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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:05 pm

MothraRocks wrote:Eh, life would've moved on :P

But the difference with Ash and Godzilla and what not is that they were brought back from love, Jr is gonna be brought back by science...sorry, but in my eyes, that's wrong! Lol, I'll still read it though :)


But Yuri wants JR to be revived even if she never knew JR and Im sure Miki would want Jr to revived because if you look at it. It was unfair for Jr that he died so young so he does deserve a second chance at life. Also JR will have something important in the future we'll just have to find out. also sometimes you just have to revive the person by science like they did with COmmander Shepard because they knew if they didn't revive him then the whole galaxy would have been destroyed by the reapers. so sometimes you just have to not let things rest in peace.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Flygon King » Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:08 pm

yesssss.... this is coming along quite nciely... I can't wait for future developments...
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:09 pm

Flygon King wrote:yesssss.... this is coming along quite nciely... I can't wait for future developments...


thanks dude im glad you liked it.

also just a question for everyone. Was anyone suprised about Godzilla JR or did they know it was going to be Jr the whole time?
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby MothraRocks » Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:10 pm

Yes. It WAS unfair Jr died. Especially since he LIVED AT THE END OF THE MOVIE BUT SOMEONE JUST HAD TO MAKE HIM DIE IN THE FF (the rise of Godzilla). ITS TERRIBLE!!
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:11 pm

MothraRocks wrote:Yes. It WAS unfair Jr died. Especially since he LIVED AT THE END OF THE MOVIE BUT SOMEONE JUST HAD TO MAKE HIM DIE IN THE FF (the rise of Godzilla). ITS TERRIBLE!!
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I Know what kind of asshole would do that! :P
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Oct 25, 2011 5:48 am

Hey guys last chapter is almost typed up but it wont be up till i get back home from school. so far it has 3,675 words in it. My longest chapter yet.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:19 pm

Last Chapter is up! I hope you all like it! :mrgreen: alos it has 4,349 words in it.

also thank you all for giving me support for making these 7 Godzilla stories so thank you all for the support. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Flygon King » Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:38 pm

Yesssssss... YESSSS! This was very entertaining! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Good work!I can't wait for your future projects...
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Tue Oct 25, 2011 4:49 pm

:| Idk, I think it's just me, but I get bored when I read the battles now. It's all the same..."punches face multiple times", "roars in pain", "so-and-so ran towards so-and-so...". I stopped halfway through, actually. I'm sorry, there's just no unique qualities to the battles...
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Flygon King » Tue Oct 25, 2011 4:55 pm

King Caesar wrote::| Idk, I think it's just me, but I get bored when I read the battles now. It's all the same..."punches face multiple times", "roars in pain", "so-and-so ran towards so-and-so...". I stopped halfway through, actually. I'm sorry, there's just no unique qualities to the battles...


Unfortunately, that is true. All the fights are starting to look the same... there's no unique qualities... Alas, I tend to sffer the same problem... Variation is key.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Tue Oct 25, 2011 4:59 pm

Battles of epic proportions like this should have a unique feel...instead, we get caught with a similar situation as in the last two G-stories. And also, the Mafune thing seemed...meh. :| Like it was rushed or something. Throw in a unique character every now and then who hasn't been used in a Fan Fic recently. (I swear, if I see Yuri one more time I'm going to commit hara-kiri and dance in my intestines)
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Oct 25, 2011 6:13 pm

King Caesar wrote::| Idk, I think it's just me, but I get bored when I read the battles now. It's all the same..."punches face multiple times", "roars in pain", "so-and-so ran towards so-and-so...". I stopped halfway through, actually. I'm sorry, there's just no unique qualities to the battles...


so you didn't read the more interesting parts near the end im assuming? yeah i know i admit that yeah i was starting to go down hill on this one and yes i ADMIT IT!

@Flygon King thanks dude im glad you liked it :mrgreen:

@Everyone this is why im takinga break from Godzilla fan fics for now and focus on other projects like Transformers 4, Life in TK city, and the upcoming Mass Effect.

also if you want my own opinion on all my Godzilla fan fics here it is.

The Rise of Godzilla: MY first Godzilla fan fic and ignoring some of the mistakes i made i actually enjoyed doing that one because it was a bit original and brining some obsecure monsters and doing alot of interesting locations. and im sure everybody enjoyed the parts where Godzilla killed some celeberties. :twisted: My second favorite fan fic i wrote.

Hedorah's Massacre: The second fan fic it brought in alot of obsecure monsters in it like Kikomia said it was his favorite because of all the obsecure monsters. im sure alot of people liked the gargantua fight. Scorpio was a very good original monster that i made and even one person on fan fiction wanted to use him so im glad i made a cool original monster. interesting stuff with the tie in with the BP spill and the sludge zombies. My third favorite Godzilla fan fic i wrote.

Godzilla's Darkest Hour: The big battle which was just epic for me and some other people. It brought in the crossover of Godzilla and Gamera. Many of the good monsters had very sad deaths. Im sure nobody saw that varan and Rodan were going to die and i was sad that i wrote those parts. Just what else can i saw about this one. This one is my favorite Godzilla fan fic and im sure most of you would agree with me.

New Begining: This one was alright it brought in some new formulas and all that stuff. basically yeah this would be like my sixth favorite to write about.

Finding the past: This was a decent mini series i wrote i personally liked writing about Zandolla because he's a ver interesting monster and more to Godzilla's past and all that other stuff. My fifth favorite Godzilla favorite to write about.

The Arrival: This one started to somewhat redeem itself because mainly the battle of Infant Island was it was great and brining in the interesting Jet Jaguars even though two of the three were from the Godzilla Island tv show. so this one somewhat redeem the series of mine but yeah. Fourth favorite to write about

Revelations: YES! I ADMIT! That this one was rushed and that i killed off alot of the villians off to easy. so yes i admit! so basically yeah but the ending did some what redeem itself as it brought in a cliffhanger. So can't really say more about this one because this one is the blacksheep of my Godzilla fan fics except for like the last chapter. so seventh favorite Godzilla story to write about.

Easier ranking to see
Godzilla's Darkest Hour
The Rise of Godzilla
Hedorah's Massacre
Godzilla: The Arrival
Godzilla: Finding the past
Godzilla: New Beginings
Godzilla: Revelations

those are my rankings and if you want to give rankings for them then do it. :D
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby kikomia » Wed Oct 26, 2011 3:37 am

No rankings from me. Its always the same end isnt it. In space and all.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Wed Oct 26, 2011 3:40 am

I'd probably say Hedorah's Massacre was my favorite in terms of actual story and potential, but Darkest Hour was probably the best in terms of execution. The others fall short of recognition...
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:47 pm

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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:55 pm

New beginings is my least favrotie but i do like the new monsters in it inculding one of my favtories megaguruis.
Darkest hour is the best except for deaths.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Wed Oct 26, 2011 2:00 pm

There is a lesson in this story. Never trust Jirass!

I think that my favorite out of GvJ's Godzilla fanficts is Darkest Hour and Hedorah's Massacre is my least favorite.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 2:04 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:There is a lesson in this story. Never trust Jirass!

I think that my favorite out of GvJ's Godzilla fanficts is Darkest Hour and Hedorah's Massacre is my least favorite.


Damn right! Never trust that Godzillasaur with a plant around his neck!

also may i ask why is Hedorah's Massacre your least favorite? just wondering
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Wed Oct 26, 2011 2:08 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:
GodzillavsZilla wrote:There is a lesson in this story. Never trust Jirass!

I think that my favorite out of GvJ's Godzilla fanficts is Darkest Hour and Hedorah's Massacre is my least favorite.


Damn right! Never trust that Godzillasaur with a plant around his neck!

also may i ask why is Hedorah's Massacre your least favorite? just wondering

Well, I think that in that fanfict you killed Hedorah too easy, Godzilla acted like a human after he killed Bieber, and I would've liked to see Kamacuras and Kumonga more, sorry.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 2:10 pm

@GodzillavsZilla yeah i will admit that i killed Hedorah off way to easily and all some of that stuff. but im not sure if some of you people heard me say this before but eventually i will edit and put in more parts for The Rise of Godzilla and Hedorah's Massacre.
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