Transformers 4 Reconstruction Disscussion Board

[GodzillavsJason]

Yes after many planning stages of me doing a Transformers fan fic i have finally picked out a plot that will make me happy and the transformers i have chosen. Why i'm doing this is because i'm having a writer's block on Revelations, none of the writers aren't really writing their episodes for life in TK city (I'm not mad at anyone) and i just wanted to do one. the plot is the Decepticons rise again from their secreat base somewhere on Earth. There will be some explaniations on somehow characters that have died in Dark of the moon will be coming back so here is who is appearing and disscuss.

Autobots
Remaining Autobots
1.Optimus Prime (Leader of the Autobots)
2. Bumble Bee (Scout and part of Delta Squad)
3.Sideswipe (Knife expert and part of Delta Squad)
4.Ratchet (Chief Medical officer)
5.Mirage (Spy and part of Delta Squad)
6.Ironhide (Weapon Specialist)
7.Skids
8.Mudflap
9.Arcee
10.Chromia
11.Roadbuster (Engineer)
12.Leadfoot (Engineer)
13.Topspin (Engineer)

New Autobots
14.Blaster (Communication’s officer)
15.Perceptor (Ratchet’s assistant)
16. Hoist (Scientist/Inventor)
17. Grapple (Scientist/Inventor)
18. Sunstreaker (Sideswipe’s twin and part of Delta Squad)
19. Red Alert (Medical officer)
20. Grimlock
21. Sludge
22. Slag
23. Powerglide
24. Moonracer
25. Ciffjumper


Decepticons
1. Soundwave (Communication’s Officer and leader) Appearance: G1 appearance
2. Thundercracker (Leader of the first seeker team)
3. Skywarp (part of the seeker team)
4. Sunstorm (part of the seeker team)
5. Breakdown (Medic)
6. Rumble
7. Buzzsaw
8. Ratbat
9. Astrotrain (Transport carrier)
10. Reflector (Spy)
11. Thrust (part of the second seeker team)
12. Ramjet (Leader of second seeker team)
13. Dirge (part of the second seeker team)
14. Blitzwing (Weapon Specialist)
15. Kickback (Part of the Insecticon stealth team)
16. Bombshell (Leader of the Insecticon stealth team)
17. Shrapnel (Part of the Insecticon stealth team)
18. Drag Strip (Scientist/Inventor)
19. Blackarachnia (Assassin)
20. Lugnut (Scientist/Inventor)
21. Slipstream (an Assassin)
22. Shockwave (Soundwave’s second in command)
23. Razorspine (Leader of the Dinocons)(Original creation and based on Spinosaurus)
24. Block (Part of the Dinocons) (Original creation and based on a Ankylosaurus)
25. Claw (Part of the Dinocons) (Original creation and based on a Raptor)

[King Caesar]

Cool. But what'll happen to Revelations?! And Life in TK City?!

[GodzillavsJason]

Cool. But what'll happen to Revelations?! And Life in TK City?!

thanks dude but for Revelations i'll still being doing that one regularly and im kinda losing intrest in Revelations so when i finish that one i'm basically going to stop working on Godzilla fan fics for a while. Anf Life in TK city i have the halloween episode finished and half of the first part of the Christmas finale so we need Kikomia to write the episode thats before the Halloween episode so we can pick up to fast pace again and for Life in TK city i've already planned out three seasons altogether.

[kikomia]

Cool. But what'll happen to Revelations?! And Life in TK City?!

thanks dude but for Revelations i'll still being doing that one regularly and im kinda losing intrest in Revelations so when i finish that one i'm basically going to stop working on Godzilla fan fics for a while. Anf Life in TK city i have the halloween episode finished and half of the first part of the Christmas finale so we need Kikomia to write the episode thats before the Halloween episode so we can pick up to fast pace again and for Life in TK city i've already planned out three seasons altogether.

Dont count on me. Ill drop it. Sorry

[GodzillavsJason]

ok i guess i'll write that one then. also are you looking forward to this story?

[kikomia]

ok i guess i'll write that one then. also are you looking forward to this story?

It has Optimus Prime. So yeah pretty much

[GodzillavsJason]

ok i guess i'll write that one then. also are you looking forward to this story?

It has Optimus Prime. So yeah pretty much

awesome!

[King Caesar]

Oh it has Optimus Prime? Well forget this, I'm sticking with Pokémon!

[GodzillavsJason]

Oh it has Optimus Prime? Well I reading this, I'm sticking with Transformers!

Fixed and much better glad you agree

[Mogu]

You should also add Devastator to the Decepticons.

[King Caesar]

...is it bad that I just realized this is meant to be a sequel to Transformers 3?

[kikomia]

...is it bad that I just realized this is meant to be a sequel to Transformers 3?

Yes.


Because it isnt.

[GodzillavsJason]

...is it bad that I just realized this is meant to be a sequel to Transformers 3?

Yes.


Because it isnt.

Just like Inception!

@Mogu sorry i can't add Devaster as much as i want to though he's basically dead and the only reason why Soundwave and Shockwave are back is because they've died only recently so they'll get revied.

[GodzillavsJason]

First chapter is up! I hope you all like it! Now you all your usual stuff like King Caesar do your constructive crictsim, Kikomia do your weird gross stuff, mothrarocks do your i don't know what transformers are and Dynomy84 appear randomly eating a cookie.

[King Caesar]

Constructive criticism: Some of the dialogue seemed very un-Transformers. Maybe it was for a little stab at humor, but there's better ways of approaching that rather than blatant cussing. And then there was the start of the attack on the military defending the Decepticon bodies. It lacked suspense. It was just, "When," "Now!", and that's no fun. Other than that, good job and keep at it.

[GodzillavsJason]

Constructive criticism: Some of the dialogue seemed very un-Transformers. Maybe it was for a little stab at humor, but there's better ways of approaching that rather than blatant cussing. And then there was the start of the attack on the military defending the Decepticon bodies. It lacked suspense. It was just, "When," "Now!", and that's no fun. Other than that, good job and keep at it.

But Thundercracker doesn't like to wait he likes to dig in and rush but yeah its my first Transformers thing and it took me a while for me to type up somestuff but yeah thats some good advice and some stuff should probably be explained but thanks glad you liked it.

[kikomia]

Pokemon!


Wrong thread. TRANSFORMERS!!!


Nice chapter

[GodzillavsJason]

Pokemon!


Wrong thread. TRANSFORMERS!!!


Nice chapter

*Loads shotgun* You wanna mistake Transformers for Pokemon again son? JK dude and thanks glad you liked it.

[Flygon King]

This is looking quite good from the start. Once it's finished... IS PEEERFECTO!

[GodzillavsJason]

This is looking quite good from the start. Once it's finished... IS PEEERFECTO!

thanks dude im glad you liked it .

@everyone also next chapter might be up tommorow defiently not today but tommorow hopefully.