Ripple Effect Discussion
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Ivo-goji
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Ripple Effect Discussion
Can I has feedback?
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Re: Ripple Effect Discussion
Yes you may.
Overall I thought this was a decent very well written story it did begin to drag towards the end but that could just be me. Keep up the good luck friend.
Overall I thought this was a decent very well written story it did begin to drag towards the end but that could just be me. Keep up the good luck friend.
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Ivo-goji
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Re: Ripple Effect Discussion
I'm not as happy with this chapter as I am with the first one.
I might get out chapter three pretty soon, but updates after that will definitely be slower. I'm starting on another fanfic that will take my attention from this story.
Added in 14 hours 41 minutes 54 seconds:
Will post the rest of Chapter 3 when I have greater motivation to write things; might not be long but I had hoped to have the chapter completed less than a week after the last time I updated this fic.
I might get out chapter three pretty soon, but updates after that will definitely be slower. I'm starting on another fanfic that will take my attention from this story.
Added in 14 hours 41 minutes 54 seconds:
Will post the rest of Chapter 3 when I have greater motivation to write things; might not be long but I had hoped to have the chapter completed less than a week after the last time I updated this fic.
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