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Postby Gojira21 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 8:49 am

Hey everyone im am BACK!!!...or for the moment atleast lol srry i havent been on in a while, things here at College have been hectic!!! I have had internet problems and all kinds of things lol BUT here is the discussion for the conclussion of the Dark Series of mine! I promise this one will the best and the most exciting of the series, because i have something interesting things planned for this one. So enjoy! And ill try to be back on more
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby MothraRocks » Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:09 am

Nice chapter, Jr isn't too thrilled is he? Lol
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Postby Gojira21 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:11 am

Nope lol he will have his hands full even more here in the next chapter or two
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby MothraRocks » Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:13 am

Oh boy, just don't go too hard on the little fella, ok? LOL
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:20 am

Actually...you do know right that this is not the REAL jr, its the cloned verision from the Xilliens lol
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Wed Aug 31, 2011 11:25 am

^ Spoil the story much?! -_- lol

Anyways, I have one uber big complaint. The beginning. There was so much that could have been expanded upon. A little brief exposition as to what the previous four years had been. I'm not it was horrible or grammatically incorrect, I'm just speculating.
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:25 pm

Lol well actually i explained the clone part back in darkness within and second the four years is reffering back to godzilla: final wars! -_-
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:28 pm

Oh yeah. *facepalm* amazing how much I've already forgotten.
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:30 pm

Lol its ok man it happens

UPDATE! Chp 2 is up!!
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:41 pm

Awesome new chapter dude! And really good remebering parts with Diabolous just really good can't wait to see more. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:46 pm

Oh its get better trust me :)...there going to be a few interesting developments that will come along...and do we think Kumoi is realy dead???....stayed tuned! lol
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Oct 29, 2011 4:38 pm

Update, Chp 3 is now up!!
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Sun Oct 30, 2011 5:37 am

Sykes! No!!! :cry:

Godzilla was a tower of terror


Haha...ha... :P

Pretty good chapter. I can't really complain, except for the damn semicolons! Work on those!
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sun Oct 30, 2011 6:19 pm

Lol yeap that was a refference to your story and...well whoops on the semicolons lol i see what ya mean now....haha
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Nov 04, 2011 7:02 pm

Alright chp 4 is up! its a little shorter than the others but it serves for more character development (sort of) and plot movement, but the next chapters will bring action promise
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Nov 05, 2011 12:03 am

it was a nice little chapter dude i can't wait to see more dude. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Sat Nov 05, 2011 5:08 am

Hmmm...a plan, you say? Well, this'll be good.

Ya know, Harper was shaking his head a lot...



Otherwise good chapter :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:45 pm

Lol well hopefully the plan will work out well and make logical sense...haha and well Harper is one of those people who wants to be in control and when it does not happen is not sure.

But glad both of you liked it! Expect plenty of action (Hopefully) in the next few chapters
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue Dec 13, 2011 9:15 pm

Alright, i know its been a while but i have CHP5 UP! Read and review u crazy readers ;)
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Re: Godzilla: Salvation Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Dec 13, 2011 9:23 pm

Awesome new chapter dude! I liked the battle between the real and the clone godzilla and i know who weapon x ;)
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