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Postby godzillafan1954 » Sat Mar 11, 2017 6:50 pm

Greyshot151 wrote:Ever need some helpful information but can't find it? Is a mere description not adequate enough to compliment your writing style and you do not have the time to watch every movie you need to? Well have no fear as this thread will solve your problems. Basically if you have a question that needs to be solved for the KWC ask it here. Personally this thread is exactly what I wished for when researching Zone Fighter so I hope it helps tremendously. :mrgreen: Anyway, to the rules!

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1. Answer the question asked, do not judge, mock or infuriate the recipient.
2. If you have a question about the actual KWC, go to the KWC FAQ. This is more for like monster's motives, traits, characteristics or actual human characters.
MY EXAMPLE - What is the character of Goro Ibuki (Jet Jaguar's Inventor) like?
3. Try to keep your questions to the point.

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Postby Coobzilla03 » Sat Mar 11, 2017 7:17 pm

This will be especially useful considering all the non-Godzilla guys. :)
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Postby KaijuX » Sun Mar 12, 2017 1:58 pm

Well, there needs to be a reason for the General Discussion thread to exist. :P But whatevs, lol
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Postby Birdman » Thu Mar 16, 2017 4:00 am

I'm having some issues determining the correct grammar for some sentences. Look at these examples and tell me which one is correct:

"A beam of thin purple energy ripped through the air."/"A beam of thin, purple energy ripped through the air."

"A powerful golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."/"A powerful, golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."
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Postby godzillafan1954 » Thu Mar 16, 2017 4:03 am

Birdman wrote:I'm having some issues determining the correct grammar for some sentences. Look at these examples and tell me which one is correct:

"A beam of thin purple energy ripped through the air."/"A beam of thin, purple energy ripped through the air."

"A powerful golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."/"A powerful, golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."

I'm not sure, but I think it's the second (for both).
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Postby DinoMaster » Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:00 am

In terms of grammar? It's the second one, technically.

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Postby Birdman » Thu Mar 16, 2017 7:15 am

DinoMaster wrote:In terms of grammar? It's the second one, technically.

Technically? Elaborate.
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Postby SenseiTeriyakiV » Thu Mar 16, 2017 7:32 am

Birdman wrote:
DinoMaster wrote:In terms of grammar? It's the second one, technically.

Technically? Elaborate.

I think he means that the first one sounded better, but it isn't grammatically correct.

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Postby {---HYPERZeTToN---} » Thu Mar 16, 2017 9:45 am

Birdman wrote:I'm having some issues determining the correct grammar for some sentences. Look at these examples and tell me which one is correct:

"A beam of thin purple energy ripped through the air."/"A beam of thin, purple energy ripped through the air."

"A powerful golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."/"A powerful, golden blast crashed into the plating of its chest."


The second for each. When placing two adjectives together, there should always be a comma in between. For example, "The glimmering, hypnotic shaft of light exemplified the essence of angelic beauty, tranquility trapping the monster's thoughts. That quickly changed to hellacious agony when the katana-like appendage came down lightning quick, gashing his chest wide open and splattering his cold blood over himself and his attacker."

The second sentence was unnecessary but I thought it sounded cool :lol:
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Postby DinoMaster » Wed Mar 22, 2017 5:18 am

Birdman wrote:Technically? Elaborate.


It's a grammar thing, and to be perfectly frank grammar issues like this aren't necessarily the biggest thing we look at in depth normally. At least, not from my end. Might be a higher up thing.

Anywho, I'm in need of a little help. I'm trying to write a match between the Brontosaurus and the '33 King Kong, and I don't have an arena. I was planning on doing it after the events of '33, and the places I had thought of were too young (Area 51 wasn't build till the 50's, Alcatraz was an active prision til the 60's, etc.). So, if anyone has a reccomendation that'd be a little more interesting than the usual city, I'm all ears.

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Postby GodzillavsRayquaza » Wed Mar 22, 2017 8:20 am

DinoMaster wrote:Anywho, I'm in need of a little help. I'm trying to write a match between the Brontosaurus and the '33 King Kong, and I don't have an arena. I was planning on doing it after the events of '33, and the places I had thought of were too young (Area 51 wasn't build till the 50's, Alcatraz was an active prision til the 60's, etc.). So, if anyone has a reccomendation that'd be a little more interesting than the usual city, I'm all ears.

Skull Island maybe?
Or, since it takes place after 33, and Kong is dead at that point, you could set the match in hell or some other afterlife setting?
Or maybe just a random forest...
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Postby SenseiTeriyakiV » Wed Mar 22, 2017 9:01 am

How about the Brazilian plateau from the lost world? You could even have an interaction between Kong and the ape men. Then again, I'm not sure how Kong would get there...

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Postby GodzillavsRayquaza » Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:04 pm

What is the catalyst for Zetton going EX? Or just the catalyst(s) for monsters going EX in general?
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Postby Birdman » Wed Apr 05, 2017 4:53 am

GodzillavsRayquaza wrote:What is the catalyst for Zetton going EX? Or just the catalyst(s) for monsters going EX in general?

They have to be controlled by a Reionic or be exposed to Dark Thunder Energy.
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Postby Birdman » Wed Apr 05, 2017 4:54 am

Can Spideros actually fire an energy beam? Because it never demonstrates such an ability in the footage that I can find.
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Postby DinoMaster » Thu Apr 27, 2017 9:59 am

So, it's been awhile since I've brushed up on my Showa lore, but Showa Godzilla is a prehistoric creature awoken by the atomic bomb tests, correct? I was thinking of writing a match with the fella, but I wanted to check on it.

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Postby Birdman » Thu Apr 27, 2017 11:14 am

DinoMaster wrote:So, it's been awhile since I've brushed up on my Showa lore, but Showa Godzilla is a prehistoric creature awoken by the atomic bomb tests, correct? I was thinking of writing a match with the fella, but I wanted to check on it.

That was the origin for 1954 Godzilla. Showa… I don't think it's really explained where he came from. He and Anguirus just show up. Since he is the same species as '54, I would not say it would be inaccurate to give him the same origins as his predecessor.

Edit: Yep, Godzilla Showa and Anguirus were awoken by hydrogen bomb testing.
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Postby Birdman » Sun Jun 04, 2017 9:33 am

How does Burtannus' electric current power work? Is it a beam-like attack or does it require physical contact?
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Postby GodzillavsRayquaza » Sun Jun 04, 2017 10:35 am

Birdman wrote:How does Burtannus' electric current power work? Is it a beam-like attack or does it require physical contact?

It is a beam.
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Postby shippersdreamer » Mon Jun 05, 2017 8:08 am

Would it be alright if I explained that Jirass had some Godzilla DNA in him? Considering that he looks almost identical to Godzilla and I think he was created instead of naturally born, I think it'd make sense.
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