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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Aug 06, 2016 9:18 am

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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions

Postby SonOfGorgo » Sat Aug 06, 2016 9:41 am

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godzillafan1954 wrote:And don't worry SOG, your ideas are pretty cool.

Cheers mate, which one do you like the best?

I think Godzilla Prime is the best. Godzilla X Gamera X Gyaos: Giant Monster Wars is my second favorite though. I'm not interested in Pokémon. But I like the creativity! And the Godzilla & Nadia: Rise of the Guardians sounds like it's gonna be good.

Cheers, keep in mind though, Godzilla Prime (or alternatively Godzilla: Calling All Monsters) was merely an idea I had for a Godzilla TV anime series. But I'm glad you're approving my Godzilla/Gamera crossover, as well as my Godzilla/Nadia crossover (which I've slightly retitled to Godzilla and Nadia: Battle of the Guardians). Are there any advice, criticism, praise, anything you'd like to say for my two fanfics?

Edit: I've also thought up an idea for a Godzilla/Astro Boy crossover.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions

Postby godzillafan1954 » Sat Aug 06, 2016 12:57 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:Birdman, Godzillafan1954. I see the each of you going at it one more time, I'm giving you two a day's vacation from this thread and referring you to the mods and admins for a warning.

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SonOfGorgo wrote:Cheers mate, which one do you like the best?

I think Godzilla Prime is the best. Godzilla X Gamera X Gyaos: Giant Monster Wars is my second favorite though. I'm not interested in Pokémon. But I like the creativity! And the Godzilla & Nadia: Rise of the Guardians sounds like it's gonna be good.

Cheers, keep in mind though, Godzilla Prime (or alternatively Godzilla: Calling All Monsters) was merely an idea I had for a Godzilla TV anime series. But I'm glad you're approving my Godzilla/Gamera crossover, as well as my Godzilla/Nadia crossover (which I've slightly retitled to Godzilla and Nadia: Battle of the Guardians). Are there any advice, criticism, praise, anything you'd like to say for my two fanfics?

Edit: I've also thought up an idea for a Godzilla/Astro Boy crossover.

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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions

Postby DinoMaster » Sat Aug 06, 2016 5:13 pm

SonOfGorgo wrote:How come no-one's talking about my ideas?


Well, probably the main reason would be due to the fact that you've posted three ideas, and that's really been about it. There's been a little expanding, but not much else has been done. Ideas are beautiful, but even better when we see them at the peak. Any of the regulars will tell ya that the best situation when it comes to writing is simply just start, and not wait for approval. The second, is that they all seem to be crossovers of some sort of another, and that can impact potential viewership and interest.

Taking a look at them, the one that I like most is Godzilla and Nadia: Rise of the Guardians. The best advice that I could give ya is that, if it's a crossover, drop the Nadia part. I frankly have no idea what it is, and if you replaced them with either a crew of existing kaiju film heroic humans or a new original crew, it could work pretty well in your favor. It's kaiju roster is diverse, and yet simple enough that the battles should be plenty flexible without having to worry about spare bodies.

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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions

Postby SonOfGorgo » Sun Aug 07, 2016 11:13 am

DinoMaster wrote:Taking a look at them, the one that I like most is Godzilla and Nadia: Rise of the Guardians. The best advice that I could give ya is that, if it's a crossover, drop the Nadia part. I frankly have no idea what it is, and if you replaced them with either a crew of existing kaiju film heroic humans or a new original crew, it could work pretty well in your favor. It's kaiju roster is diverse, and yet simple enough that the battles should be plenty flexible without having to worry about spare bodies.

Just to recap, Nadia: The Secret of Blue Water is this interesting anime from 1990 or 91, it's from the same creators who went on to direct Shin Godzilla (Hideaki Anno and Shinji Higuchi).

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I've also thought up two prequels to Godzilla x Gamera x Gyaos: Giant Monster Wars, respectively titled Anguirus 2000 and Varan vs. Megaguirus. This could help establish both Kaiju into what I'm calling, the "Kaneko Godzilla-Gamera fanon universe".

Summary for Anguirus 2000
This fanfic ignores all the other Godzilla movies featuring Anguirus except for Godzilla Raids Again, but instead of Godzilla being the victor, it was Anguirus. He had dissappeared ever since. Now it's July 2000, and the Guardian of the Sea himself soon returns from his icy slumber (pun intended).
Earlier that week, a 60 million year old rock was discovered. Without warning it begins to float and heads for a meeting with Anguirus in Tokai Mura.
Anguirus senses danger and tears the rock apart to reveal a UFO! This UFO blows Anguirus back into the sea with a hyperblaster but lands and ceases all activities due to the damage caused by the opposing Kaiju.
Later, the UFO takes off for Shinjuku where the final battle between the UFO and Anguirus takes place. The UFO transforms into a monster dubbed Orga and resumes attacks on Anguirus. Can Anguirus defeat the strange alien creature?

Synopsis for Varan vs. Megaguirus
This opens with a prologue set in November 1993, 35 years after the events of Varan the Unbelievable. A team of scientists, agents and explorers led by Prof. Yoshizawa and Dr. Serizawa (maybe appearing in Anguirus 2000) find a massive cave/cavern in Siberia and discover a skeleton resembling Rodan (an homage to the original 1956 film, in which the Meganulon debuted) and another resembling Megaguirus.
Next to such is an egg that apparently hatched some time before the humans opened up the cave/cavern. Natives witnessed it leave its tomb but are too frightened to speak of it, similar to the original 1958 Varan film.
Yoshizawa & Serizawa note that the egg only hatched days prior then turn their attention to a giant hole in the earth where the creature flew off. Then a nearby nuclear plant is not only destroyed by the new creature, but also by Varan.
Eight years later (in November 2001, a year after Anguirus 2000 and before Giant Monsters All-Out Attack), a man named Masato, who actually witnessed the events when Varan destroy the aforementioned plant back then (and was driven nearly insane by just the sight of Varan alone), tries to prove that it wasn't a natural disaster and that it's being covered up by authorities. He; along with Takehiro, Naomi, Hiroshi & Mayu (the protagonists of Anguirus 2000), go back to the sight of the plant and find they've an egg similar to the last one, which soon hatches and the monster dubbed Megaguirus gets loose.
Next is the exposition scene; we learn that after the Megaguirus hatched in the cave/cavern, it travelled to the plant to nest there. But Varan showed up and killed it, unintentionally destroying the plant in the process. An egg was unknowingly left behind and survived.
This is when the humans discuss not only Varan's appearance, but also the recent events of the Heisei Gamera films and Anguirus 2000. Yoshizawa and Serizawa theorise that these events and monsters are possibly linked and that the three (Varan, Gamera & Anguirus) were keeping Earth, nature, life itself, etc in balance.
Later on, Megaguirus terrorises Tibet but Varan intervenes and stop the Queen in time but she escapes. Then in Taiwen, Varan & Megaguirus have their final match, from which the Guardian of the Sky himself rises triumphant. He takes off into the air once more as our human heroes look on in awe.

*sighs* Anyway, those were the drafted plots for my prequels. What do you think? Constructive criticism, advice on improving, etc, are allowed.

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Overtime I've thought up dozen of ideas for Godzilla fanfics, and here they are. I'll categorise them into different timelines:

The Showa timeline:
    Godzilla vs. the Mysterians: Earth Defence Force
    Ten years after their first attempt, the Mysterians return for another invasion. Luckily, humanity can rely on the combined efforts of Godzilla, Anguirus & Rodan.
    Godzilla vs. Rogue Monster Maguma
    One year after the events of Gorath, another Maguma emerges and terrorises a base in the North Pole, but Godzilla, Varan & Mothra arrive to intervene.
    Dracula vs. Godzilla (Alternative title: Dracula Conquers the World)
    An irradicated vampire bat is discovered by scientists, but when the creature dubbed 'Dracula' grows too large and starts to feed on humans, humanity must rely on the combined efforts of Godzilla and Baragon.
    Godzilla, Kamoebas, Ganimes, Gezora: Great Battle of the North Seas
    17 years since the events of Space Amoeba, Gezora & Ganimes are brought back to life by the Xiliens, so Godzilla must team up with Kamoebas to stop the newly-revived Yog monsters.
    Godzilla vs. Mutant Starfish Monster Hitodah
    A starfish living in the sea mutates into a giant monster after heavy exposure to pollution. The creature eventually ends up battling Godzilla.
    Great Monster Battle: Godzilla vs. Redmoon (Alternative title: Godzilla, Redmoon, Erabus, Hafun: Extraterrestrial Monsters)
    A creature emerges from the moon's surface and quickly flies down to Earth. Upon landing, the creature is spotted and dubbed Redmoon. Almost simultaneously, another monster appears from Habu Island, located in the Okinawa chain. This second creature is given the name Erabus.
    The Japanese Self Defence Force feels that the appearance of the two kaiju is a perfect opportunity to lead the monsters together so that they will kill one another. The plan is a success, as they are able to lure the two monsters together; however, instead of fighting the two monsters mate, as it's discovered that Redmoon and Erabus are male and female of the same species. Shortly after mating, Erabus gives birth to small creature called Hafun.
    While the SDF is trying to figure out what to do with with the creatures, Hafun is kidnapped by an entrepreneur with the hopes of displaying the creature for profits. Unfortunately, Hafun dies in the process of being moved, causing Redmoon and Erabus to go berserk and begin laying waste to the cities in Okinawa. However, Godzilla, Anguirus & Kumonga arrive on the scene and manage to defeat both Redmoon and Erabus, putting an end to the destruction.
    Godzilla vs. the Space Monsters: Earth Defence Directive

    Godzilla vs. Mechanical Monster Gaurgan
    The Garuga Aliens, using their monster Garugan, lay siege to Earth. It's up to Godzilla, Mothra and Anguirus to stop the assault, resulting in a climatic final battle in Zanpamisaki, Okinawa.

The Heisei timeline:
    Godzilla vs. Orochi
    Set years after Godzilla vs. Destoroyah, an ancient demon known as Orochi awakens after many millennia. So Godzilla Junior, Battra, Mothra, Rodan, M.O.G.U.E.R.A. II, Anguirus must work together to stop this monster and save the Earth.

The GXM timeline:
    Mothra vs. Hedorah: Operation Chernobyl
    In the year 1978, an alien dubbed 'Hedorah' arrives to Earth to feed on its pollution. But Mothra, along with Rodan & Kamoebas, shall intervene to protect the good Earth from Hedorah's foul tyranny.

    Mothra vs. Bagan: Battle for Earth
    Set in 1990, twelve years attack Hedorah's counterattack, a greater threat emerges.; an ancient demon known as Bagan. So Mothra, Rodan & Kamoebas return to stop his eternal rampage.

    Godzilla Against Megalon: X Termination Strategy
    Set in 2006, five years after the events of GXM, the G-Graspers are eventually equipped with a new weapon in the form of Kiryu (a mechanical clone of Godzilla with a new version of the Dimension Tide built-in). But little would anyone expect, an even bigger threats prepares to terrorise and conquer Japan once and for all; Megalon and his loyal swarm of Kamacuras.
    Soon, the G-Graspers must form an unlikely alliance with the very creature they were originally created to destroy, Godzilla. Along with some unexpected allies, Mothra & Kamoebas, they must fight together to stop the menance of Megalon before it's too late!

The Kaneko-Gamera-GMK timeline:
    Godzilla X Gamera X Gyaos: Giant Monster Wars
    Set in 2005, six years since the events of Gamera 3 and three years since the events of GMK.
    After Gamera seemingly rid the world of the Gyaos at the cliffhanger of Gamera 3, a lone specimen escapes and flees to an unknown island, to grow and evolve into something far stronger than before. Just when Japan finally found peace after Godzilla's seemingly defeat, two new monsters named Barugon and Jiger appear and attack Odaiba.
    Gamera, Varan and Anguirus soon awaken in response to this new attack.
    Zilla Junior arrives just then, having travelled from New York City through Mexico to Japan to help Gamera battle against Barugon and Jiger.
    Baragon and Mothra are reborn, but while Ghidorah regenerates, a colony of microscopic Precambrian crustaceans enter his body and eventually take control of such.
    Godzilla returns once more, this time, he seems to be possessed by a different, single yet familiar spirit, one that would be revealed later on.
    At first, when Godzilla and Gamera meet for the first time, they mistake each other for a threat and eventually fight.
    Viras, Guiron and Zigra soon appear and attack, but Varan, Anguirus, Baragon and Mothra eventually unite and fight together to stop the new threats.
    When Ghidorah finally returns, he's no longer a Guardian Monster, as he suddenly reeks even more havoc than even Gyaos, Legion, Iris and Godzilla ever did before, and is somehow absorbing all nearby oxygen.
    The last Gyaos from before finally reappears, in a form more powerful than Super or Hyper Gyaos, a form known as Ultra Gyaos.
    Afterwards, Godzilla and Gamera finally choose to set their differences aside and team up, not only with each other but also with the other Guardians, to battle against the real greater threats. The final battle takes place in Shikoku, between Godzilla, Gamera, Varan, Anguirus, Baragon, Mothra, and Zilla Junior, against Possessed Ghidorah, Barugon, Ultra Gyaos, Viras, Guiron, Jiger, and Zigra.
    Jiger ends up becoming the first to be defeated, as Mothra distracts and blinds it, Anguirus would crush and impale Jiger in his "spike ball form". Next to be defeated is Barugon, as he nearly strangles and freezes Baragon with his tongue. Zilla Junior would cut the tongue in half, as Varan would stab the giant reptile in the head. Guiron ends up getting his head-blade stuck in a cliff before ending up decapitated by Godzilla atomic fire breath. Viras and Zigra both end up getting blazed alive by Zilla Junior. And finally, Godzilla slays Ultra Gyaos by firing his atomic breath into the giant bat's mouth a la Gareth Edwards 2014 reboot.
    Godzilla, Gamera and Zilla Junior would unite their breaths of fire at the still possessed Ghidorah and eventually destroy him, or so they think. As Ghidorah's flesh gets peeled and burnt away, the crustaceans within fuse together to take on a new form, Destoroyah...
    It's here that Destoroyah reveal his intent on absorbing all the oxygen left on Earth to survive and become even more stronger. As he already became too powerful even for all seven Guardians, Godzilla and Gamera choose to sacrifice themselves to defeat him, by combining their spirits and imploding their bodies. They succeed, as Destoroyah ends up turning into a statue of solid oxygen that evenutally crumbles and disintregrates, restoring the air to Earth.
    In a surprise twist, not only does Gamera's spirit still live on, but also the spirit that brought Godzilla back this time is revealed to be Dr. Serizawa, who turnt out to be bent on destroying what he unintentionally created (Destoroyah) with his Oxygen Destroyer. Because he completed such in the form of the monster he once killed with that very same device (ironic, I know), his soul's finally at rest as he ascends to Heaven at last.
    In the end, the victorious surving Kaiju; Varan, Anguirus, Baragon, Mothra and Zilla Junior bid farewell to the saluting humans as they travel to the ocean and the horizon. And just when we think that Godzilla and Gamera are really gone for good, a few years later pass and two large different eggs wash ashore. Hinting that maybe, just maybe, they'll return...

The Kiryu Saga timeline:
    Moguera X Titanosaurus X Ebirah: SDF Commando Mission
    Set in 2006, two years since Tokyo S.O.S., new greater threats emerge: Titanosaurus, Megaguirus, & Ebirah. So the JXSDF create a new mecha named M.O.G.U.E.R.A. (Mobile Operation Godzilla Universal Expert Robot Aero-type) to fight off these new monsters. Akane Yashiro & Yoshito Chujo must work together with some new recruits: Akira Yuki, Kiyoshi Sato, Koji Shinjo, & Miki Saegusa. Ebirah is eventually killed in the climax by Moguera's Absolute Zero Cannon, but Titanosaurus & Megaguirus flee and live to fight another day.

    Godzilla X Gezora X Battra: Osaka S.O.S.
    One year after the defeat of Ebirah, Titanosaurus & Megaguirus seek revenge on Japan. This time, Gezora & Ganimes appear to reek havoc as well. Fearing that the Mothra larvae aren't strong enough to handle four monsters at once, the Shobijin call upon a ancient guardian who co-existed with Mothra once and will be revealed later. Meanwhile, a dying Anguirus (from an attempted attack from Titanosaurus and Ganimes) discovers a familiar Kaiju trapped in silk and cables from a decaying mecha, it tries to free the poor monster before taking its last breath of life. At one point, the larvae attempt to take down Titanosaurus with their webbing silk, it seems to work at first as the aquatic dinosaur falls down unconscious. But the creature tricks the larvae by suddenly waking up and biting onto one of the larvae, injuring it gravely. Just when the cruel sea monster nearly kills the innocent larva, a metallic object hits Titanosaurus in the head, it's the decayed head of Kiryu. A booming footstep is heard, Titanosaurus turns to see what it is, it turns out to be his old familiar rival, Godzilla.
    The larvae are then saved by their father, Battra, who takes them back to infant island for healing. The dying larva attempts to make a cocoon before finally healing as its transforms into a new Imago Mothra as last.
    Godzilla, Moguera, Battra, the Imago Mothra, & the still-larva Mothra finally team up at last as they fight against Titanosaurus, Megaguirus, Gezora, Ganimes. Our heroes emerge victorious as Godzilla finally slays Titanosaurus, it's oldest rival, Moguera finishes off Gezora & Ganimes,. and Megaguirus flees once again. Godzilla finally leaves in peace, as Battra and its two daughters do the same.

    Godzilla X King Ghidorah X Mothra: Final Monster Wars
    One after the defeat of Titanosaurus, Megaguirus returns for its last stand. This time, she's teaming up with King Ghidorah.

Those are my ideas so far, what do you think? Which one did you think are the best? Please leave your thoughts, advice, opinions and even ideas of your own in the comments down below. Thank you and cheers.
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Ideas for a GMK follow-up story

Postby SonOfGorgo » Wed Sep 21, 2016 9:31 am

This thread's for anyone who wish to express their ideas on a story that would follow up on the GMK storyline.

My idea would be also a follow-up to the Heisei Gamera trilogy, where the last swarm of Gyaos and a resurrected Ghidorah rampage across the Pacific. But Gamera, Varan, Anguirus and Zilla Junior battle back against the threats. Eventually, not only do Baragon and Mothra return to life, but Godzilla rises once more.

That's my idea so far, what are yours? Feel free to tell such in the comment section down below. Thank you.
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Ideas for a follow-up story to Godzilla vs. Megaguirus

Postby SonOfGorgo » Wed Sep 21, 2016 9:32 am

This thread's for anyone who wish to express their ideas on a story that would follow up on the storyline of Godzilla vs. Megaguirus.

My idea: Five years after the events of GXM, the G-Graspers are eventually equipped with a new weapon in the form of Kiryu (a mechanical clone of Godzilla with a new version of the Dimension Tide built-in). But little would anyone expect, an even bigger threats prepares to terrorise and conquer Japan once and for all; Megalon and his loyal swarm of Kamacuras. Soon, the G-Graspers must form an unlikely alliance with the very creature they were originally created to destroy, Godzilla. Along with some unexpected allies, Mothra & Kamoebas, they must fight together to stop the menance of Megalon before it's too late!

That's my idea so far, what are yours? Feel free to tell such in the comment section down below. Thank you.
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Re: Ideas for a follow-up story to Godzilla vs. Megaguirus

Postby Giratina93 » Wed Sep 21, 2016 10:52 am

This thread is unnecessary and can easily fit into the GxM discussion in the Millenium Series forum. Locked.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby HedorahGrabber » Fri Sep 23, 2016 6:03 am

Hi, I'm Hedorah and I'm currently beginning a brainstorm for my own story, "Godzilla: Open Wounds". What I have is something I think works but I need help to make it better. If there is any chance we can discuss things about the story such as Godzilla's origins, his capabilities, human characters and interaction, and politics for America and other countries, I would gladly except it. If you have any questions or want to provide some thoughts, ideas, suggestions, criticism, and more I will be glad to listen. I won't reveal anything of the story in the forums but would gladly DM, PM, Skype call, or Google Hangout to get in contact with anybody interested.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions Thread

Postby SonOfGorgo » Fri Sep 23, 2016 10:44 am

HedorahGrabber wrote:Hi, I'm Hedorah and I'm currently beginning a brainstorm for my own story, "Godzilla: Open Wounds". What I have is something I think works but I need help to make it better. If there is any chance we can discuss things about the story such as Godzilla's origins, his capabilities, human characters and interaction, and politics for America and other countries, I would gladly except it. If you have any questions or want to provide some thoughts, ideas, suggestions, criticism, and more I will be glad to listen. I won't reveal anything of the story in the forums but would gladly DM, PM, Skype call, or Google Hangout to get in contact with anybody interested.

I'm sure your idea will be a good one, so go ahead and lay it on us.
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Postby HedorahGrabber » Fri Sep 23, 2016 11:36 am

Personally I don't want to at the moment as I'm still trying to settle in a story that really works. I like the what I have now but once I find what exactly what I want, I'll lay it on you guys.
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions

Postby SonOfGorgo » Sat Oct 15, 2016 1:14 am

Just recently, I've thought about writing a one-shot about the pov of Erika as her soul's within the creature Biollante, how she feels and what she sees. I've also yet to think of a fitting title. Can someone help me? Or place any honest thoughts on my idea?
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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions

Postby DinoMaster » Wed Nov 16, 2016 10:53 pm

Hey, I have a suggestion. Y'see, I've just rebooted my original story that got me out of the beginner's section, and into the regular one. If you guys have the time, submit a character for it. For those that have frustrations in being stuck, or not doing much besides your own stories, getting involved in the community is one of the best things that you could possibly do. Far too many only work on their own, or stay for a brief period and don't talk much, vanishing before they can post their stories. It would also peak interest for others to look at your own stories as well.

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Re: Ideas, Advice and Suggestions

Postby SonOfGorgo » Tue Jan 31, 2017 1:13 pm

Another idea sparked in my mind, under the working title - Godzilla vs. Eris: Human Mutation Strategy

Rough storyline:
A young and curious scientist named Ellis Thorne discovers some DNA of Godzilla's cells and foolishly attempts to inject such into herself, believing that she would gain immunity to radiation illness. But soon enough, she begins to suffer side effects (from loss of hair and weight to a rather quicker growth in size than normal) and soon enough goes missing.

A few years later, reports start to pour in of an unknown humanoid yet "Godzilla-esque" creature being spotted. While some claimed that this creature was created by Ellis Throne, an old friend of hers (Dr. Takegami) is convinced that it is Ellis herself. Unfortunately, Ellis (or Eris as they call her now) no longer remembers who she once was and soon wreaks havoc and goes on a rampage. So it's up to Godzilla himself to stop this hybrid.


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Kaiju OC Help Please.

Postby Monster X » Sun Mar 19, 2017 1:43 pm

Hello there I'm currently working on a kaiju OC and need a bit of help working out the finer details.

The kaiju is called Moby Dick, also know as the White Giant, Unknown Kaiju/M.U.T.O 169.

This is the commissioned art work of an older version of the character who is now getting a kaiju upgrade.
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Early Bio details:

He's a kaiju from a far off, possible future were kaiju rule the world. However he has been spotted in modern time to.

He seems to appear at random now and again across the globe. His existence was not confirmed until recently. sometimes he's only around for a few moments other times it can be a few days.

This giant is colossal even by kaiju standers, G 2014 and Shin are only the fight of one of his front legs. He is in fact the larges kaiju on earth in his time.

In the world he comes from he lives almost like a filter feeding whale, he wanders around absorbing massive amounts of radiation from the environment and light from the sun to fuel his body, His scared skin is pure white (in the updated version) and it has a faint glow. Also his body is so hot that it causes steam to generate from skin, this is why sightings of him are unconfirmed as the steam can obscure him from vision especially if he appears at sea.

Powers:

Scorching Spout - Moby Dick fires a blast of super heated, radioactive steam from his nostrils, boiling and irradiating his target. Moby dick can also increase the pressure of the steam, turning the blast into a beam that can cut through buildings.

Appalling Radiance - Moby Dick skin glows with greater intensity and his body generates pulses of radiation, similer to Godzilla's atomic pules but on a larger scale. The steam coming off his body also intensifies.

White Dwarf - Moby Dick skin glows brightly but instead of unleashing radiation, he manipulates the energy within himself to increase his personal gravitational field. This draws all near by objects and beings towards him, either to be crushed against his skin or into his attacks.

Pale Phantom - Moby Dick has the power teleport, however he dose not seem to have full control over this power as he dose not make contuse use of it often. He can travel across space and time.

What I wanted to ask was can anyone help me work out his size and weight given the comparison to Godzilla I've given?
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Kaiju Profile: Godzilla FF

Postby LukidonU » Fri Mar 24, 2017 9:32 am

Hello Everyone, Welcome To The First Of Many Kaiju Profiles Of The Monsters In My Fanfictions, Today We Are Starting With The King, Godzilla FF

Height: 625 Feet

Weight: 150,000 Tons

Movies (In This Case Fanfics): Godzilla Vigor, King Kong Escapes 2: Mechanikong

Other Names: Gojira, Godzilla, King Of The Monsters, Gods Reincarnation, And Godzilla 2017

Appearance: Godzilla FF Is Very Similar To Godzilla Heratige's Gojira, Which Actually Insired The Design For This Godzilla. This Godzilla Sports Several Dorssal Playes On His Snout, And Above His Eyes, And Has Several Spikes Pertruting From His Body, His Tail Reaches Over 300 Meters And Has Several Small Spikes With Some Having Godzillas Flesh On It.

Origins: Godzilla FF Is Known For Being Godzilla 2014 With A 20 Year Gap, He Was An Alpha In A Pack Of 200 Foot Godzillas, And Lost His Mother To A 600 Foot Muto. He Was Mutated And Gain Height In 1954 When A Nulcleur Warhead Hit Him. That Same Year A Surviving Godzilla Attacked Japan, Only To Be Destroyed By The Oxygen Destroyer, Which Allowed A Bacteria To Mutate Into Destroyah. Godzilla FF Remained In A Crater At The Bottom Of The Sea Feeding Off Large Fish, Nucelur Waste And Eventually A 300 Foot Kaiju. Years Later Another Godzilla That Was Barrie's Under A Island Rampaged And Fell Into A Volcano, Only To Shrug It Off. Years And Years Past As Godzillas Destroyed Everything In Japan. In 1976, Godzilla Reproduced and Had A Non-Radioactive Son, Zilla. 37 Years Later Zilla Was Killed And Godzilla Didn't Even Know It. (Final Wars Is Not Canon, So That Zilla Is Complete Different.) In 2014, Godzilla Finally Showed Its Face and Hunted And Killed The Same Muto Who Killed It Mother.

History: Find Out For Yourself When You Read Godzilla Vigor On March 30th!

Development: Godzilla FF Originally Was Gonna Be The Result Of A Atomic Godzillasaurus, But Was Scrapped Because I Found Out Hesei Godzilla Was The Godzillasaurus. Godzilla: GMMGGT (Godzilla, Manda, Meacha Godzilla, Gorosaurus, Titanasaurus, Who That's A Mouth Full!) Was Originally Going To Be GodZilla Vigor, Until I Made A Poll On A Fourm Which Said To Do King Ghidorah, Rodan, And ???? And Ofcourse Godzilla, Damn, A lot Of Monsters, Its Like A Destroy All Monsters Reboot!

Only Gods Can Strike Fear Into The Hearts Of Many, But Only Monsters Can Destroy Them.

Godzillas Roar Could Be Heard In The Background, When In The Sunset A Giant 4 Winged Insect Flew Down.

GODZILLA VIGOR, COMING MARCH 30TH ON THE FANFICTION TOPIC
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Re: Kaiju Profile: Godzilla FF

Postby SenseiTeriyakiV » Fri Mar 24, 2017 9:59 am

Um... I'm pretty sure you're supposed to put this in the fanfiction section.

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Re: Kaiju Profile: Godzilla FF

Postby LukidonU » Fri Mar 24, 2017 11:02 am

SenseiTeriyakiV wrote:Um... I'm pretty sure you're supposed to put this in the fanfiction section.

Doesn't Really Count As Fanfiction..
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Re: Kaiju Profile: Godzilla FF

Postby BlueGojira » Fri Mar 24, 2017 11:21 am

Not to stir up controversy, but this seems to be very similar to the Kaiju Profiles made by the YouTube Wikizilla. And like KaijuX said, this should probably go into the fanfiction section due to its nature.
SoleMan wrote:I feel like with his passing, it finally lays the era of Godzilla to rest. No more are there guys in rubber suits, no more are there fun, silly, kid-friendly Godzillas, no more are the days when you could make out in the back row with your sweetheart and your kid brother could be in the front, eyes glued to the screen. Instead we're left with the gritty, cold world of Hollywood and apocalyptic visions of nightmare creatures.

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Re: Kaiju Profile: Godzilla FF

Postby LukidonU » Fri Mar 24, 2017 11:35 am

BlueGojira wrote:Not to stir up controversy, but this seems to be very similar to the Kaiju Profiles made by the YouTube Wikizilla. And like KaijuX said, this should probably go into the fanfiction section due to its nature.

I Am A Fan Of WikiZilla So That's ashy, Plus This Isn't A Fanfiction, Its A Profile Of Godzilla

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LukidonU wrote:
BlueGojira wrote:Not to stir up controversy, but this seems to be very similar to the Kaiju Profiles made by the YouTube Wikizilla. And like KaijuX said, this should probably go into the fanfiction section due to its nature.

I Am A Fan Of WikiZilla So That's ashy, Plus This Isn't A Fanfiction, Its A Profile Of Godzilla

But If It Should Be Moved, Than So It Shall Be Moved, But How xD?
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