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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby pta917 » Wed Aug 20, 2014 9:26 am

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Godzilla1703 wrote:Eh. Okay then


Will you write it now?

Seeing as how for what I have written out, my story seems to take a different route than yours. Maybe so.


Yeah right it, there's always going to be differences.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Aug 21, 2014 11:13 am

Hey guys, I'm thinking of doing another Last Writer Standing competition, but the thing is I don't want to make it unless it gets quite a high demand. Such as I want at least six people (Like last year's) or more. If it's no less then I won't do it and also seeing if people will be committed to it.

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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby Godzilla1703 » Thu Aug 21, 2014 3:22 pm

pta917 wrote:Yeah right it, there's always going to be differences.

I also had an idea that I can't give much information on. But it is about writing an origin story for the original King Ghidorah him having past affiliation with Ultraman King and revealing he was once locked in the space prison.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby Biogoji » Thu Aug 21, 2014 11:06 pm

Godzilla1703 wrote:
pta917 wrote:Yeah right it, there's always going to be differences.

I also had an idea that I can't give much information on. But it is about writing an origin story for the original King Ghidorah him having past affiliation with Ultraman King and revealing he was once locked in the space prison.


That would be awesome.

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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 14, 2014 12:36 pm

Okay, so I had an idea that's been brewing in my head for a while. It's both a call back and a parody that the senior writers will get which means it's a recurring joke that I kept doing in 2011.

It's a parody on pairings and shippings in which it will be a Dr. Mafune/Yuri pairing.

I'll tell you a little what's it about. Dr. Mafune is teaching at a college when college student, Yuri first walks in and the set their eyes on one another. Will they fall in love? Will Katsura accept Yuri into their little family? Will Akane be jealous? Will Yuri and Mafune live deal with each others' backage? Find out in..... Age is only a Number.

Also, featuring Godzilla, Titanosaurus, Mechagodzilla, Mothra, Baragon, King Ghidorah, The Blackhole Aliens, Coach Stenz, Ishiro Serizawa and possibly the TK Crew.

Note that this is suppose to be a stupid story that isn't suppose to be taken seriously and if this is a sign up story then you would be playing over the top versions of yourselves. It will also feature character sterotypes from that king of genre both in film and of course Fan Fiction. I'm not saying I'm going to do it, but it's an idea to ponder around with.

So what do you guys think?
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby Kubo » Sun Sep 14, 2014 12:46 pm

You had me hooked at Dr. Mafune/Yuri. I demand a sign-up thread, pronto!
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Postby Gojira21 » Sun Sep 14, 2014 1:34 pm

A sign up thread? A SIGN UP THREAD??
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby Biogoji » Sun Sep 14, 2014 2:54 pm

Kubo wrote:You had me hooked at Dr. Mafune/Yuri. I demand a sign-up thread, pronto!


Same, The Jack demands a Signup Story.

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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 14, 2014 3:20 pm

So whats the best way to pull of a team fight in a story? Should I do each team member fighting 1 by 1 or like switch back in forth from time to time?
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby Kubo » Sun Sep 14, 2014 3:23 pm

ernesth100 wrote:So whats the best way to pull of a team fight in a story? Should I do each team member fighting 1 by 1 or like switch back in forth from time to time?

I find switching around to be the best way to keep the action interesting. Otherwise, it feels like a sequence of fight scenes, and even if they're good, it can end up dragging.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 14, 2014 3:24 pm

Kubo wrote:
ernesth100 wrote:So whats the best way to pull of a team fight in a story? Should I do each team member fighting 1 by 1 or like switch back in forth from time to time?

I find switching around to be the best way to keep the action interesting. Otherwise, it feels like a sequence of fight scenes, and even if they're good, it can end up dragging.

Ah, I see. Thanks for the advice :).
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 14, 2014 4:50 pm

Important bits? Like just the fighting and not whats going on in the background?
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby Kubo » Sun Sep 14, 2014 5:06 pm

ernesth100 wrote:Important bits? Like just the fighting and not whats going on in the background?

Don't try and squeeze in every punch. Keep it fresh and get the clutch hits in.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 14, 2014 5:11 pm

Oh okay. Does anyone think it would be a good idea to try to right some slow motion moments into the fight? Like when something is about to damage the character and everything slows down around him for a bit.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby three » Sun Sep 14, 2014 5:11 pm

ernesth100 wrote:Oh okay. Does anyone think it would be a good idea to try to right some slow motion moments into the fight? Like when something is about to damage the character and everything slows down around him for a bit.


not particularly, no.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 14, 2014 5:14 pm

three wrote:
ernesth100 wrote:Oh okay. Does anyone think it would be a good idea to try to right some slow motion moments into the fight? Like when something is about to damage the character and everything slows down around him for a bit.


not particularly, no.

Okay just wanted to know.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby DinoMaster » Mon Sep 15, 2014 6:53 am

So, I had a bit of an idea bouncing around in my head and thought I'd see how it would go here. It's in the rough right now, but I think it's got a good chance. Just testing the waters to see if there would be an interest.


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It has been years since the 'Age of Monsters', with most of them vanishing back to the depths, the skies, and the earth. Humanity has moved on, the technology gained to deter them being used to raise themselves to a new pinnacle in history and comfort in life. But this does not mean strife and conflict have vanished. Terrorist organizations are more organized than ever, and present challenges to the EDF. And what happens when the monsters start to reappear once more, threatening life as we know it again?


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Godzilla: Role will most likely be limited in nature
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Terrorist organizations and ilk.
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Postby Kubo » Mon Sep 15, 2014 6:56 am

It sounds like a good idea to me, though I think including aliens would make the plot too top-heavy and overwhelming. Keep it earthly, IMO.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby DinoMaster » Mon Sep 15, 2014 7:12 am

Kubo wrote:It sounds like a good idea to me, though I think including aliens would make the plot too top-heavy and overwhelming. Keep it earthly, IMO.


Thanks for the feedback. For the aliens, I had the idea that in seeking sanctuary on earth, they would trade their technology as a trade off. The alien 'terrorist' group would be ones trying to take the planet as their own. But it's just an idea at this point.


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