Yep. It does look like shit.

[Living Corpse]

Inspired by TitanoGoji's Mock Godzilla Unleashed Cards I decided to make my own of Zone Fighter.

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It does look like shit.

[therealmccoy]

Maybe a different background, like his. Not necessarily the same thing, just maybe a darker color, like red or something. It doesn't look awful.

[Living Corpse]

Did I at least give him a decant back story?

[therealmccoy]

Did I at least give him a decant back story?

Well, I know nothing about Zone Fighter. But it sounded interesting; especially the part about the truce with all of the Earth Monsters. A few typos, but nothing that got me in a twist.

[Living Corpse]

Well, I know nothing about Zone Fighter..

You poor soul Here, this link will allow you to watch every Zone Fighter fight. Now you'll see what I mean when I say every Godzilla fan outside of Japan is missing out on a fun series and awesome hero. And why I'm so dead set on doing a petition to get him in a game.

http://www.dailymotion.com/Godzilla73rules

[therealmccoy]

Thanks. I introduced myself to Ultraman and loved it, though I still have a lot to see. This looks really cool.

On topic, maybe you could use an actual landscape as a background or something like that. Just not something so loud. I don't know, I'm not an artist, it's just an idea.

[JVM]

Pretty good besides aforementioned background. I would also remove the mention of not being able to stay in giant form for long - it's true to the show, but if he was in a real game I think they'd remove that bit.

[Living Corpse]

Pretty good besides aforementioned background. I would also remove the mention of not being able to stay in giant form for long - it's true to the show, but if he was in a real game I think they'd remove that bit.

Well, they mention it in Jet Jaguar's bio for some reason and you do recharge when you shrink down for a bit so I figured they'd just give him a simmer game mechanic.

[JVM]

Pretty good besides aforementioned background. I would also remove the mention of not being able to stay in giant form for long - it's true to the show, but if he was in a real game I think they'd remove that bit.

Well, they mention it in Jet Jaguar's bio for some reason and you do recharge when you shrink down for a bit so I figured they'd just give him a slimier game mechanic.

Hm, good point. Maybe like MOGUERA's recharge?

[Living Corpse]

Pretty good besides aforementioned background. I would also remove the mention of not being able to stay in giant form for long - it's true to the show, but if he was in a real game I think they'd remove that bit.

Well, they mention it in Jet Jaguar's bio for some reason and you do recharge when you shrink down for a bit so I figured they'd just give him a slimier game mechanic.

Hm, good point. Maybe like MOGUERA's recharge?

Exactly. And Zone Fighter was strong enough to lift a monster's foot and keeping it from crushing him while in human form.

[Mogu]

Not bad, not bad at all. But Zone Fighter's background isn't so, well, good. You should change it into something like a machine or something.

[Space Hunter M]

The card it self is okay, but you really got to work on properly cropping Zone onto the image.