The Rise of Godzilla series discussion

[GodzillavsJason]

Im glad you liked it. so it looks like its going to be a 2 vs 1 vs 1 battle or a 3 vs 1 battle depending on how G-force sees Space Godzilla being the greater threat than both Godzilla and Angurius.

[King Caesar]

I'm gonna be blantantly honest and tell you straight up that it wasn't that great. The phrase "each other" was used excessively in the first few paragraphs. Also, the semicolons aren't right...at all. I would recommend just not using them.

Sorry if I sound like a jerk, but I'm just putting it out there.

[GodzillavsJason]

Nah King Ceasar its cool your just giving me pointers and constructive cristicism which is fine.

[GodzillavsJason]

New chapter is up. Hope you all like the battle!

[MothraRocks]

Great chapter Your getting much better with the paragraphs and punctuation! Loved it, and can't wait too see angurius, rodan, and varan in Tokyo! Nice Easter egg btw!

[GodzillavsJason]

Thanks! Im glad you liked the chapter. Just a quick question did you guys thing this battle between Godzilla, Angurius, Moguera and Space Godzilla was a little bit short and a bit rushed? Also if you guys thought it was rushed then don't worry im going to have the final battle be a long battle and entertaining.

[King Caesar]

You know me...always finding something wrong (no matter what it is). This time was the tense of your verbs. They were incorrectly used in a couple spots here and there. Other than that, not too bad.

Oh...Rised isn't a word; it's with risen or rose.

[GodzillavsJason]

Hey guys quick question what do you hope to see in the last six chapters of the fan fic? Im not running out of ideas or anything i'm just wondering of waht you guys want to see in the last 6 chapters?

[MothraRocks]

Uh, I guess an epic, detailed battle with some twists and a good ending really.

[GodzillavsJason]

Uh, I guess an epic, detailed battle with some twists and a good ending really.

well thats one thing i was planning to do for the final battle. but thanks for the suggestion.

[King Caesar]

I would say something, but i might use it for another story...

I don't know what to say...just make the final clash detailed and gripping (go really slow on it, revise it, ya know, all that jazz)

[GodzillavsJason]

New chapter is up hope you like it and five more chapters till the fan fic ends.

[MothraRocks]

Awesome! Can't wait too see the monster battle and Komebas and Leo team up!!

[GodzillavsJason]

Awesome! Can't wait too see the monster battle and Komebas and Leo team up!!

yep these last 5 chapters will be an all out war. its going to be awesome.

[GodzillavsZilla]

Awesome! Can't wait too see the monster battle and Komebas and Leo team up!!

yep these last 5 chapters will be an all out war. its going to be awesome.

it's going to be like Godzilla Final Wars

[King Caesar]

^ Except every monster will be in it for more than 30 seconds!

[GodzillavsJason]

New chapter is up! hope you all like it!

[GodzillavsZilla]

love the new chapter I like when Varan grows stronger

[MothraRocks]

Real good! I liked how you up graded Varan! Is Godzilla gonna be on anyones side or just his own?

[GodzillavsJason]

love the new chapter I like when Varan grows stronger

thanks im glad you liked the new chapter! I wanted to make Varan stronger because he is kaiju who never gets mentioned much and i think he should get some of the spotlight to and now both sides that are fighting right now have an equal chance against each other.