King Caesar wrote:I'm sorry, I can't help feeling a strange connection to my story, especially the resurrected monster concept...
gigandude wrote:how bout we see king kong in this or seuqel
MothraRocks wrote:Jr is dead? oh well, I think it sounds pretty neat, and the resurrected Rodan from GVD, I read that too! Cool idea to tweak the timeline.
MothraRocks wrote:If you did a cannon to ROM series, you could really build off from it. If you want to, go for it! Mothra told me to tell you she gives full permission
King Caesar wrote:Hmmm...what were people doing in Antartica? And this also bothered me: "In Antartica, a glacier was moving towards Antartica." (or somefin like that). It's redundant. Just say a peculiar glacier or something along those lines
gpulse90 wrote:Nice story. Hope you bring in a classic monster to fight him.
MothraRocks wrote:Interesting storyline! Headorah might be a good choice for a monster. Just a tip, you kinda over used the word 'remarkable'. Try to avoid overusing words
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