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SotA Discussion.

Postby Giratina93 » Wed Oct 12, 2011 8:12 pm

Here, you al can talk about SotA, and feel free to give comments, suggestions, and reviews. Truth be told, this was actully a collaborative work between me and an old friend of mine. He and I worked together to make this story for one Site in particular, and I'm editing some stuff in it for release here...
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Kubo » Thu Oct 13, 2011 2:37 am

:shock: I like this...and that beginning was awesome with Fiore--I mean, Persephone. :P Can't wait to see where this goes now.
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Oct 13, 2011 3:01 pm

Woah..... that was awesome! I really enjoyed reading that and its at a very good start! Keep up the good work! :mrgreen:
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Giratina93 » Thu Oct 13, 2011 6:24 pm

Chapter 2 is up! Releases for further chapters will correspond with those on the other forum. In other words, everytime my pal Giratina updates the story, I'll edit an earlier chapter and put it up here! This means that updates more or less depend on his side of the work, and since he tends to be a lazy bit*h...
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Kubo » Fri Oct 14, 2011 2:37 am

Lol a llama saved the day. ^_^ If this had just a little more figurative language, this would definitely be a top-notch fan Fic.
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Mogu » Fri Oct 14, 2011 6:52 am

That was AWESOME! Can't wait for more.
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Kubo » Fri Oct 14, 2011 12:13 pm

Not trying to be an ad-bot, but Tim85's Justice League Fan Fiction is pretty solid. Give it a look if you haven't.

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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Oct 14, 2011 2:19 pm

King Caesar wrote:Not trying to be an ad-bot, but Tim85's Justice League Fan Fiction is pretty solid. Give it a look if you haven't.

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King Caesar you're really an ad-bot. :P but on topic i've read your chapter last night but i haven't gotten a chance to reply and really good i like it alot keep up the good work! :mrgreen:
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Giratina93 » Sat Oct 15, 2011 8:08 am

Last "Freebie" chapter, Chapter 3, is up. From here on out, updates will correspond ith the original's updates as well... I don't want this release to overtake the release of the original...
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Mogu » Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:57 pm

Oh man Arceus is dead!
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Giratina93 » Sat Oct 15, 2011 7:58 pm

Arceus may be dead... but it wouldn't be the first time this happened.

Positive reviews... Just the thing I know Gira would LOVE to see...

Seeing as Gira's gone through the first half of Chapter 8 already, I've decided to put up the first half of Chapter 4. Please note that this fanfict combines alot of things, like Arceus and the Jewel of Life, as well as some other stuff from other universes...
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:33 pm

Really awesome chapters dude espically the newest one with the legendaries. I liked how you made them all talk and have a personality. :mrgreen:
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Mogu » Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:25 am

Dude, Manaphy is the "Prince of the Sea" and is not female. And Arceus "created" eggs, he didn't lay them. He IS male. But the chapter was awesome :D
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Postby Giratina93 » Sun Oct 16, 2011 5:46 am

Mogu, pay closer attention., especially to the foreward. And as for Manaphy... Don't question me on it. I was't theone to write this... my pal Gira was. If you have any complaints, tell them to HIM, not me.

And more positive feedback... how nice!
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Postby Giratina93 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:33 pm

...And while Gira's being a lazy ass and not uploading any new chapters, I decided to sneak on an edited chapter up here! Enjoy!
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Giratina93 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:36 pm

...AND ONCE AGAIN, GIRA'S TOO LAZY TO DO ANYTHING RIGHT!

So I took the honors of fixing up a few minor errors and putting up Chapter 6... Enjoy, ladies and gentlemen, here, the backstory ends, and the true story begins...
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Kubo » Mon Dec 19, 2011 8:25 am

I WISH I COULD ALWAYS TALK IN CAP LOCKS LIKE ARCEUS!!

But good job. I liked the dialogue, and nice ending. 8-) I knows a Pokemon gonna get some tonight! Hahaha!! :twisted:
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Giratina93 » Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:00 am

Ending? When did I ever say this was the end of the story? :twisted: Things are going to take a turn for the worst very soon... I can ensure that.
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Kubo » Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:57 am

Gotcha. Well, best of luck to ya! 8-)
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Re: SotA Discussion.

Postby Giratina93 » Mon Dec 19, 2011 11:59 am

Chapter 7 is up, and the wheels of fate begin to spin....
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