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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby toho_guy01 » Mon Dec 01, 2014 8:30 am

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....If this is your magnum opus....I fear the kind of fan fics your gonna make.
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Postby Kubo » Mon Dec 01, 2014 9:18 am

I sense a comedic monster story, toho_guy...am I correct in my assumption?
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby toho_guy01 » Mon Dec 01, 2014 11:03 am

Kubo wrote:I sense a comedic monster story, toho_guy...am I correct in my assumption?

Maybe some comedy but only really a monster story. By the way, what do you think about the original monsters Hellasaur and Spitadactyl?
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Postby Kubo » Mon Dec 01, 2014 11:32 am

Yeah, I think they're both unique designs! I'm sure you'll put both of them to good use. :)
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Postby toho_guy01 » Tue Dec 02, 2014 10:15 am

I have planned to release two "Power Demonstration" Teasers about Hellasaur and Spitadactyl.
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Postby Kubo » Mon Dec 08, 2014 7:14 am

That second trailer, GoJi... I'm not sure what the point was or what was even happening...
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Dec 10, 2014 6:53 pm

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Postby 2004Zilla » Wed Dec 10, 2014 8:28 pm

Kubo wrote:That second trailer, GoJi... I'm not sure what the point was or what was even happening...

Seconded. Who's Lucario? Who's Xeno? Who's Hagar? What's anything?
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Postby Kubo » Wed Dec 10, 2014 8:49 pm

2004Zilla wrote:
Kubo wrote:That second trailer, GoJi... I'm not sure what the point was or what was even happening...

Seconded. Who's Lucario? Who's Xeno? Who's Hagar? What's anything?

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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

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Kubo wrote:
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Kubo wrote:That second trailer, GoJi... I'm not sure what the point was or what was even happening...

Seconded. Who's Lucario? Who's Xeno? Who's Hagar? What's anything?

What is life even?


Shrek is life. :P
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby GoJiSbAcK » Wed Dec 10, 2014 11:23 pm

2004Zilla wrote:
Kubo wrote:That second trailer, GoJi... I'm not sure what the point was or what was even happening...

Seconded. Who's Lucario? Who's Xeno? Who's Hagar? What's anything?


H.A Hagar-New enemy

Lucario-Leader of the gang

Xeno-Bad-guy-at-first-but-now-on-the-good-side

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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Birdman » Thu Dec 11, 2014 10:49 am

After months of inactivity and brooding, I've finally decided to try and get back into writing. But rather then update one of my old fanfics, I thought I'd start something fresh.

And so ladies and jellymen, I give you the teaser for Mechagodzilla Generations.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby 2004Zilla » Thu Dec 11, 2014 10:50 am

@GOJIISBACK

You need to work on the dialogue. That felt extremely cheesy.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby SenseiTeriyakiV » Thu Dec 11, 2014 10:52 am

@Birdman

That was very nice. I quite liked the suspenseful dialogue, addition to Serizawa's initial speech, ETC. Only thing that could be worked on is the scenes encased in Asterisks(*), maybe something like
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Postby Kubo » Thu Dec 11, 2014 11:50 am

So you're working in three narratives at once, or what? Sorta unsure based on the teaser.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Kubo » Fri Dec 12, 2014 2:04 pm

Not gonna dock any points for this, GoJi, but we could see some actual content soon? There's a lot of teasers and nothing coming from it?
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Postby DinoMaster » Tue Aug 25, 2015 11:23 am

I decided that I can't pass the opportuntiy to do this, so this is what I'll be working on for a little while. I've got most of the 'chapters' planned out, and I'm currently working on the first one now. The goal is to bring forth a few neat places that might not be as well known to most people.

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Postby M.U.T.O. » Tue Aug 25, 2015 3:49 pm

Honestly...I see tons of potential in your new story. Mosasaur there?
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Postby DinoMaster » Tue Aug 25, 2015 5:35 pm

Actually no. I've only got one truly aquatic part planned so far, and it's a bit more coastal than mosasaur territory. Plus it's a wee bit earlier than the family as well. Might take a swing at some if I can find some information on a few more obscure ones. Thank you for the kind words, I'm really excited to write this one.

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Postby gigan72 » Wed Aug 26, 2015 3:09 pm

While I have the basic plot-line of my story finished and many details done, I have a long ways to go before it's presentable. I've been working on it for over a year (or two) now, so i'm really trying make this as good as possible.
Though, it may have been done by now if I had more free-time to do it. I've mostly been sitting on it.
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