Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestions

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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:06 pm

Pssht!! lies!!! ive only attracted four writters/poster that have commented on mine >_>
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:08 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Pssht!! lies!!! ive only attracted four writters/poster that have commented on mine >_>


well dude i only get you and Mothrarocks all the time on mine, King Caesar and GodzillavsZilla occasnionally most of the times, and Saw-U-in-1/2 rarily. so how do you think i feel and also the other reason is because not many people go on the Fan Fiction part of the site.
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:10 pm

Oh i know man, dont worry. Same here >.< but for most part i was actually joking lol
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:11 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Oh i know man, dont worry. Same here >.< but for most part i was actually joking lol


oh i know dude but i jsut wish more people came on the fan fiction part of the forums more often. :mrgreen: also when will this next chapter be up of yours? :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:14 pm

Uhmmm now! lol its little shorter, i just wanted to get the feeling of dread in it, i might add more too it later. But for now its finished and up!! lol and yea poster just cant appreciate reading good stories anymore >_>
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:17 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Uhmmm now! lol its little shorter, i just wanted to get the feeling of dread in it, i might add more too it later. But for now its finished and up!! lol and yea poster just cant appreciate reading good stories anymore >_>


That was too short! Nah JK dude it was really good and im really excited to see more of the story dude. :mrgreen: Keep up the good work dude! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:21 pm

Thank ya, lol as said before i might add some more to it. But glad you are enjoying so far!!!
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:22 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Thank ya, lol as said before i might add some more to it. But glad you are enjoying so far!!!


No problem dude im glad to see it. this is one of the stories im looking foward to alot. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:25 pm

Sweet, lol hope i dont dissapoint! also looking forward to conculsion of yours also and we have completely hijacked Godzilla1703 thread...haha
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:32 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Sweet, lol hope i dont dissapoint! also looking forward to conculsion of yours also and we have completely hijacked Godzilla1703 thread...haha


Thanks dude and OH SHIT! I thought i was on your thread the whole time! :shock:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:35 pm

Lol, nice man and yourwelcome
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:37 pm

It was okay though but you really need to add more to a story, maybe this is just a suggestion though but try aiming for about 500 words in your next chapter but other than that you left it at a cliffhanger. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:38 pm

I agree, but it was interesting, im betting an angurius and Godzilla fight!!
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:39 pm

i just exstended it, and yes ill try that, i most likley wont be able to but ill try

and the funny thing is yall always beat me to posting about a new chapter :D
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:44 pm

I liked it, good job
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:45 pm

Gojira21 wrote:I liked it, good job

thank you and im not really good with human scenes just to let you know
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:47 pm

Neither am it, dont worry
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:48 pm

k lol
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:49 pm

its okay dudes im okay with human scenes but we all have weakness in writing fan fics and stuff. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:50 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:its okay dudes im okay with human scenes but we all have weakness in writing fan fics and stuff. :mrgreen:

yeah and do yall have any suggestions
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