M.F.C. Announcements/Discusssion

by **HayesAJones** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:33 pm

You can either attach the file or just copy and paste it into the e-mail. I'd prefer you to copy and paste though, because Word doesn't operate on my computer.

by **godzillafan** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:12 pm

hey im done what should i do now

by **godzillafan** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:13 pm

oh ok its anguirus vs battra

by **HayesAJones** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:18 pm

Sounds like an interesting match. I look forward to reading it.

by **godzillafan** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:36 pm

ok i just go upstairs and use my own computer if my brother is not on it

by **godzillafan** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:51 pm

i sended it hope you like it

by **godzillafan** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 5:03 pm

are u gonna read it

by **HayesAJones** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 5:06 pm

Already have. I've also sent an e-mail in reply to it. Here it is:

Sorry to tell you this, but I can't put this in my M.F.C. I have standards and this simply doesn't meet the. Ignoring grammar and factual errors (Gamer is Guardian of the Universe, Battra is the Black Mothra) there's a skeleton of a decent match in there. If you can lengthen it and make it bother easier and more enjoyable to read (Imagery! Figurative language! All that jazz.) I'll be happy to put it in. But not in this raw form. Sorry to disappoint you.

But you could always just put it in the fan Fiction section as it is.

Sorry. It's a nice little read, but not detailed or solid enough. But keep writing. The more you write, the better you get.

by **godzillafan** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 5:17 pm

i come up with another

by **HayesAJones** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 5:24 pm

Try to flesh it out more. Put some pizazz in it. And please, please capitalize. Grammar is a biggie for me.

by **godzillafan** » Tue Aug 24, 2010 5:28 pm

im working on the next one king kong vs gigan

by **Dynomy84** » Wed Aug 25, 2010 11:30 am

this always reminded me of the K.W.C and other fight shows (jurassic fight club,animal face off,versus,etc) and i gotta admit its cool

by **godzillafan** » Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:28 pm

hey im already working on it what should i have to with grammer

by **HayesAJones** » Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:29 pm

Er... make it correct?

by **godzillafan** » Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:30 pm

im doing king kong vs gigan

by **Dynomy84** » Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:53 am

this inspired me to make another fanfic its called kaiju wars and its gonna be when kaiju attack yadda yadda we know the deal exept that it will have one fight per fanfic story

by **HayesAJones** » Thu Aug 26, 2010 1:06 pm

Glad you enjoyed it that much!

by **godzillafan** » Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:44 pm

ok u can spice ir up a little

by **HayesAJones** » Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:46 pm

Thanks! I'll do that between now and tomorrow and then post it.

by **godzillafan** » Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:47 pm

are u going to put in in the monster fight club

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