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Teaser Comments.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Aug 19, 2014 3:27 pm

Since I saw how out of hand the Teaser thread was with comments and having to cleanup the mess. I present the Teaser Comments where you can comment on someone's trailer or whatever.

So... go at it and start commenting on teasers/trailers.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby wisper15 » Thu Sep 11, 2014 10:17 am

I liked one of them, but I have no idea which one it was. I haven't really been in this forum all that much. Plus, I haven't been able to type up my stories. Writing 'em, easy. Typing? skreeonk; no computer at home.
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Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Biogoji » Wed Sep 17, 2014 5:56 pm

Companion thread to my teaser thread, this where you can comment on teasers, not in the Teaser threads itself.

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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby 2004Zilla » Fri Sep 19, 2014 9:45 pm

Biogoji wrote:So in the Forum that everyone that's better than you in everyway........ I mean the experienced writers use

What the hell? Did you really have to post something this rude?
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Sep 19, 2014 9:56 pm

Let's stop.

I deleted the stuff that would make people mad. So let's knock this poop off and if i see anyone discussing this from any angle then I will report you to the mods.

Besides these two threads are where you post your teasers and comment. There's not going to be another place in this section for this type of thing. Get use to it.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby 2004Zilla » Sun Sep 21, 2014 3:50 pm

Saansilt wrote:Okay, so my teaser is up.
Toughts?

Fix the spelling errors. Besides that, it's pretty good.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Kubo » Mon Sep 22, 2014 5:04 am

I enjoyed it. Got a nice bit of tension and action and doesn't spoil everything about the plot! Good job!
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Oct 05, 2014 9:06 pm

Trailer is up. What do you guys think?
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby 2004Zilla » Sun Oct 05, 2014 10:58 pm

Oh so you weren't really lying about making up Toho Kingdom City first.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby Kubo » Mon Oct 06, 2014 9:11 am

I liked it. Lookin' forward to the big project ahead. :)
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Oct 06, 2014 10:43 am

Kubo wrote:I liked it. Lookin' forward to the big project ahead. :)


Thanks bro, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby pta917 » Mon Oct 06, 2014 12:05 pm

I am in no way excited by what is going on... Oh my God this is great news!
Can't wait to see how this will evolve.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby SenseiTeriyakiV » Mon Oct 06, 2014 3:08 pm

GojiraFan333 wrote:Toholandia: The Adventure Begins Teaser is up! Not much,but any thoughts?

Add more suspense, drama. Make the dialogue feel like its coming from a real person, maybe. Try not to just stick every detail in without breaks. Maybe add in a a place where the character takes a sip of water, or something.

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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby Biogoji » Mon Oct 06, 2014 10:22 pm

Looks amazing, I wasn't around for Life in TK city but I have read all three and love em, can't wait to see where you end up taking this.

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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby ernesth100 » Thu Oct 09, 2014 5:53 pm

So, I'm doing a Halloween Special for the Mercanary Apes. It'll be awesome.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Oct 15, 2014 10:12 pm

New trailer is up!

ALL ABOARD THE HYPE AND SPECULATION TRAIN!!!!!
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby Kubo » Thu Oct 16, 2014 8:33 am

The badassery levels are rising!!!
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Kubo » Thu Oct 16, 2014 8:36 am

FOUR seems like a shitload of wat. So many things happening, so many creatures...it was a bit confusing to follow.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby toho_guy01 » Thu Oct 16, 2014 9:00 am

Goji, you didn't really do very good on the teaser for FOUR. Oh well, you are not going to listen to us anyway and just make THREE, TWO, TWO AND A HALF, SIX, SEVEN, ONE AND A QUARTER and ZERO anyway.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby 2004Zilla » Thu Oct 16, 2014 10:58 am

Yeah there's to many creatures from different franchises. When you're doing a crossover, you need a lot more backstory than what you provide.
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