1. I am currently writing a segment that does just thatKaijuCanuck wrote:I'm also still a little confused as to what's going with Gabriel. Where is he, is he on the island with the team? Is he embedded in China? Who exactly is he talking to on the phone?JAGzilla wrote:Just a suggestion, but you might want to develop him a bit more before actually dropping that big a hammer on him. Establish why the Chinese government considers him threatening enough to warrant such an extreme response, you know?Andrew the Gojifan wrote:In case my message didn`t get through, I`d like to volunteer Thanatos to be the kaiju that gets nuked.
2. Retcon time! You referenced him in the first post I think and that threw me into chaos. I`ll change my posts and have him be with the team since he is a geographer. Regarding who he`s talking to, I have the idea that it`s someone who knows about Mokushi and is cluing him in, if this is the case, would Blade or anyone else that knows about Mokushi want to kill him and his informant?
By the way, can Mokushi and Hanjiru sense the thoughts of other kaiju and humans?
That was my original name for Gabriel until I decided to be more originalZarm wrote:Right, so... Mumbai got a lot darker than I'd intended. That's why I always try to avoid 'dark' in my writing- my imagination's too active, and I get in way too deep.
So, I'm just going to make this my 'baseline' for major kaiju rampages, assume something like this is probably happening somewhere, and never revisit this kind of POV again.
(In case the timeline is unclear, both the start of the F-15 scene and Carnaris' emergence happened just before the full two hours, with the latter scene in Mumbai advancing this two-hour new time period forward another half-hour or so, so any scenes taking place immediately after the jump would be happening concurrent with the start of the attack on Mumbai. Sorry if that's confusing; I'm operating on less sleep than I'd like to be).
Added in 1 hour 36 minutes 36 seconds:Also, references to Andrew twice in the last post- I assume are supposed to be Gabriel?KaijuCanuck wrote:I'm also still a little confused as to what's going with Gabriel. Where is he, is he on the island with the team? Is he embedded in China? Who exactly is he talking to on the phone?