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Postby Kiryu2012 » Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:31 am

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You're below me in oddness.

And you both are WAY below me in oddness.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:39 am

And im above all of you all in the coolness department 8-) oooohhh yeeeaaaa lol
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby HayesAJones » Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:45 pm

I think we're all odd to some extent or another.

Also, next chapter should be up tomorrow. Woulda' been today, but a personal matter popped up, so... sorry about that.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Kiryu2012 » Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:52 pm

HayesAJones wrote:I think we're all odd to some extent or another.

Also, next chapter should be up tomorrow. Woulda' been today, but a personal matter popped up, so... sorry about that.

I've already got several ideas for the next chap:

1.Queen Coil is tamed by Gwangi(as said before) and becomes part of the team.

2. Jake's avatar shows up, Gwangi falls in love with that avatar, Queen Coil is defeated, we meet Crumb.

3. An even greater threat shows up, and Queen Coil joins the gang.

Got more ideas, but they're for later chapters. ;)
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby SpanishBulldog63 » Fri Jun 15, 2012 8:01 pm

I can't wait to read the next chapter,Hayes.Can't wait to see who's gonna be introduced next
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby HayesAJones » Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:43 pm

Kiryu2012 wrote:I've already got several ideas for the next chap:

Got more ideas, but they're for later chapters. ;)

Huh. Didn't realize you were writing this story.

Be satisfied with this: Heavy Weapons Megalodon will be making an appearance. Dunno when or how, but he will.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby kikomia » Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:39 am

HayesAJones wrote:
Kiryu2012 wrote:I've already got several ideas for the next chap:

Got more ideas, but they're for later chapters. ;)

Huh. Didn't realize you were writing this story.


I have an idea:

1. Do what the skreeonk you want, I'm satisfied anyway.



Anyway, can't wait for the new chapter :D
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Postby MothraRocks » Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:43 am

2. Jake's avatar shows up, Gwangi falls in love with that avatar,


Dude. Stop. Please. :/


Anyways, I'm liking this story Hayes. Very good and filled with mystery.
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Postby Flygon King » Sat Jun 16, 2012 8:18 am

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2. Jake's avatar shows up, Gwangi falls in love with that avatar,


Dude. Stop. Please. :/


THANK YOU! I am sorry, but I think this forum as a whole has had enough Gwangi for a lifetime... Just, give the purple T-rex the rest and retirement he needs, Kiryu...
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby HayesAJones » Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:04 pm

Yep. I cut the very first fight in half.

That's just how the Hayesman rolls.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Kiryu2012 » Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:09 pm

I totally loled at Gwangi's attempt at being badass, and Nue becoming a cobra herself was interesting. Not surprisingly, I liked when Derpy showed up. And Kiko and agrul's here too? This could be fun.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:15 pm

Cmon Derpy, use the power of Friendship! C'MON!

Nice chapter, I Liked the little cliffhanger at the end, and the fight was quite good as well :)
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:23 pm

I have two words to sum up what I just read......... SKREEONK' EPIC! This was complete epicness, even the pony. It was so epic, I can't explain how. I bet me and my avatar will have an awesome intro. Can not wait for the next chapter.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Flygon King » Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:26 pm

Nue as a giant cobra: EPIC WIN!

Gwangi failing to be epic: EPIC WIN!

Deep Coil proving to be a Wakeup Call Boss: EPIC WIN!

All in all, EPIC WIN!
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Gojira21 » Sat Jun 16, 2012 7:16 pm

Great chapter Hayes! I loved the fight! Good job
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby SpanishBulldog63 » Sat Jun 16, 2012 11:30 pm

Another great chapter,Hayes.Really enjoyed the fight scene and looking forward to the next chapter,dude.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby kikomia » Sun Jun 17, 2012 1:35 am

That's me....YAY!

Nice chapter Hayes. I like Derpy. She is a cool pony.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby King Caesar » Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:23 am

Nue becomes a giant serpent, Derpy saves Nue, and Gwangi beats down Queen Coil. How do I contribute to the fight? I fire a few bullets and stand there looking pretty. Real cute, Hayes. Better not happen again, or else! :P
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby HayesAJones » Mon Jun 18, 2012 7:54 pm

That wasn't even you. That was Mac.

But you can be bait next chapter!
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Kiryu2012 » Fri Jun 29, 2012 4:42 pm

I'm wondering if perhaps our gang ends up on the moon, and could still survive since it's all in the Internet after all. Could we expect the gang to be in odd places like the ocean, or Tartarus?
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