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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Godzilla The King » Sun Aug 30, 2015 8:56 am

Thought I'd drop a teaser into here, you might recognize these characters. The Unknown is a project that is a long time coming.
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Aug 30, 2015 10:25 am

Looking good there my friend. I'm liking the mysterious with the twist of dark humor involved.

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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby shippersdreamer » Sat Nov 07, 2015 3:32 am

High hopes for the teaser I put up is good, since I plan on working on this for a bit since College is gonna eat up some of my time. I do plan on writing this though, and I'll be damned if I don't get it out at least after Thanksgiving.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby EdGojira » Sun Nov 29, 2015 5:36 pm

This teaser I just posted is very much like an actual teaser trailer. You can get a feel of the humor and style from it, and there are definitely hints of the story. It isn't an excerpt from the story itself, though.

I hope that is okay to do. Enjoy!
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Godzilla The King » Tue Dec 01, 2015 4:11 pm

Certainly interested in what you've posted, Ed.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby EdGojira » Tue Dec 01, 2015 4:54 pm

Godzilla The King wrote:Certainly interested in what you've posted, Ed.

Glad to hear. I'm just doing touch ups now, so it should be very soon.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby godzillafan1954 » Thu Jul 27, 2017 6:06 pm

Decided to redeem myself and post what should have been my first teaser.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Andrew the Gojifan » Tue Aug 08, 2017 12:43 pm

I've posted a teaser yesterday, the other stories are on hiatus until I finish this new one, after that, I'll work harder on the other two.

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Posted a new teaser and updated some things on the first teaser
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby godzillafan1954 » Fri Oct 20, 2017 3:12 pm

Any comments on my teasers? No? Haha ok
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby GodzillavsRayquaza » Fri Oct 20, 2017 7:28 pm

godzillafan1954 wrote:Any comments on my teasers? No? Haha ok
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I think the latest one you posted was pretty good. I don't really have much to say, just that I look forward to reading it.
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