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Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue May 15, 2012 3:54 pm

...Who IS Korra, seriously? :?
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Postby Flygon King » Tue May 15, 2012 4:03 pm

MothraRocks wrote:Alright, thanks.

One more thing guys; this isn't set during the 100 year war, it's set AFTER Aang's time, in Korra's to be exact. So the Fire Nation ain't evil anymore... at least the majority.

"Who's Korra?" In 3...2...1...

I know that... But just becuase a group of people aren't evil anymore, doesn't mean there's not a bad egg or two there...
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Postby MothraRocks » Tue May 15, 2012 7:31 pm

Flygon King wrote:
MothraRocks wrote:Alright, thanks.

One more thing guys; this isn't set during the 100 year war, it's set AFTER Aang's time, in Korra's to be exact. So the Fire Nation ain't evil anymore... at least the majority.

"Who's Korra?" In 3...2...1...

I know that... But just becuase a group of people aren't evil anymore, doesn't mean there's not a bad egg or two there...


Oh, I know, just wanted to make sure everyone was in the same year...
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue May 15, 2012 7:51 pm

Name: Akame (Japanese for Red eye) Real name unknown
Gender: Male
Bends: Nothing but can withstand some of the powers.
Backstory: Ever since he was born he had a very unsual talent of strength as he was able to lift multiple heavy things at once. One day when he was 16 he and his family were doing farmwork when slavers came to the village he was in and began killing or capturing people in the village. His father and mother tried to protect him but his parents were murdered by two slavers. The slavers tried to capture him but he uickly grabed the two slaver's weapons and instantly shoved both weapons through their heads. He grabbed their two weapons and began to murder ever single slaver in the village. When he finally got up to the leader of the slavers, the slaver offered he to join but he wanted revenge as he striked the sword deep into the leader's chest and murder him. The leader's helmet fell down to the ground which the helmet was all metal, covered in black but the eyes or what ever are called were in the color red. He reached down for the helmet, put the helmet on and equiped the slaver leader's armor and then Akame was born. Akame grabbed the slaver's weapons and what ever money they had and grabbed his parent's possesions as a way to remember them and left. For the next years he was nothing but a merc. Killing who ever he was hired to kill. Ever since slavers attacked his village, no one has ever seen him unmasked. Who ever saw someone trying to kill Akame, the person either didn't last long against Akame as he easily killed them or Akame somehow survived. For one instance he was pushed off a cliff and though to be dead but when the person looked out they saw Akame running off.

Description: Wears armor that is completely black with a long sword equiped to his side and has a backpack on his backpack that holds many things like extra weapons, food, potions, etc. His helmet is all black except for the eyes that are red which he can see through.

Personality: Cold plus a bit of a dick, usaully quite but will speak during negotiations and will kill people if they are out where there are no witnesses. When he's on a merc job he doesn't care on who lives or dies as long as he gets his target. He will help someone for a little bit if they A either give him something in return, B save his life in someway or C give him money to aid them.

Weapons: Long sword, a crossbow if not then a bow and arrow, a shield, and two daggers.

Some extra things to know: He is very strong, can survive high falls, and is very hard to kill as everytime you think he's dead he always survives somehow.

Faction if they are allowed: Neutral

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Postby MothraRocks » Tue May 15, 2012 8:03 pm

Are you basically saying you can't die? Lol, might want to clear up on that, but otherwise, good.

No one likes water bending I guess :/
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue May 15, 2012 8:06 pm

MothraRocks wrote:Are you basically saying you can't die? Lol, might want to clear up on that, but otherwise, good.

No one likes water bending I guess :/


No what I'm saying is that he's basically hard to kill. It's just that no one can hurt him in certain ways as like I said he has super strength and can survive very tall falls. But don't worry theres still ways to kill you just to have stab him a bunch of time or just do what ever seems powerful enough and he can walk around in fire for a while but not for a long time. Hope that helps
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Postby MothraRocks » Sun May 20, 2012 4:36 pm

Ok, first bit is up. Not too much action, just enough to get us going.

Hayes, I have a question about your character; do you mean he is resentful because he isn't a bender?
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Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sun May 20, 2012 4:44 pm

I like the first chapter, who doesn't like poler bears.
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Postby MothraRocks » Sun May 20, 2012 4:45 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:I like the first chapter, who doesn't like poler bears.


Baby Seals.

Lol, thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Got big plans for the story.
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun May 20, 2012 4:48 pm

his dog, who he had named Scruffy


Last I check Scruffy was a janitor not a dog. :P

But good first chapter to a promising series. I can't wait to see whats next and when my character comes in. :mrgreen:
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Postby MothraRocks » Sun May 20, 2012 4:51 pm

Thanks, again, glad you liked it. Everyone seems to have made cold characters...Should fit perfectly :D
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Postby Flygon King » Sun May 20, 2012 6:03 pm

Very, very nice... So this is an AU where Koishi replaces Korra... This could prove intresting...
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Postby MothraRocks » Sun May 20, 2012 6:19 pm

Flygon King wrote:Very, very nice... So this is an AU where Koishi replaces Korra... This could prove intresting...


Kind of. I liked the beginning, how it started off that way, so I figured "eh, why not?". While the story will bear some resemblence, I assure, plenty of creativity will be blended in as well.
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Postby King Caesar » Mon May 21, 2012 4:17 am

Great start. :) I like where this is going.
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Postby Gojira21 » Mon May 21, 2012 7:04 am

Hmmmm...interesting. I liked it lol good job!
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Postby MothraRocks » Tue May 22, 2012 6:30 am

Wow, I'm so productive when I'm bored. If only I could focus my energy on studying instead...

Anyways, enjoy the new chapter.
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Postby Gojira21 » Tue May 22, 2012 6:53 am

haha i know that feeling MothraRocks lol but good chapter i liked it
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Postby GodzillavsZilla » Tue May 22, 2012 8:28 am

I like the new chapter, the fight was awesome :)
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Postby HayesAJones » Tue May 22, 2012 11:01 am

MothraRocks wrote:Wow, I'm so productive when I'm bored.

Aren't we all? I know I am.

Anywho, interesting start. I'm liking so far.
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue May 22, 2012 11:55 am

Nice fight Kioshi and Turana had and now they're getting chased by the fuzz. Good luck you two! :lol: But great chapter dude. :mrgreen:
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