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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Tue Oct 04, 2011 1:42 pm

This is awsome, just one question. Will Gomora turn into EX Gomora?
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Tue Oct 04, 2011 3:33 pm

If you join comora can be in & he will turn into ex gomora.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:07 pm

Godzillafan642 wrote:If you join comora can be in & he will turn into ex gomora.

I was talking about Godzilla: Revelations
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Wed Oct 05, 2011 2:11 pm

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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 05, 2011 2:27 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:This is awsome, just one question. Will Gomora turn into EX Gomora?


um maybe still not sure but there can be chance. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:28 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:
GodzillavsZilla wrote:This is awsome, just one question. Will Gomora turn into EX Gomora?


um maybe still not sure but there can be chance. :mrgreen:

cool :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Oct 09, 2011 10:06 am

Hey guys i just wanted to say something here. This one is just going to be a mess! because i've basically screwed up on this its just yeah that kind of stuff. Basically I regret starting this second trilogy i wished i could have stopped myself from making this second trilogy because Darkest Hour wrapped everything up. so yeah if you don't see any chapters for this one for a while its because im basically going to stay away from it for a while and work on other projects.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sun Oct 09, 2011 11:52 am

Aw WTF?! You led me on and now you're saying lights out!! What?! You are so--

It's okay. That stuff happens. Good luck with your other stuff.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Oct 09, 2011 11:56 am

King Caesar wrote:Aw WTF?! You led me on and now you're saying lights out!! What?! You are so--

It's okay. That stuff happens. Good luck with your other stuff.


well im staying out for long though but yeah what ever chapter i have written down on the third chapter of this is so god awful horrible because i basically kill off some of the villians in like one sentence. seriously its terrible. but thanks for wishing me. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Flygon King » Sun Oct 09, 2011 12:22 pm

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! This must go on! LONG LIVE THE ENTITY OF LU-

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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Oct 09, 2011 12:24 pm

Wow you guys are kinda acting like its the end of the world. :lol: but don't worry guys i might work on the next chapter later though but that depends because im going to work on Transformers 4 Reconstruction and life at tk city.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:25 pm

New chapter is up! I hope you all like it and i know its probably terrible so be honest on this.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby kikomia » Mon Oct 17, 2011 4:49 am

GodzillavsJason wrote:Orga roared in pain but he was beginning to heal his wounds while Godzilla punched Razin in the face and fired an atomic ray into the green razored blade creature’s stomach. The result left a hole in Razin’s stomach


So he is dead right?


GodzillavsJason wrote:Godzilla grabbed Razin’s insides and ripped them out.


So he is dead now right?

GodzillavsJason wrote:Godzilla then wrapped Razin’s intestines around Razin’s neck and began to choke him.


Why isnt he dead?

GodzillavsJason wrote:Razin began chocking to death and soon he was dead.




Oh he died from the chocking? That doesnt even make sense.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Mon Oct 17, 2011 6:01 am

Good thing I'm not an Orga fan boy...I'd be more than pissed off by his death. -_-

Anyways, I'm curious. How do you separate paragraphs on battle scenes? It seems spontaneous and random...
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Oct 17, 2011 2:09 pm

King Caesar wrote:Good thing I'm not an Orga fan boy...I'd be more than pissed off by his death. -_-

Anyways, I'm curious. How do you separate paragraphs on battle scenes? It seems spontaneous and random...


uh... uh... uh... Hey look Chipmunk! *Quickly runs off*


thanks im glad you liked it :D
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Oct 20, 2011 7:58 pm

New Chapter is up! I hope you all like it! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Fri Oct 21, 2011 2:40 am

You know what'd really suck? If Dogolas's hearts were in another passage in his body. Because think about it...they just chose one hole. He could have others, right? And they're just assuming it's the right one...

...nitpick... -_-
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby kikomia » Fri Oct 21, 2011 2:53 am

Just read it. Nice approach on the final fight :D
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Oct 21, 2011 5:44 am

King Caesar wrote:You know what'd really suck? If Dogolas's hearts were in another passage in his body. Because think about it...they just chose one hole. He could have others, right? And they're just assuming it's the right one...

...nitpick... -_-


well the part they went into had different passage ways so who knows what they can enccounter in here. :o

@Kikomia Thanks dude im glad you liked it :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Fri Oct 21, 2011 5:47 am

No, I mean like another passage on the outside, not through the hole they went through. Maybe there's some other passage? :|
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