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Re: JLA: Planet Kaiju Discussion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:41 am

Damn...that was really long, but oh so worth it.

“Right again Kaiju,” said Godzilla, “During that time we were stealing monsters from your team, we developed a dimensional shift monitor and a way to move between them.

Like the Dimension Shifter from Voyage of the Crescent Moons? :lol:
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Re: JLA: Planet Kaiju Discussion Thread

Postby Tim85 » Sun Nov 06, 2011 3:14 pm

My apologizes for the length. The transformation scene was the only spot I could think of that would be a good spot to cut off.

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King Caesar wrote:Damn...that was really long, but oh so worth it.

“Right again Kaiju,” said Godzilla, “During that time we were stealing monsters from your team, we developed a dimensional shift monitor and a way to move between them.

Like the Dimension Shifter from Voyage of the Crescent Moons? :lol:


Really? After I get this story done, I'll have to check that story out.

I've got a question: any comments on Wonder Woman telling The Kaiju that he's lousy in the sack?
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Re: JLA: Planet Kaiju Discussion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Sun Nov 06, 2011 4:03 pm

Poor Kaiju...that's the worst insult someone could give to him. :lol: he should just grow a Manda down there, if you know what I mean. ;) lol
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Re: JLA: Planet Kaiju Discussion Thread

Postby Tim85 » Mon Nov 07, 2011 9:05 pm

Chapter 10 is up!

There it is, the final showdown!

The story's not over yet! I've still got one more chapter and the epilogue to put out, so don't bail on me yet! I'll post them at the same time so the epilogue won't be ignored (not in the same post, they'll be different posts.)
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Re: JLA: Planet Kaiju Discussion Thread

Postby Flygon King » Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:46 pm

Nice... I liked this very much.. I expect great things from you in the future...
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Re: JLA: Planet Kaiju Discussion Thread

Postby Tim85 » Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:16 pm

Chapter 11 and the Epilogue are up!

Chapter 11 comments: Their little talk helps show that without the lasso, Wonder Woman was able to lie and taunt her lover.

Did you guess right to where Kaiju would go before you read his decision?

I loved coming up with the humorous parts: like the discussion between Mothra and Wonder Woman and everyone looking at Diana when Kaiju made his decision.

Epilogue: Not much to say.
It shows the return to business as usual after the big conflict.

Well, that's all folks! I can't believe it's done. What's your final thoughts? Did you enjoy the story as a whole? I hope everyone enjoyed the story. Thank you all for reading my story!
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Re: JLA: Planet Kaiju Discussion Thread

Postby Flygon King » Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:12 pm

A mervelous performance! One that ties in well with canon, and keeps the attention reeled in! Bravo, I say, Bravo... Oh, and Gira liked it as well...
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