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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 5:41 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:like the new chapter and the reversed MKG :mrgreen:


thanks dude im glad you liked it and yeah i thought of the reversed MKG would be better. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:25 pm

Dogolas roared out “These three shall be known as Sharklock (Formally Bemstar), Peluda (Formally Destro King), and Hot Ice (Formally Bagorah). These three shall be the three of the lesser powerful of your new warriors.”


Why--why on earth would Dogolos, assuming he can transform monsters, ever make three inferior monsters?! What kinda logic does that sick monster tick to?! :P

Cool, cool Needlar is still around. Keizer Ghidorah better get what's coming to him. You'd think he'd show a little respect for the monster that resurrected him!
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:29 pm

King Caesar wrote:
Dogolas roared out “These three shall be known as Sharklock (Formally Bemstar), Peluda (Formally Destro King), and Hot Ice (Formally Bagorah). These three shall be the three of the lesser powerful of your new warriors.”


Why--why on earth would Dogolos, assuming he can transform monsters, ever make three inferior monsters?! What kinda logic does that sick monster tick to?! :P

Cool, cool Needlar is still around. Keizer Ghidorah better get what's coming to him. You'd think he'd show a little respect for the monster that resurrected him!



uh hmmm! You are to call Nedlar now as Knifes! :P but im glad you liked it :mrgreen: also maybe Dogolas just doesn't want to spend alot of money on his new warriors as he only has a limited amount of money because he has a wife and 3 kids and he has to save money for gas :P
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:32 pm

Damn this economic recession...it's even affecting our Fan Fictions!! :shock:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:35 pm

King Caesar wrote:Damn this economic recession...it's even affecting our Fan Fictions!! :shock:


yeah its even terrible because i can only give the main monsters like a million dollars each (Godzilla, King Ghidorah/MKG, Angurius, Balkzardan, Mothra Leo, Mothra, Needlar/Knifes, Zandolla, Spider-Uros, Dogolas, Mothra, Etc)

while i can give only 1 paco to the supporting monster (Red King, Kumonga, Goliath, Gigamoth, Manda, Etc and Keizer Ghidorah (Because hes a giant douchebag!) :P
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:27 am

New Chapter is up! :mrgreen: I hope you all like it! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:09 pm

I know i've been quoting a lot, but this one made me nearly laugh:
Though the ones that supported Keizer Ghidorah cheered while Keizer Ghidorah became the new leader as some of the others wished King Ghidorah were back as the leader (Red and Blue Flasher, Garoborg, Fire Ghidorah, Dark Ghidorah, Des Ghidorah, Telesdon, Saramandora, Razin, and Barugas)


So wait...all those monsters couldn't take down the weakest incarnation of Ghidorah and a couple of henchmen? Haha...good times. :P

Anyways, pretty cool. As always, I will provide you with some advice: Now that the bad guys have very unique abilities, emphasize on them. And I mean drive that son of a bitch home! Think of every possible strategy they could use, and also note any flaws for their death scenes. Trust me, that will make the battles epic-er.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:12 pm

This lastest chapter is great its so good i loved it execpt the deaths in it you that is only thing i don't like about this story i don't like it when in a story it kills off new chatchers.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:14 pm

thanks dude im glad you liked it. also the minions couldn't do anything to Keizer Ghidorah because um.... its part of the story so they can't do anything about it :P :lol: anyways i will follow all those avices :mrgreen: also what do you think of the new forms of monsters? :mrgreen:

@Everybody ok one last announcement on this post there will only be like two more chapters of this story before this story is over then it hits to the six installment which i'm thinking i will call it Godzilla: Revelations or something like that but it will most likely be Revelations :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:17 pm

Can't wait to see the 100+ monsters in it. ;) lol

Anyways, I thought Needlar's new form is awesome. He's just the way I like him, though his name seems a little...lackluster, I suppose. Killing Bemular was the highlight of the chapter though. Dang mofo deserved it!
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:20 pm

King Caesar wrote:Can't wait to see the 100+ monsters in it. ;) lol

Anyways, I thought Needlar's new form is awesome. He's just the way I like him, though his name seems a little...lackluster, I suppose. Killing Bemular was the highlight of the chapter though. Dang mofo deserved it!


more like OVER 9,000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P but yeah Knifes is cool and yep Bemular did deserve it :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:23 pm

OVER 9,000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Ah, I see what you're saiyan.

You should have *cough* King Caesar resurrected! Maybe!?
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:24 pm

King Caesar wrote:
OVER 9,000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Ah, I see what you're saiyan.

You should have *cough* King Caesar resurrected! Maybe!?


thats a good question.... we might see him soon.... Maybe *Sniff* Maybe :)
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:25 pm

You said maybe twice! That means he will be in it!! Muahahaaaha I am SO onto you! ;)
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:27 pm

King Caesar wrote:You said maybe twice! That means he will be in it!! Muahahaaaha I am SO onto you! ;)


probably but he won't be the King Caesar that you knew as a child :lol: :P
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 25, 2011 7:01 pm

New Chapter is up! I hope you all like it! :mrgreen: and one more chapter before this one is over. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby kikomia » Mon Sep 26, 2011 3:43 am

I am so happy Agrul appeared wow :D


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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Mon Sep 26, 2011 9:58 am

Mothra chirped out “If Godzilla doesn’t heal soon then Dogolas will figure that Godzilla won’t be revived and that the only way to kill Dogolas is with both Godzilla and I firing concentrated beams at Dogolas.”


Why? Why does the world need Mothra and Godzilla to combine? Why not other monsters? ...I'm waiting... -_-

Lol anyways, pretty cool...but Clover...ugh he's so overrated.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Sep 26, 2011 2:21 pm

King Caesar wrote:
Mothra chirped out “If Godzilla doesn’t heal soon then Dogolas will figure that Godzilla won’t be revived and that the only way to kill Dogolas is with both Godzilla and I firing concentrated beams at Dogolas.”


Why? Why does the world need Mothra and Godzilla to combine? Why not other monsters? ...I'm waiting... -_-

Lol anyways, pretty cool...but Clover...ugh he's so overrated.


Well um...... HEY LOOK A CHIPMUNK IN THE CORNER PLAYING BLACK OPS! *Runs off from the area.* you'll probably find out soon. :mrgreen: Well i wouldn't call clover overated because hes only been in one film and i doubt he'll have a sequel anytime soon. although i will give you some examples of things that are overated. like Mothra, King of the Hill, All types of Anime, Call of Duty, the Office, Star Trek, Harry Potter, Twilight and many more. but anyway thanks im glad you liked it :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Mon Sep 26, 2011 2:58 pm

Godzilla vs jason i am going give some numbers you tell when to stop when you can bring rodan back.
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