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Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Sun Oct 23, 2011 7:13 pm

Alrght, while im still working on Godzilla: Salvation (IM sure you all are very excited about that story) ill preview another G story i had started working on a while back with the first chapter! And if it goes over well then maybe ill post the next that i had typed up before my other series

enjoy! and discus 8-)
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby King Caesar » Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:12 am

Dark, evil, and well-written. 8-) Solid, Gojira21.
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 11:16 am

Thank ya 8-) that what im going for in this one lol
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 3:53 pm

Oh and chp 3 is up now fyi
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:11 pm

I read the first two chapters and wow this blew my mind. you've done great with the character development i mean with like Annie just struggling with her life after her parents died was just really good character development! :mrgreen: Also i'll read the third chapter latter but this is really good. :mrgreen: it gets a 10/10. really good work.
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:44 pm

Thanks man! Lol tht what ive planned for this one, i want good strong character development and a darker tone to the story. Plus im going to make a very aggressive, gritty GOdzilla.
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:45 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Thanks man! Lol tht what ive planned for this one, i want good strong character development and a darker tone to the story. Plus im going to make a very aggressive, gritty GOdzilla.


yes i can't wait to see more of this and i know what weapon x is.
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:50 pm

Ah but good sir, Weapon x is in Godzilla: salvation. your getting your stories mixed up! lol
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:51 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Ah but good sir, Weapon x is in Godzilla: salvation. your getting your stories mixed up! lol


oh shit wrong one. *Slowly walks backwards out of this topic
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:52 pm

Haha, its cool man. It happens, but good sir, and didnt i already tell you what weapon x was? Or was that KC?
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:53 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Haha, its cool man. It happens, but good sir, and didnt i already tell you what weapon x was? Or was that KC?


yeah you told me its..... (Censored)
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:08 pm

Lol alright i couldnt remember, and ill give a little tease at what instore...and old enemy from BigG's pass returns, we find out something about Miki AND Xerox, is Kumoi really dead...and something else (possibly) but im keeping a tight lid on that one :)
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:09 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Lol alright i couldnt remember, and ill give a little tease at what instore...and old enemy from BigG's pass returns, we find out something about Miki AND Xerox, is Kumoi really dead...and something else (possibly) but im keeping a tight lid on that one :)


I know who weapon x is lol and Miki and Xerox are long lost siblings i bet! or they had a one night stand! :P
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:11 pm

Hmmmm you just have to wait and see!!! lol and want to take any guess on who the old enemy will be?
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:12 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Hmmmm you just have to wait and see!!! lol and want to take any guess on who the old enemy will be?


like i said you already told me and i won't spoil it
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:13 pm

Yea weapon x, but there is ANOTHER surprise enemy that makes a return :)
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:13 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Yea weapon x, but there is ANOTHER surprise enemy that makes a return :)


i might know that one as well but maybe *Sniff* Maybe
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:14 pm

Well go ahead and say it lol im not going to confirm it or deny it...ill just tease ya haha
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:15 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Well go ahead and say it lol im not going to confirm it or deny it...ill just tease ya haha


im not sure though but maybe a cloned Godzilla or was that introduced in your second one?
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Re: Godzilla: Second Coming Discusion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:17 pm

It was lol haha well ANYONE who thinks they might know can either PM me or say it in here
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