King Caesar wrote:Phew, for a moment I thought it was about to get nasty, but instead you kept it safe and gave a little more of a sweeter touch. That was good. Not every chapter needs a bang-bang. I liked how you executed the disagreements between the monsters and the human JL. Overall it was solid. Keep it up, and maybe somebody will be nice enough to check it out!
It does get annoying when you see all the views and no one comments (present company excluded of course. ). I asked Godzillavs.Jason and he said he'd check it out. I'm just not sure who to ask to check it out.
I couldn't resist the Round 2 comment. The whole scene almost builds up to it until she sees him asleep.
Glad you like the disagreements. I wanted to show some kind of conflict between the two groups because we all know with that many in the room there are bound to be arguements.