Sorry to tell you this, but I can't put this in my M.F.C. I have standards and this simply doesn't meet the. Ignoring grammar and factual errors (Gamer is Guardian of the Universe, Battra is the Black Mothra) there's a skeleton of a decent match in there. If you can lengthen it and make it bother easier and more enjoyable to read (Imagery! Figurative language! All that jazz.) I'll be happy to put it in. But not in this raw form. Sorry to disappoint you.
But you could always just put it in the fan Fiction section as it is.
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