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'The Whirlies'-Chapter 1:[Rated NC-17]:

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Inside an antiquated fallout shelter they worked. The doors of this shelter had not been opened since 1959, yet its equipment was far in advance of anything 21st century had, too. The robotic life forms in this shelter were dedicated to the conquest of Earth. They were multiple four tall exact replicas of Mogera1959. In an electronic voice, it spake:

"Unit 305 to Computer Commander, preparations for plan K-341 are fully complete." "Excellent, Unit 305. Activate your plan immediately." "Yes, Computer Commander." Instantly, a plasma beam shot beam towards the ionosphere. Within hours, a horror unknown to mankind would be unleashed...

Kentucky... Lori Ann Parker walked through the woods near her home. Beau, her coon dog, bounded at her side. Lori was a Christian, hunter, and ardent pet rescuer. She was six foot one, blue eyed, layered blonde haircut. Lori wore athletic sandals with moisture-wicking socks, cargo shorts, and an A-frame t-shirt atop an athletic bra. Beau's head perked up.

"What is it, boy?" She unslung the Ruger AR556 rifle, a thirty round box magazine protruded from the rifle's belly, too. A 'Queen bitch'-pattern hunting dagger was other sole arm present. Her bastard Greek sword replica was home, along with several long guns. In the woods, you take the lightest long gun with you.

Beau bounded ahead of her. Suddenly, Beau stopped barking. Lori cautiously advanced, then stopped. A wee dog sat next to Beau. It looked like a terrier mix. It had a mangled paw. "Oh, let's get you home. Come on, Beau." Lori secured her rifle, and carried the wee one. It was a mid-summer mid-morning, but she could get him to an animal emergency.

She got him home, and cleaned and bandaged the dog's leg. Beau went to his shaded, fenced kennel. He lapped some water and slept. Lori's parents had raised her. 'You will properly treat any pet you have'. Lori obeyed that rule with a level of enthusiasm akin to a lotto winner going on a mega spending spree. She put the dog in her lovingly maintained 1988 Isuzu pick up. At the clinic.... "She's a standard Yorkshire terrier, and she's just about a year old, but she won't get any bigger." the vet said. "It would be best if we were to amputate her leg. There's no function in the paw, and X-rays have confirmed it cannot be saved. If we amputate now, I can give her pain pills and antibiotics and send her home today."

"Do it." Lori waited in the waiting room. She prayed for little Honey. 45 minutes later... "Honey can go home at one p.m. today. We're in until 9 p.m. on Saturdays." The doctor said. Lori went to the bank and got her savings account. She stopped at WAL-MART. A large plastic dog house and a tie out were purchased by her. She then got more supplies at PETSMART, and finally, puppy food at a local feed store.

Lori returned to the animal clinic and paid the bill. "Gonna give you a home, baby girl." She drove home. Normally, Lori used the county bus to go places, but this was the obvious exception, too. She ate lunch and washed the dishes. She began washing clothes. An FM transistor radio belted Miranda Lambert singing about deer hunting. Lori's parents had backed off royally on being strict on their kids. Especially when a Sacred Namer preacher hired a witch to kill Lori. Otto, Lori's younger brother had shot the witch dead with a Remington .270 semiautomatic. The fact that the witch was caught about to pour a gallon of cyanide into the spring that Lori's family used as drinking water got him off murder charges. The infraction? Lori had refused to have sex with this preacher's son.

The second reason Lori's parents had eased up, and it was the fact a pack of bullies attacked Otto as he skateboarded with some pals the day summer vacation began. He had gotten a pass to allow him to go with two of his friends. Because he was forbidden to have a cellphone initially, and pack of bullies jumped him and his buds as they were doing tricks in an abandoned parking lot. 'Because boys fight with their hands', Otto had been banned from as much as packing a can of OC pepper mace spray, too. When the punks started to lose, one bully attacked Otto with a brass knuckle handle Bowie knife. Marcus Aurelius Tolliver had lost his right lung when he took the thrust meant for Otto. Marcus had nearly died and had been medically discharged from the Army National Guard, too.

To the horror of present, the charges were dismissed because no camera was present. Furthermore, because the seven bullies involved were minority basketball stars, and the school system threatened all three victims with permanent expulsion if they dared speak of this matter to this press. The god of school paddling died that day in the Parker home. too. Furthermore, Marcus had recorded the threat and had gone to a 'saltwater crocodile'-style lawyer firm. Result: Marcus got fifteen million dollars from the school, he shared in the form of a multi-million dollar CD for Otto Alvin Parker. $22,000 a month off the interest. Otto loyally shared with his family, too.
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Honey slept as Lori did various house chores. Her Mom had to drive Dad to a Dental Emergency in an adjacent county. Dad's ear infection had freakishly went into his teeth, and this left the whole bottom left side of his mouth abcessed. Otto had ridden with them because he was using his money jar to help pay for his Dad's treatment. He also rode the city bus over to Gamestop to get an XBOX 1 game and some takeout, too.

They had arrived at 8:07 a.m. One look at Randy Parker's mouth had gotten him rushed to a treatment chair. General anesthesia followed by 13 extractions and a surgical antiseptic debriding was the treatment given. "You saved him from barely needing hospital admission. He'll need antibiotics for a month and pain pills for two weeks. He should be only on soft foods for ten days, also." The facial surgeon said. It was now 11:43 a.m. Otto had returned by city bus with his goodies. He'd given Mom $300.00 to help his Dad.

Mom and Otto had helped Dad into the car, having filled his prescriptions at the clinic's pharmacy.They then drove to CABELA's, where another Ruger AR556 and it accessories were purchased, too. The success of Lori's same rifle lead June Parker had mandated its adoption as the standard home defense carbine for the family. This last purchase would complete the rearming of the Parker family, rifle-based defense wise. Their battered Eisenhower-era M1 carbines were being rebuilt at a local gunsmith's and were scheduled to be given as aid to a local poor family, as a replacement for their 8mm Mauser bolt action rifles of Truman-era vintage.

Dad snoozed in the SUV, having popped a hydrocodone. As they passed the NCIS back ground check, "Hey, Mom, isn't that Jeff Buffo?" "I believe it is." While from a far poorer family than June Parker's, Jeff's family did not steal, cheat, lie, or abuse people or domestic pets. Jeff wore sandals, cargo shorts, an moisture-wick t-shirt, and a boonie hat atop his shaved head. A devout Christian, Jeff had rescued Beau from dog nappers three years ago and he often helped the Parkers, too. "Hello, Jeff." smiled June. "Hello, Mrs. June." The boy really liked her first name, so his conduct was proper albeit odd, too.

"How'd you get out here, Jeff?" "I rode the city bus here. The county bus links up with the city bus at CENTRAL DEPOT, so it's a safe place to wait. My vacation club came due and I've just paid off on a Century Arms V2 AK-47, too. Next Friday, Daddy's off work, and we can pick it up." Jeff's parents had taught him .'If you work for it, you can have it'. The boy had gone full throttle with both discipline and dedication, too. The strict personal discipline of the New International New Testament led Jeff Buffo to flee premarital sex, alcohol, narcotics, crime, pet cruelty, tobacco and other destructive habits. Jeff was handy with a push lawn mower and a push snow blower, too. Four days a week, he worked. Air conditioning, socialized veterinary medicine, a weather alert radio, the internet, an XBOX 1, and an external antenna AM/FM radio were among his achievements. "Just imagine, we can go shooting and hunting together!"

June remembered driving past Jeff's house to go work at DONUT DUNK. 5:00 a.m. and he was reading his New Testament aloud on the front porch prior to eating breakfast before work. Suddenly, a crowd of people surged the front of the store. "The Sky! The sun has turned neon blue and the sky is blood red!" " Other CABELA'S employees were gathered around a large transistor radio. "As of 12:15 p.m. noon today, all TV broadcasting is not running. Radio, telephone, the internet, and wireless communications are fully operational, however. Scientists are at a loss to explain the phenomena. Reports from Asia, Israel, South Africa, Western Europe ,Russia, Australia, and Argentina indicate that this is a global event, too. Stay tuned to this FOX news radio station for updates as they develop."

"What does this mean? Nothing in Revelations explains this." Jeff Buffo was genuinely perplexed. "Do you have a cellphone, Jeff?" "Yes" He turned it on and called his parents. June offered to drive him home, because the Parkers drove past the Buffo's home before getting home themselves. "Mom and Dad and Tikky Tak are ok. Dad thinks I should I come home early in case it's severe weather, too."

"Then you can ride home with us. Do you have anything else to do, Jeff?" "I'm going to stop at Pet Smart, to pick up some kitten supplies and takeout from Little Caesar's, too. OK." Tikky Tak was Jeff's beloved orange kitten. The kitten was green eyed and had been rushed by 4 wheeler to a local vet, whom said the road side dumped kitten only needed a good feed and anti-flea treated, too. Tikky Tak was now a happy playing machine, whose antics delighted the Buffo family.

They achieved their tasks without further incident and made it home safely. Little did they know, a war unknown to the world was fast approaching, too. Inside the 1959 -vintage fallout shelter, Unit 350 spoke. "Computer Commander, Part A of Plan K-341 is a success." "Excellent. We will let the chaos fully spread before we active Part B. The humans are so television-centric, it is their Achilles heel. Communications-wise they have placed most of their eggs in the basket of television. Humans are as a whole, television-addicted. And that shall be their down fall..."
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"We Mogerans are descended from the branch of the Mysterian race which attacked in Earth in 1959." "While Earth radars and telescopes showed our ships fleeing behind their moon, but it was a decoy to lull Earth into a false sense of security. Mysterian scientists discovered that it was not radiation-induced cancer, but radiation-induced susceptibility to bacterial infections" Computer Commander recapped.

"Unlike Earth, bacteria on Mysteroid did not appear until after our series of H-bomb wars. The burn and trauma numbers so over whelmed our hospital system, medical research was delayed for several thousand Earth years. Our genetics research had failed utterly, too. Our robotics research did surge ahead, however. We developed MOGERA suits into which can download our full minds, while the living members of the Mysterian race survive on Jupiter."

"We MOGERANS have a mutual assistance pact which the Mysterians share with us. Anything we conquer, and we jointly exploit to our benefits mutually." "Earth will accept our rule, or else you will suffer World European theater WWII level of destruction globally. No nation will be spared." This was the message Computer Commander composed. And the Mogeran science of advanced meterorology would unleash this very same destruction, too.

"Commander Computer, this is UNIT 25,765. Project Whirloid. is fully operational and in all out production, too. Additionally, our MOGERA suit production program had added nine new factories fully functional this week. Germany, Australia, Antarctica, South Africa, The United States, Iran, Argentina, Finland, Albania, India, and Mongolia."

"Excellent. We will deliver our ultimatum this coming Wednesday. Our attack is scheduled for Saturday morning at 9 a.m. This will enable the maximum amount of panic, chaos, and disorder, too. Earth's law enforcement and military will both be significantly delayed in their response. Earth will crash into utter chaos..."

Already deprived of their television narcotic 'fix', all too many members of certain societal elements were rioting. Los Angeles had already descended into Rodney King-style chaos. Since the 1980s, California politicians had openly worshipped gun control as their god. Wild fires, earthquakes, tsunamis, drought, gangs, illegal immigration, and like were ignored by them, also. Like a discipline freak parent, they were blind all but to own way, and even when the whole universe was crashing down around them, too

Unlike Rodney King however, the average Californian no longer was allowed to own Glock 17-style Wonder 9 pistols; and high capacity rifles like Mini-14s, AK-47s, and AR-15s were banned, too. The ghetto, the barrio, the suburbs, and the business districts of Los Angeles went up in flames. The police and National Guard were already restricting their activities to defending hospitals, fire stations, and animal clinics. Even schools, churches, synagogues, went up in flames, too. It was a nightmare of horror.

"This is FOX radio news... L.A. is a war zone like Stalingrad of WWII. At least 30,000 people have been killed in the rioting. 100,000 wounded and tens of thousands left homeless. Reports indicate the Aryan Nations are guarding many white neighborhoods, while the Tiny Raskals and the Gangster Disciples are conducting join defensive operations. CONFIRMED, just in. Black Christians are openly hunting and killing members of both the Nation of Islam and the New Black Panther Party. Stay tuned to this station for further updates."

CLICK! Gina Buffo looked at her son as she turned the radio off. "I think we better pay your rifle off early Jeff. But I want us all to bring extra cash, too." Jeff ran into his room. His kitten's money jar was spared, but his vacation club would be fully deployed, too. Whereas a Christmas club is a lay away account for winter, but a Vacation club is a layaway that comes due in June, too. Ostensibly for beach type trips, the check's cash can be used for whatever the recipient wants, too. Jeff opened his the day after Christmas, too.

The SKS carbine was the standard Buffo family rifle and it had served them well for both hunting and home defense, too. However, Jeff had been unable to acquire a quality SKS at a good price himself. His solution: The Century Arms International V2 AK-47. This same rifle used the same ammunition as did the SKS. Furthermore, Jeff had prepared modifications for the weapon to make it more user friendly, too.

A Texas Weapons system hinged top cover enabled the rifle's insides to be more easily accessed for cleaning. Also, A Command Arms Accessories ventilated top cover polymer hand guard had also been ordered, and to replace the standard wooden hand guard, too. Also, neon green Tru-Glo paint had been ordered.

This same paint's function: Hillbilly EO-Tech. You paint the front sight post and hood of an AK-47 a neon color. Under 600 feet, it works like the display a jet fighter pilot sees when he aims his gun at an enemy plane. . 'Enhanced Minimalism' was Jeff's philosophy. Bettering a basic product works well.

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The ultimatum was delivered by Computer Commander at noon Wednesday. "You have until 9 a.m. local Earth time this coming Saturday morning to surrender and be our subjects, or we will use the Whirloids to destroy you all." The announcement was greeted mixed reactions. While a handful of people urged capitulation, the majority favored resistance. America, Russia, Britain, and China put their fleets to sea.

In Moscow, T-90 tanks surrounded the city in a ring of steel. Afghanistan, Iraq, and Syria were abandoned as troops pulled out. Freed from international supervision, The Syrian secular regime hit ISIS with unrestricted air strikes, napalm carpet bombing, and nerve gas raids. ISIS had ceased to exist within 72 hours.

In Egypt, the government expelled all the journalists and then went to town wiping out the Islamic radicals there, too. In Libya, a joint civilian-military coup overthrew the Islamists and began wiping out their mosques, also. In Northern Ireland, the British pullout left weapons where the non-Ira elements could get them. The end result: the IRA was utterly exterminated. The Protestant Enclave was given its own nation within a nation, and that same conflict ended, also.

In Mexico, armed rebels massacred the Templar Drug Lords and then siezed Mexico city. In both Colombia and Thailand, the drug cartels began working with their nation's respective militaries to coordinate the defense of these same two nations. In Pakistan, their military nuked the SWAT valley and so destroyed the Muslim insurgency there. Australia and New Zealand banned gun control and began frantically rearming their respective citizenrys. Millions reactivated their own guns and ammo they'd hidden after the 1996 Port Moresby Law banned semiautomatic and pump action long guns, too.

"Lori, Cabela's has sold out of all it's guns and ammunition, nationally, too!" Marcus Aurelius Tolliver told her as they listened to radio while playing videogames together. "It also said Gander Mountain, Dick's Sporting Goods, and Wal-mart are sold out, too." "People are running scared, Marcus." "This just in." the radio announcer said. "By executive order, the president of the United States has suspended every gun control law passed since 1968."

Lori thought the world of Marcus. "We scarfed Tavors after we got settlement from the school system, too. We're good to go gun wise. Lori's own parents had picked up three extra AR556s that morning, along magazines, cleaning kits, tactical gear, and ammunition, too. This was right before the Mogerans'-induced panic gun, ammo, and pepper supply-related buying spree, too."

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The ultimatum was delivered by Computer Commander at noon Wednesday. "You have until 9 a.m. local Earth time this coming Saturday morning to surrender and be our subjects, or we will use the Whirloids to destroy you all." The announcement was greeted mixed reactions. While a handful of people urged capitulation, the majority favored resistance. America, Russia, Britain, and China put their fleets to sea.

In Moscow, T-90 tanks surrounded the city in a ring of steel. Afghanistan, Iraq, and Syria were abandoned as troops pulled out. Freed from international supervision, The Syrian secular regime hit ISIS with unrestricted air strikes, napalm carpet bombing, and nerve gas raids. ISIS had ceased to exist within 72 hours.

In Egypt, the government expelled all the journalists and then went to town wiping out the Islamic radicals there, too. In Libya, a joint civilian-military coup overthrew the Islamists and began wiping out their mosques, also. In Northern Ireland, the British pullout left weapons where the non-Ira elements could get them. The end result: the IRA was utterly exterminated. The Protestant Enclave was given its own nation within a nation, and that same conflict ended, also.

In Mexico, armed rebels massacred the Templar Drug Lords and then siezed Mexico city. In both Colombia and Thailand, the drug cartels began working with their nation's respective militaries to coordinate the defense of these same two nations. In Pakistan, their military nuked the SWAT valley and so destroyed the Muslim insurgency there. Australia and New Zealand banned gun control and began frantically rearming their respective citizenrys. Millions reactivated their own guns and ammo they'd hidden after the 1996 Port Moresby Law banned semiautomatic and pump action long guns, too.

"Lori, Cabela's has sold out of all it's guns and ammunition, nationally, too!" Marcus Aurelius Tolliver told her as they listened to radio while playing videogames together. "It also said Gander Mountain, Dick's Sporting Goods, and Wal-mart are sold out, too." "People are running scared, Marcus." "This just in." the radio announcer said. "By executive order, the president of the United States has suspended every gun control law passed since 1968."

Lori thought the world of Marcus. "We scarfed Tavors after we got settlement from the school system, too. We're good to go gun wise. Lori's own parents had picked up three extra AR556s that morning, along magazines, cleaning kits, tactical gear, and ammunition, too. This was right before the Mogerans'-induced panic gun, ammo, and pepper supply-related buying spree, too."

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