World of Steel discussion thread

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World of Steel discussion thread

Postby Missingno. » Mon Jul 04, 2016 6:04 pm

Long ago before the events of Battle of the Multiverse, there existed a world located in an entirely different galaxy which was inconceivably rich with ore, known as Solderon, and an orbiting moon that bore earth-like qualities, known as Promontory. The two planets were eons ahead of Earth technologically, thanks to the the massive amounts of raw metals that could be extracted from Solderon. So advanced in fact, that humans had a way of prolonging life. It became standard issue to implant a chip into a newborn child's head at birth, so it could copy memories from the brain, and when the person died, they could be reincarnated as a machine; if they had no record of wrongdoing through their life. When the machine was completed, they went to the "World of Steel" (Solderon), where they lived with all of the other machines who were once people. From there, a machine could upgrade itself however it pleased. Significant political, militial or heroic figures that were reconstructed were inducted into a nine-member council, known collectively as the Iron Council. At times, the two races that inhabited each respective planet would quarrel with each other, starting small-scale armed conflicts that often lead to fatalities on either side.

While little regard actually exists about it, over time the machines begin to go corrupt, and many will not realize it upon quick glance. Naturally, if the machine is older, than the more it is likely built up, and makes a very formidable opponent in a rampant state. In this story, a tale of such an incident is seen, and details how history and time of the multiverse was nearly altered in its entirety from a single machine...

This fanfic uses BoTM (Battle of the Multiverse) characters before BotM happened, so the bios are altered to account for the time of occurrence.

Name: Metallian
Age: N/A
Gender: N/A (not identifiable in general manner, as it is a sentient machine, though traits imply a male presence)
Height: 22 meters
Weight: 50 tons

Appearance: An intimidating, ram-horned, tiger-like land assault creature with Gatling guns, tank tracks, and two arms that end in sharp claws. Primarily colored red and blue.

Bio: A war machine of erratic appearance and origin, the Metallian was once a human on the world that orbits the planet of steel, but his human self was killed in war, and the memories were transferred over to the form he wanted to be as a machine.

Personality: Having a rather high intelligence, it is usually neutral in thought and about on its own, it helps those who seek the same goal as it and vents extreme rage on enemies. Aggressive when tampered with, but generally calm and reserved. One of its vulnerabilities is during a period of extreme rage, it may focus on one objective or target and become less aware of what is happening around it.

Powers:
- Can communicate telepathically
- Teleportation
- Limited flight (like the Starfox landmaster)
- Burrowing ability
- Able to electrify its entire body to escape the grip of an enemy that is making any physical contact with it
- Charges into foes with high speed and impact
- Is able to rebuild itself in a form of regeneration, as its armor and metal will re-position and refold itself to its proper place
- Can fire a concentrated ray of energy from its mouth with explosive properties
- Can fire missiles mounted on its back and Gatling guns mounted on its side

Special move: Hell's fury, this attack is essentially all of Metallian's ranged attacks mentioned about combined into one attack, instead of being used separately.



Name: Atheon
Age: N/A
Gender: Male
Height: 50 meters
Weight: 624 tons

Appearance: A tall warrior who's armor was forged of flame and chromium, he has an appearance that could be described as part man and machine, the exterior is represented by a shining silver-colored armor, with wings of steel that appear to have a feathery texture to them. The interior is believed to be pure darkness, in other words, it is the possessed and sentient armor of the being that once in inhabited it and refused to die without it.

Bio: A god-like and fearsome warrior able to devastate the largest planets, Atheon is currently a prisoner for war crimes. Capable of incredibly fast flight and a large array of weaponry, Atheon is an incredibly powerful foe to be reckoned with. Both he and Metallian know each other closely from many years of service in their world's military.

Personality: While he can associate with others like a normal human, he has a typical soldier-like personality, and an incredible fury when his anger point is reached. He has a fairly high intelligence and fights for his allies, valuing those who he may call friend.

Powers:
-Armor is very durable
- Incredible physical strength
- Can exhale smoke or fire a beam from three vents where a mouth would be on the armor's face
- Able to heat armor to incredibly high temperatures and ram into foes, causing severe burns to those who make contact
- Able to make light his armor to incredibly bright proportions, blinding enemies temporarily
- If he hits the ground intentionally with enough force, it will cause tremors and making projectiles fly upward
- Is able to rebuild himself in a form of regeneration, as his armor and metal will re-position and refold itself to its proper place
- Flight at mach 4, and is able to emit a sonic boom at will
- Can cause hurricane-like winds while flapping wings rapidly
- Can blast bolts of lightning through the palms of his hands
- Energy charged touch
- Able to release a pulse attack

Special move: Atheon's Sword. Out of thin air, Atheon is able to materialize a sword of pure light and energy, which can slice through essentially anything, though can only hit a number times before shattering. This attack is rarely used, and is generally initiated in a desperate situation.



Name: Hellion
Age: N/A
Gender: Male
Height: 25 Meters
Weight: 30 tons
Wingspan: 28 Meters

Appearance: An incredibly large eagle, it has nothing atypical appearance-wise from any other aside from it's peculiar that legs consist of a reptilian scale texture, and it's beak that conceals four razor-sharp fangs and a snake-like tongue inside of it.

Bio: An intelligent being, it has a god-like presence on the human-populated moon that orbits the world of steel, sleeping inside of a semi-active volcano as it's roost.

Personality: The Hellion has a high intelligence, and is usually very calm and well reserved. It is relentless in combat, however despite its usual calm nature.

Powers:
- Feathers are heat resistant from residing in a volcano for as much time as it has
- Can communicate telepathically
- Flamethrower ability
- Incredible physical strength in feet and wings
- Flight at Mach 3
- Able to emit sonic booms at will
- Can create hurricane-like winds by rapidly flapping its wings

Special move: Comet Impact, in which the Hellion covers its whole body in a blue and white flame, and rams into its foes with high heat and impact, creating a large explosion upon collision with its target.


Otherwise, post any comments or thoughts from the main story in here.
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Re: World of Steel discussion thread

Postby Missingno. » Mon Jul 04, 2016 6:06 pm

I haven't dropped this, but rather have just been writing/planning it all out on my computer rather than putting it down here on a whim.
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Re: World of Steel discussion thread

Postby Godzilla165 » Wed Jul 13, 2016 12:21 pm

I'm excited for this man; it'll be really interesting to see some backstory on these characters.
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