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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:54 am

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He tried to fly up, but he was too hurt. King Kong roared at the pterotactyl, insisting he should stay until he healed. The pterotactyl agreed and sat down.

Huh? Thats odd...

He said his name was Rodan. King Kong shook his head and went to sleep.

...hmm...

Improvement needed, but it had a somewhat interesting plot. I have a fever, and the only prescription is more detail.

ok. Did you like the Godzillasaurus attack?
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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby King Caesar » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:56 am

Random, but yeah, it was pretty good.
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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:22 am

Good chapter dude but my ony complaint is that it needs to be loger but it was great none the less. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby King Caesar » Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:26 am

That reminds me...that 2004 Skull Island scene was waayy too brief...
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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:29 am

King Caesar wrote:That reminds me...that 2004 Skull Island scene was waayy too brief...

ok, it wasn't my best chapter. Wait till the Xillens send out the monsters to destroy Earth's citys
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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby kikomia » Sat Oct 22, 2011 9:31 am

TITANOSAURUS!!!!!!


Too short. Nice.
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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Fri Mar 30, 2012 2:05 pm

New chapter's up, it's been a while hasn't it? Also sorry if it's short, but I wanted the new chapter to be up sometime during Spring break. So enjoy :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Mar 30, 2012 3:38 pm

A little short and some run on sentences but it was good. :D
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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Fri Mar 30, 2012 3:41 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:A little short and some run on sentences but it was good. :D

Thanks dude, glad you liked it :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Return of the Xillens discussion

Postby King Caesar » Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:25 am

"New Jersey isn't a major city, it's a minor." Draco said as the Xillen and Black Hole Alien leaders laughed.

...I'm just gonna let that sentence soak in this thread for a while...

GvJ already mentioned my other complaints. Try to work on it, GvZ
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