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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby King Caesar » Fri Sep 30, 2011 2:35 am

No. That sounds awesome. Seems like it'll be pretty intense. :mrgreen: The idea of the living dead and Black Lanturns is very interesting, and I am excited to see what you can do with it.

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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby Tim85 » Fri Oct 28, 2011 8:19 pm

I thought I would post this here instead of the "Planet Kaiju" discussion thread.

For those who have read the latest chapter, you know that the mind controlled Justice League members are going to fight the remaining non controlled members. While I was thinking about matchups, are there any matchups that you would like to see?

Here's the non controlled members:
Batman
Green Lantern
Black Canary
Hawkgirl
Red Arrow
The Kaiju
FW Godzilla
T:SOS Mothra
Kiryu
Jet Jaguar

Here's the mind controlled members:
Superman
Black Lightning
Red Tornado
Vixen
Gamera 3
Fire Rodan
Showa Anguirus
Mecha-King Ghidorah
Mothra Leo
Rainbow Mothra
Armor Mothra
MOGUERA
Sanda
Godzilla Jr.
FW KIng Caesar

Any suggestions will be considered, but no guarantees of use.
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby King Caesar » Sat Oct 29, 2011 6:05 am

Batman vs Superman
Jet Jaguar vs FW King Caesar [F'ing A!!]

Those are the main suggestions from me, but you're the writer. Not only that, but you're more knowledgeable when it cones to JLA members and their powers.
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby Tim85 » Sat Oct 29, 2011 6:25 pm

King Caesar wrote:Batman vs Superman
Jet Jaguar vs FW King Caesar [F'ing A!!]

Those are the main suggestions from me, but you're the writer. Not only that, but you're more knowledgeable when it cones to JLA members and their powers.



Actually that helped quite a lot. It helped me figure out my matchups. For the first one you said for example: It'll start as Godzilla vs. Superman and then Batman steps in with his Kryptonite Ring to bring Supes down a peg.

How about Jet Jaguar vs. King Caesar and Sanda?

I will tell you, the fights will be like when they were fighting on the Watchtower, I'll touch on parts of the conflicts.
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby King Caesar » Sat Oct 29, 2011 6:56 pm

I like the idea of the furballs facing JJ. That could definitely work. And the fight description is exactly the way I like large-scale battles to be.
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:03 pm

So, for my Pokémon Adventures, I'm debating on how to do the gym battles; I'm not sure if I should make all three guys do different battles, or the gym leader makes a deal or what.

Any ideas?
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby King Caesar » Sun Oct 30, 2011 1:13 pm

Tough call...I really like the idea of one individual in the group to fight a gym leader though. (cuz you know what I'm thinking, right? *cough* Sabrina and me!) :P
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby King Caesar » Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:21 pm

TKFA Christmas Special question! Should Cesar start off in EPCOT, take the monorail to Magic Kingdom and then go to Space Mountain, or should he just start off in Magic Kingdom?
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby Godzilla599 » Tue Nov 08, 2011 2:47 pm

Guess who's back!!!
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King Caesar wrote:The monster really depends on your taste.



I wanna let the fans decide again. It's fun! :D


So no double chunk chocolate chip and MM's cookie for you King Caesar. :twisted:
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby King Caesar » Tue Nov 08, 2011 3:34 pm

...uh...shoot, kid, I totally forget. -_- But welcome back anyways! Lol
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Nov 08, 2011 3:39 pm

Godzilla599 wrote:Guess who's back!!!


something about you rubs me the wrong way.
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby King Caesar » Tue Nov 08, 2011 4:43 pm

Way to jump the gun GvJ. If it irks you, he doesn't seem to be a frequent poster...or you could just put him on your ignore list. I don't see anything he's done wring to justify your training for doing that, but whatev. What is is
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby Gexistentialist » Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:50 pm

Problems I'm having with The Monster King...
-Plotting
-Characterization
-Research
-Writing badass action scenes.
-Comedic repartee.

That's about all I can think of right now. I'm dealing with a bunch of crap in my life at the moment, and I haven't made much progress on my other pet project.
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby EX Orochi » Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:52 pm

I'm a bit late but...

Godzilla599 wrote:Guess who's back!!!


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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:56 pm

King Caesar wrote:Way to jump the gun GvJ. If it irks you, he doesn't seem to be a frequent poster...or you could just put him on your ignore list. I don't see anything he's done wring to justify your training for doing that, but whatev. What is is


Erm...this is awkward...
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby King Caesar » Thu Nov 10, 2011 9:05 pm

Gexistentialist wrote:Problems I'm having with The Monster King...
-Plotting
-Characterization
-Research
-Writing badass action scenes.
-Comedic repartee.

That's about all I can think of right now. I'm dealing with a bunch of crap in my life at the moment, and I haven't made much progress on my other pet project.

:| So basically the entire thing?
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Nov 10, 2011 9:08 pm

Gexistentialist wrote:Problems I'm having with The Monster King...
-Plotting
-Characterization
-Research
-Writing badass action scenes.
-Comedic repartee.

That's about all I can think of right now. I'm dealing with a bunch of crap in my life at the moment, and I haven't made much progress on my other pet project.


what kind of research because if its just Godzilla then that should be easy for you because Toho Kingdom and theres plenty of movies of Godzilla and the other monsters' acts or something like that. basically Godzilla research is easy
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby Tim85 » Thu Nov 10, 2011 9:30 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:
Gexistentialist wrote:Problems I'm having with The Monster King...
-Plotting
-Characterization
-Research
-Writing badass action scenes.
-Comedic repartee.

That's about all I can think of right now. I'm dealing with a bunch of crap in my life at the moment, and I haven't made much progress on my other pet project.


what kind of research because if its just Godzilla then that should be easy for you because Toho Kingdom and theres plenty of movies of Godzilla and the other monsters' acts or something like that. basically Godzilla research is easy


It may be something non-Godzilla related. It took me a considerable amount of research of the JLA and the DC universe in general, which took up a LOT of time, which is why "War of the Kaiju" took so long to get done.
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby Gexistentialist » Fri Nov 11, 2011 6:31 am

I want my fanfic to have an air of realism to it, in regards to military procedure, education, politics, history... It's like a Metal Gear Solid game; despite the bullshit, there exists plausibility. How would the Japanese government react to years upon years of monster attacks? What's Ichiro's school life like? What is his curriculum? How would the military handle what they know is going to be a losing battle with Godzilla? How would the presence of giant monster affect the timeline as we know it?
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Re: The Fan Fic Help and Advice Thread

Postby Gexistentialist » Sun Nov 13, 2011 3:47 pm

Any website that can help, besides Wikipedia?
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