Ripple Effect Discussion

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Ripple Effect Discussion

Postby Ivo-goji » Tue Feb 16, 2016 1:52 pm

Can I has feedback?
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Re: Ripple Effect Discussion

Postby Dr Mario » Wed Feb 17, 2016 2:03 am

Yes you may.

Overall I thought this was a decent very well written story it did begin to drag towards the end but that could just be me. Keep up the good luck friend.

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Re: Ripple Effect Discussion

Postby Ivo-goji » Thu Oct 20, 2016 8:24 am

I'm not as happy with this chapter as I am with the first one.

I might get out chapter three pretty soon, but updates after that will definitely be slower. I'm starting on another fanfic that will take my attention from this story.

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Will post the rest of Chapter 3 when I have greater motivation to write things; might not be long but I had hoped to have the chapter completed less than a week after the last time I updated this fic.
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