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2087 NOIR
In the mid-2030s the world carved itself up again. Japan and the United States effectively merged, creating a technocratic conglomerate. The Niho-American Conglomerate, it was called or NAC for short. In response, China and Russia decided to merge to even the playing field, SinoRussia was born.
Around the same time a massive city was constructed in America dubbed Terminus. This was to be the largest city in mankind ever constructed, and was to serve as a beacon for technological advancement in the coming age. Its construction began in 2035 and it finished in 2052.
HEPHAESTUS-- the highest ranking law enforcement agency in Terminus - dealt with legal incidents between humans and Artificials: cybernetic humans and eventually androids. While very few incidents occurred between the Artificials and humans, several larger incidents took place in the late 2050s. Eventually, this led to the great Artificial Crash of 2067.

After a near decade of milling about android rights, the NAC was faced with an even larger issue. The orbital war which took place from 2082 to 2084 was the largest instance of interplanetary warfare since the great artificial crash years prior. Millions of lives were lost, cities were wrecked, and The world was thrown into it a new age of intense scrutiny and fear.
The year is now 2087. Humans and Artificials do not get along well. And the line is being blurred between such boundaries. The so called "Cyber-Cops" of HEPHAESTUS and "Regulars", the normal police are in a Cold War of sorts, fueled by the fears of being obsolete.The shadow of the great city keeps everything in the dark. The crime once thought eliminated from society is seeping back up from the cracks again. And technology is not only our best friend, but our worst enemy.


Welcome yet again, friends, I welcome you to 2087 Noir, a look at a bleak future. Through many crashes, technology has advanced and regressed and the same goes for the culture. Now, the cops are not the only characters, there is also creatures beyond our knowledge in this story...

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Name: Zachary Turner
Age: 27
Species: Artificial
Gender: Male
Appearance: Tall, slim, clean-shaven man with dark brown, almost black hair. His eyes, artificial as they are, are inhuman black and green which make him seem unapproachable. To hide this, he wears sunglasses to hide the fact that he is an artificial. His right arm is also cybernetic, an older model that freezes up sometimes, he wears black gloves to hide that too. He often wears a trenchcoat and other concealing outfits, he disliked
Personality: He’s been living in a world that has been giving him shit since the start and he still tries to do the right thing. Not without a cynical sense of sarcasm and a dull sense of acceptance that the world seems to be out for him but still generally kind. He has a distrust for the “Cyber-Cops”.
Backstory: Born in 2060 to a struggling family, Zach was born blind and proved to be a challenge for his family. Father died when he was young, Mother was loving but quickly became an alcoholic and died when she was 15. He got his artificial eyes when he was 18 and applied for the military. Then, he served in the Orbital War, a proud soldier. He lost his right arm in the War and had to receive a cybernetic arm. Figuring this would be his chance, he applied for HEPHAESTUS and was declined for unknown reasons. Determined to do good, he decided to join the Terminus Police Force, an underfunded organization but still relatively competent. The “Regular Artificial” roams the streets, solving crimes and gaining a name for himself.
Abilities/Weapons: He has a “zoom in” feature on his robotic eyes and they automatically adjust the lighting in the room, his eyesight is above an average human’s. His right arm possesses twice the strength of a normal man’s, when it’s not frozen in place. He holds an old revolver, an unregistered and reliable weapon for him along with the modern pistols, which are pretty good but leave him paranoid.
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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Name: Malcolm, MS-GAUhv-035-00815-C
Age: 12 (Chronologically) - constructed in 2075
Species: Android
Gender: Male

Appearance: Malcolm stands 195.8 cm tall, exactly. He weighs 436.19 kg, when all of his components are together. His body, composed of a tungsten endoskeleton overlain with carbon nanotube musculature, resembles a dark grey skinless man of heavy build. His frame’s hands, face and neck are usually covered in a false skin, the seams of which have become visible, and the surface of which has become frayed with time and wear. The skin itself is coloured a generic dark beige tone not meant to reflect any one ethnicity. While his actual eyes are no more than a set of mobile lenses, he is equipped with a set of false eyes with amber irises, designed to appear soft and nonthreatening. His face is designed to appear ‘handsome’ to the general public, but is considered inexpressive and flat to many who observe him. His scalp piece bears short-cropped hair that is described by his manufacturers as ‘sandy blonde’. Malcolm covers his body in a set of dull green coveralls, emblazoned with a logo marking him as a Mercator Systems android.

Personality: As a 'dumb' AI, Malcolm is, for lack of a better term, simple. He doesn’t want much from life, nor does he expect much from it. He has no grand desires, and wishes for nothing more than to have a purpose. He exists to fulfil the directives given to him by whoever he considers his superiors, and generally attempts to continue living the same way that he did during his time in the factory, despite how vastly different the outside world is to those conditions. Ultimately, Malcolm has a severe lack of understanding regarding those around him; he doesn’t fully understand that there are people that hate and fear him for what he is, nor does he realise that other actually care for him. He knows that humans are fragile, and takes special care to avoid hurting any, often not even realising that they may desire to harm him (though they most likely cannot), but does not understand that human behavior, values and needs differ greatly from his own. He cannot understand what Artificials are, as he has no means of comprehending that someone can be human and have mechanical components. He also cannot fully comprehend the nature of more advanced androids and AI. Still, he attempts to approach each the same way he approaches every subject. His hobbies include watching a single television channel, staring at the wall in his room, and making tiny sculptures out of scraps of metal.

Backstory: As a Mercator Systems General Assembly Unit: Humanoid Variant, MS-GAUhv-035-00815-C was designed as a cheap but effective industrial worker, and was assigned a place at an assembly plant, where he would piece together vehicles and machinery almost every hour of the day. At night, he would retire to his living space to recharge, and would start again in the morning. It was, to him, a good life. However, once the orbital war was brought to a head, the plant turned in less and less of a profit as the demand for many of their products decreased. The use of the GAUhvs, once such a cost-saver, now was a hindrance. They didn’t need machines that could walk and talk, that could hoist entire cars above their heads. Many of the GAUhvs were decommissioned, and either powered down or outright scrapped as a mercy kill. A GAUhv could not exist without a purpose. 00815-C was one of the few spared. By the war’s end, it turned out that even the harshest culling of their labourers and downsizing of their facility could not save the factory, and with growing anti-Artificial sentiments among the local populace, they were forced to decommission the last of the androids, choosing to simply tell them to leave, knowing they’d obey. 00815-C walked out of the plant on August 3rd, 2086, into a world he didn’t understand. It was there he would wander, enduring both the elements and the aggression of those who hated him for simply being created. Two months after he left the plant, he was taken in by the owner of a small convenience store, a man who had supported android rights in the 50s and still believed in them thirty years later. The wayward GAUhv was given a small room to stay in, and access to a recharging station. It was then that his newfound employer the name ‘Malcolm’, after the mascot of a brand of energy bar that he was constantly having to restock. Malcolm may not realise how fortunate he is, or how much better he’s treated at the store, but he has a purpose yet again. And that is enough.

Abilities: Despite being a cheaper than average model, the MS-GAUhv-035 is notably well designed for its purpose, and Malcolm is no different. Each component of Malcolm's being is designed for extreme conditions, to make him a walking, talking industrial machine. His carbon nanotube muscle array is capable of sorting masses up to and including 12 tonnes, and his frame can endure nearly 310 GPa of constant pressure and temperatures up to 1923 K before being severely damaged. His chassis is radiation-hardened to allow for operation within irradiated environments. He still carries a built in plasma cutter, impact driver and rivet gun from his time in the factory, although these deplete his battery at an increased rate. His most notable trait with the potential for doing damage is the extreme kinetic energy his strength and mass lend to his physical strikes. A weak punch, delivered with minimal effort, surpasses the energy of a shot from a sniper rifle. A strong one dwarfs the energy carried by an anti-tank round. His maximum effort strike utilising the full extent of his body's capabilities, can deliver over 600 Kilojoules of energy and travels at 99 m/s should it ever be attempted. Should Malcolm desire to kill, there is little that could endure his assault. Therein lies his greatest limitation, however; Malcolm was built to serve humans, with directives to keep them from harm. Even when faced with an opponent who seeks to extinguish his life forever, he may not even realise that there is a true conflict at all, and when he does he will simply opt to restrain an attacker in such a manner that they are not injured. Malcolm's power source has a charge that can last three months with general activities, but is depleted at an exponentially increased rate for every tool that Malcolm has active. Because of his extreme density, he cannot float in water, and will often cause damage to his environment even if he is careful. His sheer mass and durability also means that attempting to strike or shoot him is like attempting to do the same to a block of concrete; he won't be harmed or even knocked back, but anything hitting him will be all the worse for it.
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Name: Chang'e Alabaster
Age: 24 (Appearance-wise, atleast. Real age is withheld information)
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Height: 7ft 2
Weight: 310 lbs
Alias: Idol of Terminus

Appearance: Chang'e is a very, very tall girl, standing head and shoulders above most of her peers. She wears a black cardigan over a white dress shirt, unbuttoned at the top, with a loose black and white tie around her neck. Her golden blonde hair is bunched up into two giant ponytails, each larger than her own head and reaching down to her waist, and with strawberry pink on the tips. Her miniskirt, just long enough to preserve modesty, is crimson and polka dot, with platform heels and red laces for shoes. Her skin is somewhat pale, and her eyes are a deep emerald green.

Personality/History: Chang'e is a highly eccentric, playable girl that loves to be out with the people, and interact with them. She is the people's idol, the very face of Terminus. Chang'e feeds of the publicity she has received, with her face on every magazine, on the news itself, and the head of one of Terminus's human oriented singing groups, "The Heavens". This has created quite the workload on the girl, but she has managed to balance everything out and still retain her sanity. One particular concert nearly ended in tragedy when the noise from it attracted Pro-Artificial extremists, who tried to crash the concert and use it as a staging ground for their own demonstration. The incident was quickly resolved and the extremists taken down and kidnapped, but this only helped to foster the growing rift between the authentic humans and the artificial and androids.

Talents: Chang'e is a highly skilled singer and fashionista, THE crowning idol of Terminus. Her unearthly beauty and cheerful disposition have lead to her gaining a massive fanbase within the city, and even entire sections of the pro-human factions have pledged undying loyalty to her and her alone. She's also a big eater, constantly eating to keep her metabolism up. She's also reasonably skilled in hand to hand combat, claiming it's needed for such a big star like her. "After all, if someone gets past my guards and tried to get at me, I have to defend myself."
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Accepted but hope we got more.
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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Name: Estrella
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Species: Human (?)
Height: 6ft 5
Weight: 245 lbs
Alias: The Brains of the Heavens.

Appearance: Estrella is a tall girl with pitch black hair that ends in twin drill pigtails as large as her own body. Her skin is pale, almost ivory in lighting, and her eyes are golden with hues of red. Her attire is a white blouse with a Peter-Pan collar, a black jacket that includes white ribbon lacing down the sleeves, fastened by a simple ribbon across her chest to show her red tie with a butterfly pattern on it and the waist of her skirt, which is many-tiered and features white lace.

Estrella wears knee-high stockings trimmed in ladder lace, red mary janes with a thick heel, a white lace headpiece.

Personality/History: Estrella is one of Chang'es closest friends, and a fellow helper with not only the idol status, but in terms of keeping her safe. She only having joined in the last year following the attack from the Pro-Artificials, when it became clear that the city wasn't quite safe enough from the actions of the extremists, Chang'e brought in the girl, who was all too pleased to be of service. At first, her stoic disposition and emotionless manners were rather offputting to the others around her but they slowly grew accustomed to it, especially once security went above and beyond what it was before. She is a quiet person, only speaking when she feels is necessary.

Talents: Though not as popular as Chang'e, Estrella is capable of singing just as well as her, and the two are often seen in duet acts. One is rarely without the other around. She's also fairly intelligent, seeing things the others have glossed over or failed to realize. But it is the realm of security and body guard where she truly shines. She is the brains to Chang'e beauty, and is never away from the girl. With a six inch knife up her sleeves, and a more modern pistol on her, and finely tuned eyesight and hearing, Estrella is a dangerous figure to make an enemy of. There are even rumors that she isn't even human, but instead an android built by Chang'e, though both are quick to deny these rumors. Her fluid swift movements and mannerisms don't help with this theory...
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Could use some others to pop up.
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
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-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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Workin on it.
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Name: Orion Phoenix
Age: 25
Species: Artificial
Gender: Male
Appearance: Pretty much every single part of Orion is cybernetic, aside from his head, (which is always covered by a titanium, and aerodynamic helmet, with a permanent mouth guard, and a singular, V-shaped, red visor running across his eyes). The rest of Orion's body is composed of an incredibly strong, but light weight carbontanium weave with steel inserts throughout. Aside from his glowing, red visor, Orion's body is completely black with only the carbon fiber weaving being seen in broad daylight. Because of how he looks, Orion has been dubbed the "modern day ninja", by Terminus's residents. While having no actual muscle, Orion's artificial ones are very lean but extremely built, giving the cyborg a very sleek and sharp silhouette.
Height: 6'8
Personality: Orion is, for the most part, very calm and matter-of-fact. While he doesn't mean to, Orion can sometimes come off as fairly smug and anti-social. This is due in part, to his enhancements giving him a very straightforward, and business-only outlook on life. A tragic event that made him what he is now, might also have something to do with it. To allies and "friends", Orion is laid back and keeps to himself. To enemies however, Orion is merciless and likes to take matters into his own hands when dealing with crime. While he is a well-known ally to the police, and assists them as much as he can, Orion still prefers to do things his way. He isn't afraid to kill, rather than subdue. In fact, Orion prefers the former, as it guarantees that the scumbag will never commit another, heinous act. This however, leads some people to believe Orion is a menace to society, and ruins whatever image Terminus has.
Backstory: Not much is known about Orion's past, aside from the fact that he, and his fiance, were both involved in a violent explosion at the age of 18. This in turn, rendered his entire body useless, and forced Orion to undergo extensive treatment. His fiance was killed, and her body was completely destroyed. Because he likes ninjas, doctors modeled his new body after that of one, albeit a much more modern looking version. Orion, hysterical and angered from the death of his love, made it his duty to become the city's vigilante. He vowed to make damn sure that no one would ever have to experience what he did. Being Terminus's single vigilante, Orion has become very well known by the people over the years, and very well feared and hated by the city's various crime associations. While he used to be an adversary to the police, Orion has since become a powerful ally and "friend" to them over the years.
Abilities: Packing the latest cybernetic enhancements, and state-of-the-art technology, Orion is a very deadly individual. He can lift up to 6 times his own weight, bend and fracture all but the strongest materials, and splinter wood with ease. Taking martial arts up until the incident, Orion is an exceptional hand-to-hand combatant, and knows all the critical spots to strike on the human body. Being relatively lightweight for his size, Orion is very fast and precise, and can usually outpace a car depending on how fast it's going. Orion's visor packs every bit of information he needs and then some, acting like an extension of his body and working in tandem with him. Orion however, doesn't use any of his enhancements/tech as a crutch; he is very intelligent and clever on his own. While his body is durable, Orion is still more susceptible to gunfire due to its lightweight construction. Powerful EMP bursts also have the potential to knock Orion out cold.
Weapons: In his right arm, Orion packs a miniature sniper rifle, with a range limited to 300 meters. The ammo used are tipped with explosives, and are armor piercing. On his left arm, Orion packs a plasma rifle for all other firefights. The bolts have the potential to burn through most materials, but are limited to only 10 per magazine, and the rifle itself takes a while to cool down. This is why Orion's preferred weapon of choice, are two hand forged, folded steel, and clay tempered katana on his back. The blades themselves are razor sharp, and can easily lop off a limb with a clean and precise cut. To get out of a nasty situation, Orion possesses a sonic blaster in his right palm that disorients his opponents.
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Yeah tone it down, disabling artificials is kinda a no-no.
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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's very...very Genji.
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I think the 25 times his own weight is still a bit ridiculous considering how grounded other artificials are. The most advanced human artificials should only be strong enough for 5 or 6 max and even thats streching it. And the Noir in the title should tell you this is a bit more...grounded than that.
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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Better, yes. But my one major critique is the technology level. The Great Crash sorta brought technology to a point of stagnation, with very little progress whatsoever. I don't think we'd quite have carbotitanium just yet, among other things.

And as GTK said. We're a sort of sci-fi noir thing. Think "Blade Runner".
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Carbotanium is actually a material used in high performance vehicles of today. The name is strange, yes, but it's actually something that exists in today's world. If I still need to change something, that's fine, but the material is an actual thing.

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carbotanium
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Godzilla165 wrote:Carbotanium is actually a material used in high performance vehicles of today. The name is strange, yes, but it's actually something that exists in today's world.

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carbotanium
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Haha yeah, my older brother just took me to Italy to spec myself a Huayra as a surprise gift. I swear, as pretty as it already looks, pictures do not do the material justice at all. It's a strange name to say though, isn't it? "Carbotanium." The stuff exists though :).
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My biggest problem is that he seems a bit action-oriented for a Noir story, there will be little fighting and more crime solving and character interactions. Fighting was generally planned to be gun fights and bar brawls. Not to mention...as MUTO alluded to, he seems to not mesh with established lore or setting.
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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Well, I wasn't even planning on him fighting everything that moved to begin with. Orion is/was going to mostly be in the shadows, and only get brought in by a call from the police or whoever, when shit got really bad. Other than that, he'd be doing his own thing in the form of: stopping low level criminals, help stopping crimes, using his various enhancements to help the police crack tough cases, and whatever else a well known vigilante does.

Perhaps I didn't describe him right, but Orion, while being very deadly, is essentially a Batman-type of character with cybernetic enhancements, and not Jason Statham. Don't let the ninja body, and whatever else fool you.
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Ah...accepted. We may ask for minor edits but the character for the most part is accepted.
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-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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I'd like to chime in here and say that Orion lifting 25 times his body weight isn't nearly as bad as it sounds.

I did the math and, assuming that Orion is meant to be light for his size, and fairly agile, we could be looking at a form composed of a Carbotanium 'shell' and skeleton.

Running some numbers, assuming he's built like a 2.03 metre human who is on the slender side, i.e. only 90kg, with a mass composed of 39% muscle, and ignoring things like organs and fat, Orion should only weigh about 109.31 kg.

This is on the heavier side for a human... but it's light for a man of that size. RoryMccann is an actor who is notably well-built and is only a couple centimetres shorter than Orion. They're almost the same weight, too.

So, at 25 times is own mass, Orion should be capable of lifting around 2.7 tonnes (SI tonnes, not US ones). This isn't crazy for what I've calculated before. Androids such as my Malcolm and Justin's character have musculature that can support massive weights.

Justin's Kaya (still in writing), an extremely light 40 kg android, should be able to lift 1.5 - 2.96 tonnes based on my estimates.

Malcolm, a fairly massive industrial android, can lift 8.3 tonnes.

So, while strong, Orion would still be beat out by the androids, who should be stronger than a human of similar size.

However, this is all moot, as Godzilla 165 has rectified his description.

At 6 times his weight, he's lifting 654.66 kg. He'd still beat out the strongest men today in terms of lifting strength.

Also, if anyone would like more calculations like this, or want to know things like character weights and strengths - or cost, even - just message me, and I'll be happy to help!
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