothraRocks]

Dude:

Detail- Use it, or the story is not enjoyable to read, not enough imagery.

Grammar- Please, use it.

Length- Way too short.

Read the new chatper its longer as for the other stuff i try my best

I was talking about it...

[Alienvspredatorules]

Oh well it was a good picture .

[MothraRocks]

Wait, I'm lost- the pic above, or your story's imagery?

[Kaiju-King42]

I think he means the pic.

[Hedorah]

So incoherent...can't read...and when words get through I see this...

"Feel the pain of ice shards."

I don't drop by the FF section often, but sometimes I pop in when I'm bored. But this...as someone who takes his own writing seriously, this is killing my soul and making me wish I never look at my keyboard again.

Make it go away. Please.

Finally someone who agrees. Kid, please stop, come back and try again when you have some form of writing ability. It's not working out AT ALL! Everyone else is really being too nice to you.

[Alienvspredatorules]

So incoherent...can't read...and when words get through I see this...

"Feel the pain of ice shards."

I don't drop by the FF section often, but sometimes I pop in when I'm bored. But this...as someone who takes his own writing seriously, this is killing my soul and making me wish I never look at my keyboard again.

Make it go away. Please.

Finally someone who agrees. Kid, please stop, come back and try again when you have some form of writing ability. It's not working out AT ALL! Everyone else is really being too nice to you.

Thats it i try my best & not i stil get yelled at by people on this stie i have great ideas but thanks to i am never going to wirte a fanfic agein NEVER.

[Kaiju-King42]

...I'm not yelling.

[Alienvspredatorules]

Not you other people that my wirteing can go to hell well lets see them do better.

[GodzillavsJason]

Not you other people that my wirteing can go to hell well lets see them do better.

I agree with you and they shouldn't be giving you hate on your work because I don't see them writing anything so they shouldn't even be posting comments on your stories. thats all i have to say

[MothraRocks]

...uh, I don't really think people were yelling. Maybe not sweet as a chocolate bar to you, but not yelling.

[Alienvspredatorules]

Maybe i should go back to being a being a full time proucder of fanfics

[MothraRocks]

^I'm not trying to be rude, but what's that word? The one with 'p'.