Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestions

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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 3:36 pm

IDK, do you wanna dicuss Goji: Evil Inside, caus im bored
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Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 3:45 pm

lol sure man
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 3:59 pm

k ummm.......
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Chris55 wrote:
Varan Bon Ziller wrote:^

Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


:)
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:00 pm

Lol, how is Varan gona be used in your story?
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:01 pm

he feels the Xilliens comming and has beef with Roger, he is unaware that Godzilla is evil though
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Chris55 wrote:
Varan Bon Ziller wrote:^

Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


:)
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:03 pm

ah alright, cool. So is angurius and godzilla going to be like allies in your story once Godzilla is "un-evil'?
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:10 pm

yes but i cant talk anymore im going swimming :D
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Varan Bon Ziller wrote:^

Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


:)
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:10 pm

Lol alright man, have fun
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:11 pm

thanks i will :D bye
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Chris55 wrote:
Varan Bon Ziller wrote:^

Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


:)
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby King Caesar » Sun Jul 31, 2011 3:09 am

Nice new chapter, but Rogers definitely felt less significant. Lots of action though. :)
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Sun Jul 31, 2011 7:28 am

thanks and i know hes getting pissed :D
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Chris55 wrote:
Varan Bon Ziller wrote:^

Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


:)
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:56 pm

Before I continue on any of my new ff's i shall continue this one and the rest of my old which have been left behind, and the Rage of Mecha-Soniczilla remake
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Varan Bon Ziller wrote:^

Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


:)
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby King Caesar » Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:05 am

It wasn't horrible, but it wasn't great. A little variation in the wording and maybe some sensory details could be used next time.
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby MothraRocks » Tue Mar 20, 2012 1:23 pm

You have like a million fanfics dude :lol:

Anyway, basically what KC said. And through in some more detail, like how they're feeling (emotionally, physically, etc), stuff like that.
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Mar 20, 2012 1:37 pm

What Mothrarocks said. But really choose one fan fic and start working on that one the most.
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:44 pm

You have like a million fanfics dude :lol:

Yes, I always get ideas and i just have to spit them out...i hate having ideas... -__-
and thanks for the critesisem guys
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Varan Bon Ziller wrote:^

Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Wed Mar 21, 2012 2:17 pm

i added a part
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Chris55 wrote:
Varan Bon Ziller wrote:^

Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:43 pm

Next part's up
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Wont see that shit in Godzilla.


We did. A whole movie was based around it. It was called "GINO".


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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby King Caesar » Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:33 am

Not bad, not bad. I can't picture Godzilka using his claws like that. It's not something he does IMO. Now Varan, he is a different case...
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby kikomia » Fri Mar 23, 2012 4:46 am

King Caesar wrote:Not bad, not bad. I can't picture Godzilka using his claws like that. It's not something he does IMO. Now Varan, he is a different case...


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